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koshisheN harchaNd kiiN is dil ko behlaayaa bahut - 28th September 2002, 05:46 AM

koshisheN harchaNd kiiN is dil ko behlaayaa bahut
bhuulnaa chahaa magar vo shaKhs yaad aayaa bahut

kar ke aaNkheN baNd zaalim vaar to kartaa gayaa
dekh kar lekin mere zakhmoN ko ghabraayaa bahut

vo garebaaN chaak se khush maiN jamaal-e-husn se
chain mainey paa liyaa, us ko qaraar aayaa bahut

qaafilaa khushbuu kaa guzraa jab hamaarey shahr se
uss gulbadan kii aarzuu ne ham ko taDpaayaa bahut

theeN kabhii nazaroN meiN mere, aaj par yeh haal hai
ik jhalak ke waaste tuu ney hai tarsaayaa bahut

ishq meiN "maikasH jee" aakhiir jaan se jaate rahe
kya kaheN ziddii baDe the humne samjhaayaa bahut


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8th October 2002, 08:25 PM

Maikash jee salam

i personally want to thank u for coming back to these forums yes i know u may not be familiar with the new users as u said but i think it wud not be fair not to give these newcomers and the people who don't know u ,a chance to know such a great talent like urself i request to u please keep coming here

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9th October 2002, 08:36 AM

Ashk sahab

namaste

bhai aapne ye to kaha hi nahiiN ke aapko ghazal kaisi lagi.....?

taariif na sahi tanqiid se hi nawaaz dete miyaaN.....

ba-har-haal......in reply to your comments i must say this site is like a home to me so rest assured i'm not going anywhere.....if i don't post anything here i'll always be available in "aapki shayri" forum.......and this site will always be my first preferance whenever i will post anything on the web.....and its my pleasure to come back to these forums.....and its MY priviledge to get to know great fans of urdu poetry like urself

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12th October 2002, 06:52 AM

Maikash ji tasleemaat

kaise hain aap ?


badi umda ghazal likhi hai aapne hamesha ki tarah
soz-o-gam ko lafzon mein pirone ke to maahir hain aap

ab to aapse milne ko aur bekali ho rahi hai
i'm a great fan of your poetry and i agree with ashk sahab that its a priviledge to be able to read to your poetry

aapki agli ghazal ka intezaar rahega

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12th October 2002, 02:08 PM

sorry Maikash ji

gazal bohat hi pasand aayi kasam se bohat hi achchi likhi hai
please excuse my ignorant behaviour


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13th October 2002, 09:28 AM

qamar sahab

tasleem

janaab pehle to ghazal pe apni pasaNd ki mohar lagaane ke liye mera shukriya kabuul kijiye.......aur duusre aapse guzaarish hai ke ashk miyaaN ki baatoN pe mat jaaiye......maiN ek maa'mooli sa shayar huuN, har kisi ki tarah maiN bhi yahaN apne dil ke jazbaatoN ko zubaan dene ki koshish karta huuN iss se ziyada kuch nahiiN.....



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13th October 2002, 09:30 AM

ashk sahab


daad ka shukriya.....!!


aadaab
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