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Khuda hai mujh mein - 16th April 2005, 12:30 PM

Aag hai,paani hai, mitti hai,hawa hai mujh mein,
aur fir maan na padta hai ki khuda hai mujh mein,

ab to le de ke wohi shaks bacha hai mujh mein,
mujhko mujh se juda kar ke jo chipa hai mujh mein,

aaina,yeh to batata hai ki mein kya hoon,
lekin aaina is pe hai khaamosh ki kya hai mujh mein.

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16th April 2005, 12:33 PM

Aag hai,paani hai, mitti hai,hawa hai mujh mein,
aur fir maan na padta hai ki khuda hai mujh mein,

ab to le de ke wohi shaks bacha hai mujh mein,
mujhko mujh se juda kar ke jo chipa hai mujh mein,

aaina,yeh to batata hai ki mein kya hoon,
lekin aaina is pe hai khaamosh ki kya hai mujh mein.

WaaaaH

Behad khoobsurat kalaam.. meri daad kubool kijiyega...


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Pulkit - 16th April 2005, 12:36 PM

Aapki daad to kabool karenge hee,
kash kuch aur bhi diya hota.

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16th April 2005, 12:50 PM

Hmmmmmmm......Welll Daad ke alaava ek Saath hi hai jo hum aapko de sakte hain...Likhti Rahiyega...Saath banaaye rakhne ki koshish rahegi...


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Re: Khuda hai mujh mein - 16th April 2005, 12:54 PM

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aaina,yeh to batata hai ki mein kya hoon,
lekin aaina is pe hai khaamosh ki kya hai mujh mein.

Lailaa...
laila ji bohat khoob ...

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16th April 2005, 12:59 PM

Thanks for encouraging me sachha pyaar,
yeh sacha pyar kya hota hai?
pyaar to bas hota hai ya fir nahi hota....

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Re: Khuda hai mujh mein - 16th April 2005, 01:07 PM

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Aag hai,paani hai, mitti hai,hawa hai mujh mein,
aur fir maan na padta hai ki khuda hai mujh mein,

ab to le de ke wohi shaks bacha hai mujh mein,
mujhko mujh se juda kar ke jo chipa hai mujh mein,

aaina,yeh to batata hai ki mein kya hoon,
lekin aaina is pe hai khaamosh ki kya hai mujh mein.

Lailaa...
Acha Likha Hai ApNe LaiLaa Ji:


Arz Kia Hai

LaiLaa Ko MaJNu Ka SmS Nahi AYa... LaiLaa Ne 3 DiN KhaNa Nahi KhaYa...
LaiLaa MaRNe WaLi Thi. MaJNu Ke PYaaR MaiN. .. AuR MaJNu BeTa Tha... SmS FRee HoNe Ke InTeZaR MaiN...


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16th April 2005, 01:12 PM

hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.......
hahahahahahaha.....

Beesveen sadi kii Lailaa hai yeh,
yun hi nahi mar jaayegi,
majnu ki to yahaan per kami nahi,
tu nahi aur sahi,
aur nahi aur sahi,
Tu mera majnu,
mein teri...

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16th April 2005, 01:19 PM

Quote:
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hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.......
hahahahahahaha.....

Beesveen sadi kii Lailaa hai yeh,
yun hi nahi mar jaayegi,
majnu ki to yahaan per kami nahi,
tu nahi aur sahi,
aur nahi aur sahi,
Tu mera majnu,
mein teri...

Lailaa...
DeeWanoN Ka JaShaN MaNaiN

SheHaR Ke HaR MajNu Ko BuLaiN

JiTNa BaDa DeeWaNa Tha LaiLaa Ka

KhuD Se Bhi Woh BeGaaNa Ho GiYa....


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16th April 2005, 01:34 PM

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Thanks for encouraging me sachha pyaar,
yeh sacha pyar kya hota hai?
pyaar to bas hota hai ya fir nahi hota....

Lailaa...
jaise sab insaan hai ,.... par sabbke naam alag hai.. pyar bhi hai .. bas humne sabke pyar maiN sacchi dikhti hai... kyuNki jab jhoot mil jaye to wo pyar nahi ... bas isi liye ise ek paribhasha humne de di jo humeN lagi... galat lagi ho aapko to... bas muafi kijiye ...

aapka apna

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sachha pyaar - 16th April 2005, 01:38 PM

Aji janaab,
hum to aapko aazma rahe the,
ki aap bura maante hain ki nahi,
kitne tangdil hain aap,magar aisa kuch nahi hua,
aap wakai sachha pyaar hain.
Khushi hui aapko jaankar.
Ab aapko aage be-dhadak likha karenge.

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