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Love Mohabat Chor Dee Hum Nay......must Read It - 4th September 2008, 11:18 AM

Yeh tum sy kah dia kis nay

Kay TUM bin rah nahin saktay

Yeh dukh hum sah nahin saktay

NAHIN JANA.........

Galat fahmi hui tum ko

Haan itna maan letay hein

Kay tum bin hum bohot roay

Kae raaton ko na soaay

Magr afsos hai jana

Kay ab k tum jo loto gay

Humein tabdeel paao gay

Bohot mayoos ho gay tum

Agar tum poochna chaho

K aisa kion kia hum nay

Tu sun lo gor say pyaray

Purani ek rewayat tung aa Kur

Tor dee hum nay

"MOHABAT CHOR DEE HUM NAY"

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5th September 2008, 02:03 PM

waah kyak huub ehsaas hai nazm me.n! daad haazir hai!

par kya main jaan sakta huu.n ki, yeh aap ki likhi huii hai ya aap kisii ka likha huaa share kar rahii hai.n? agar aap share kar rahii hai.n to bhi koii baat nahii.n.. lekin aap ki shayri sec. par other's poetry allow nahii.n hai

yuu.n hi likhati rahe.n, tc

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5th September 2008, 02:05 PM

wah.....kaya khoob ahsaas haiN, accha laga aapko padna....

SDC par aapka tah-e-dil se suwagat hai


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My Own Poetry - 5th September 2008, 08:35 PM

Mr Mayank This Is My Own Poetry.pasand Krnay Ka Shukria
   
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7th September 2008, 07:03 PM

bahut bahut bahut hi achchi shayri,daad,share karte rahen.


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12th September 2008, 12:44 AM

nice sharing .........................


Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
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13th January 2009, 05:54 AM

very pure very touching

plz send me ur poem's link to read
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waah - 25th January 2009, 12:46 AM

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Yeh tum sy kah dia kis nay


Kay TUM bin rah nahin saktay

Yeh dukh hum sah nahin saktay

NAHIN JANA.........

Galat fahmi hui tum ko

Haan itna maan letay hein

Kay tum bin hum bohot roay

Kae raaton ko na soaay

Magr afsos hai jana

Kay ab k tum jo loto gay

Humein tabdeel paao gay

Bohot mayoos ho gay tum

Agar tum poochna chaho

K aisa kion kia hum nay

Tu sun lo gor say pyaray

Purani ek rewayat tung aa Kur

Tor dee hum nay


"MOHABAT CHOR DEE HUM NAY"

bhai .( naam nahi likhon ga ) kiyo'n ke zani ka matab urdu loughat me bahot ghalat hai ,


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nazm bahot achi aor kam lafzo'n me poori baat kahti nazar aaei , yehi saleeqa nzm ko khoobsurti ata kar raha hai , aor har misra apne aane wale dusrey misrey ko pad>hne par majboor karta huwa tezi par uksa raha hai , yani eak tasalsul haijo nazm ke khatm hone tak sahr ki si kafiyet rakhta hai , meri janib se dher sari mubarak baad

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