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mein waqt nahi jo badal jaoongi -
19th May 2003, 07:36 PM
koi mausam ho tere rang mein rang jaoongi
mein koi waqt nahi jo badal jaoongi..... maine maana tu ghata hai per itna na baras mein bhi dariya hoon kinare pe ubal jaoongi mein koi waqt nahi jo badal jaoongi.... mein tere haath ki rekha hoon mujhe gaur se padh kam hui teri muhabbat to mit hi jaoongi mein koi waqt nahi jo badal jaoongi.... roz aaya na karo usne kaha hai rashid aaj sadko pe bhatak lu waha kal jaoongi mein koi waqt nahi jo badal jaoongi........... |
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29th May 2003, 11:35 PM
pari,
bahot achhi nazam .........khaas kar yah...... roz aaya na karo usne kaha hai rashid aaj sadko pe bhatak lu waha kal jaoongi mein koi waqt nahi jo badal jaoongi........... ------------ |
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hi -
2nd June 2003, 06:52 PM
hello pari ji,
Phir se aapne bahut hi umda gazal likhi hai...kya kehna hai aapki shayri ka.....ye lines to behad khoobsura hai.. maine maana tu ghata hai per itna na baras mein bhi dariya hoon kinare pe ubal jaoongi aise hi likhte rahiye,,.... manisha |
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2nd June 2003, 08:19 PM
Hello Pari,
Bhaut hi accha likha hai, Ummid hai aage bhi achhi shayari padne ko milegi Jindadil |
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Re: mein waqt nahi jo badal jaoongi -
3rd June 2003, 06:37 AM
wah pari ji, hamare paas to tareef ke liye bhi lafz nahin.
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hi -
4th June 2003, 02:00 AM
wah pari ji,
bahut achha likha hai aapne....mujhe bahut pasand aaya..........keep up the work..... animesh. |
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