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Bebasi ka chehra - 8th August 2013, 01:22 AM

Aaj bebasi ka ajab sa chehra dekha hai,
Palko pe humne yado ka pehra dekha hai.
Apne hi gham me bandha sehma hua,
Aaj fir usko kuch dara dara dekha hai.

Kasme wade tod kar bekhauf aate hue,
Patjhad me aaj kuch pedo pe hara dekha hai.

Haath chhuda kar mujhse door jane wale,
Paani humne bhi teri palko pe bhara dekha hai.

Jab bhi gham-e-yaar ko awaz di humne,
Waqt ko bhi usi lamhe pe thehra dekha hai.

Nahi dekha to bus use hasta nai dekha,
Jab bhi mila humse use sehma dara dekha hai.

Wo abhi se dard ki apne duhaiya hai dete,
Jinki baaho me khudko humne roj mara dekha hai.


Zid uski mera wazood hi mita dene ki,
aur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki.
   
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8th August 2013, 11:26 AM

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Aaj bebasi ka ajab sa chehra dekha hai,
Palko pe humne yado ka pehra dekha hai.
Apne hi gham me bandha sehma hua,
Aaj fir usko kuch dara dara dekha hai.

Kasme wade tod kar bekhauf aate hue,
Patjhad me aaj kuch pedo pe hara dekha hai.

Haath chhuda kar mujhse door jane wale,
Paani humne bhi teri palko pe bhara dekha hai.

Jab bhi gham-e-yaar ko awaz di humne,
Waqt ko bhi usi lamhe pe thehra dekha hai.

Nahi dekha to bus use hasta nai dekha,
Jab bhi mila humse use sehma dara dekha hai.

Wo abhi se dard ki apne duhaiya hai dete,
Jinki baaho me khudko humne roj mara dekha hai.
Bhoot hi pyaara likha hai Aapne..


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8th August 2013, 11:43 PM

ummdah...................... bahot hi pyaari lines hain,

Haath chhuda kar mujhse door jane wale,
Paani humne bhi teri palko pe bhara dekha hai.


likhte rahiye....................

Shaad....


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13th August 2013, 04:46 AM

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Bhoot hi pyaara likha hai Aapne..
bahut bahut shukriya, aapne padhi aapko pasand aai wahi bahut hai


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13th August 2013, 04:47 AM

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ummdah...................... bahot hi pyaari lines hain,

Haath chhuda kar mujhse door jane wale,
Paani humne bhi teri palko pe bhara dekha hai.


likhte rahiye....................

Shaad....
dil khush hai aapki aamad ko pakar, aapne padhi aur aapko pasand aai ye to khud apne aap me ek badi baat hai
bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzai ka


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13th August 2013, 02:43 PM

Bahot achhe !!
Aapko padh kar achha laga... Aage bhi likhte rahiye,
keep sharing your thoughts...


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4th September 2013, 02:37 AM

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Bahot achhe !!
Aapko padh kar achha laga... Aage bhi likhte rahiye,
keep sharing your thoughts...
Shuakriya sahab aapne aamad ki aur apne waqt dia
bahut bahut shukriya


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4th September 2013, 08:29 PM

nice lines and feelings.........



एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था

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7th September 2013, 09:24 PM

Waah waah ---- Bahaut hi khoob Chanderp ji -----fiqr aur ehsaas ki gehraayee dekhte hi banti hai
   
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28th June 2014, 11:51 PM

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Aaj bebasi ka ajab sa chehra dekha hai,
Palko pe humne yado ka pehra dekha hai.
Apne hi gham me bandha sehma hua,
Aaj fir usko kuch dara dara dekha hai.

Kasme wade tod kar bekhauf aate hue,
Patjhad me aaj kuch pedo pe hara dekha hai.

Haath chhuda kar mujhse door jane wale,
Paani humne bhi teri palko pe bhara dekha hai.

Jab bhi gham-e-yaar ko awaz di humne,
Waqt ko bhi usi lamhe pe thehra dekha hai.

Nahi dekha to bus use hasta nai dekha,
Jab bhi mila humse use sehma dara dekha hai.

Wo abhi se dard ki apne duhaiya hai dete,
Jinki baaho me khudko humne roj mara dekha hai.

Wah wah bohat khoob chander ji!




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Wah wah bohat khoob chander ji!

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Waah waah ---- Bahaut hi khoob Chanderp ji -----fiqr aur ehsaas ki gehraayee dekhte hi banti hai

Bahut bahut shukriya Zarraa ji aapka. Bus sirf ehsaas hi bache hai ab


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nice lines and feelings.........

Aru ji bahut hi shukriya aapka ki aapko pasand aai


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Waah waah Bahot Khub...............Very Nice Line..................!!!!
   
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Waah waah Bahot Khub...............Very Nice Line..................!!!!
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