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ishq - 13th May 2003, 06:46 PM

aakhe khul ho th chera tumhara
aakhe band ho to chera tumhara
ab maut bhi aa jaye to koi gam nahi
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gr8 doing - 13th May 2003, 06:50 PM

Alim ji ,
Kam likha hai per bahut gehrai se likha hai.......Aapki agli
shayri ka besabri se intazaar rahega......
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hi - 13th May 2003, 06:54 PM

hi alim

bhut kam lafzoonmeinaap ne bhut hi piyaara likha hai

keep on writing
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awesome... - 13th May 2003, 09:36 PM

Amil...
what a poem..dil ko choo ghayi...awesome..buhat acha hai keep it up..!!! Gooodddd Luckk
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