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Love ~Suno Acha Nahin Lagta~ - 20th July 2004, 12:27 AM

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Ke Koi Dosra Dekhay
Tumhari Sharbati Aankhen
Lab-o-Rukhsaar Aur Pakein
Siyah Lambi Ghanee Zulfein
Seharay Dosra Koi
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Kare Jab Tazkara Koi
Kare Jab Tabsara Koi
Tumhari Zaat Ko Khoojay
Tumhari Baat Ko Soochay
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Tumhari Muskurahat Per
Hazaroon Loag Martay Hoon
Tumhari Aik Aahat Par
Hazaroon Dil Dharaktay Hoon
Kise Ka Tum Pe Yuun Marna
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Hawa Guzray Tumhain Choo Kar
Na Hoga Zabt Yeh Mujhse
Karey Gustakhi Tumse
Tumhari Zulfein Bikhar Jayen
Tumharay Lams Pe Jayen
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Ke Tum Ko Phool Bhi Dekhain
Tumhare Paas Se Mehkein
Ya Chanda Ki Guzarish Hoo
Ke Apni Roshni Bakhshoon
Rukh-e-Jana Koi Dekhay
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta


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20th July 2004, 11:27 AM

Sohail saheb

Bahut achha likha hai aapne....kis sher ki daad den..har sher-har misra lajawaab hai...ek behtareen nazm ke liye daad kubool kijiye..

itne achhe kalaam ko padhna achha lagta hai


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Thumbs up adaab - 21st July 2004, 07:53 PM

assalamu aly kum wrbt

aaapnay to baath karnay say pehlay hee baath khatam karr dee
hum aapki daad tabhe kabool karengay jab aap hume, Sohail kahengay
kya main aapko uutna budda laghta hoo
aur mujhe utna bhe na chadayee..........
yeh to jazbaath hain jo lafz bann karr nikal padtay hain..lafz bann kar
allahfeez
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21st July 2004, 08:51 PM

Quote:
Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Hawa Guzray Tumhain Choo Kar
Na Hoga Zabt Yeh Mujhse
Karey Gustakhi Tumse
Tumhari Zulfein Bikhar Jayen
Tumharay Lams Pe Jayen
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Ke Tum Ko Phool Bhi Dekhain
Tumhare Paas Se Mehkein
Ya Chanda Ki Guzarish Hoo
Ke Apni Roshni Bakhshoon
Rukh-e-Jana Koi Dekhay
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta
Bahut khoob Sohail ji..

Itna pyar ki kya kahein ab..

Well, there's a popular saying..

"If there is no Jealousy in Love, Then there's no Love"

Aise hi mehfil sajaate rahiye

Khush rahiye

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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24th July 2004, 03:46 PM

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originally posted by sohail:
assalamu aly kum wrbt

aaapnay to baath karnay say pehlay hee baath khatam karr dee
hum aapki daad tabhe kabool karengay jab aap hume, Sohail kahengay
kya main aapko uutna budda laghta hoo
aur mujhe utna bhe na chadayee..........
yeh to jazbaath hain jo lafz bann karr nikal padtay hain..lafz bann kar
allahfeez
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Sohail ji,

Chaliye hamne aapki baat kubool ki..ab to theek hain na?...ab to aap hamari daad kubool kijiye...

aap bilkul bhi boodhe nahi.n lagte..aur phir ham to dua karenge ki aap sada yoonhi jawaan rahe.n..waise bhi shayar hamesha jawaan hi rahta hai.. vo kabhi boodha nahi.n hota..theek hai na..

rahi baat jazbbato.n ke lafz ban kar bahar nikalne ki to yah ek bahut badi kala hai...yah har kisike bas ka kaam nahi.n hai..apne jazbaato.n ko jis khoobsoorati ke sath aapne is nazm me dhala hai vo waqai qabil-e-tareef hai..

shayad isi liye baare me kisi ne kaha hai ki:

shayri kya hai dilijazbaat ka izhaar hai
dil agar bekar hai to shayri bekar hai.


to ek achhe dil ke achhe jazbaato,n ko ek achhi nazm me dhalane ke liye daad kubool kijiyega..


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agree - 27th July 2004, 11:07 PM

hi kavish jii
thanx allot ,am accpeting ur words n honour but things wont work unless u call me by ma name
jst Sohail
no jii's nor sahab's

as if now nothing to write more but..........

some other time promise
allahfeez


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Thumbs up hii priya - 27th July 2004, 11:19 PM

hii priya
thanx for those lovely praisess
point noted
"If there is no Jealousy in Love, Then there's no Love


sure i'll be in touch as well
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HI - 28th August 2005, 07:58 PM

smack_07078 Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Ke Koi Dosra Dekhay
Tumhari Sharbati Aankhen
Lab-o-Rukhsaar Aur Pakein
Siyah Lambi Ghanee Zulfein
Seharay Dosra Koi
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Kare Jab Tazkara Koi
Kare Jab Tabsara Koi
Tumhari Zaat Ko Khoojay
Tumhari Baat Ko Soochay
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Tumhari Muskurahat Per
Hazaroon Loag Martay Hoon
Tumhari Aik Aahat Par
Hazaroon Dil Dharaktay Hoon


Kise Ka Tum Pe Yuun Marna
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Hawa Guzray Tumhain Choo Kar
Na Hoga Zabt Yeh Mujhse
Karey Gustakhi Tumse
Tumhari Zulfein Bikhar Jayen
Tumharay Lams Pe Jayen
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Ke Tum Ko Phool Bhi Dekhain
Tumhare Paas Se Mehkein
Ya Chanda Ki Guzarish Hoo
Ke Apni Roshni Bakhshoon
Rukh-e-Jana Koi Dekhay
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta





HI

MUJHE PASAND HAI JAB KOOI ...................

...............UNKO JAB KOOI ACHCHA KEHTA HAI
BADE PYAAR SE DEKHTA HIN REHTA HAI
...............DUR JAANE PAR BHI MOOD MOOD KE DEKHTA HAI
JAB WO JEANS PANT OR T SHIRT PEHNTE HAI
...............MAINE UNKO DEKH BEHAKK SI JAATI HOON
JAB LADKIYAANA UNKO DEKH MUSKAATI HAI
..........MERA PYAAR OR BHI BADH SAA JAATA HAI


PER... SACH MUJHE BHI ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
...........JAB WO LADKIYOUNO KO DEKHTE HAIN
................UNKO DEKH KE MUSKURAATE HAIN
UNKO MUD MUD KE DEKHTE HAIN
.................SACH BILKUL ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
UNKI JEANS BAND KARWAA DI HAI
................FORMAL PEHANKAR FORMAL SE REHTE HAIN
ABB NAHI HUM JHGDAA KARTE HAIN................

HAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH

BYE TC ========APNE SHABDOO SE KUTCH KEHNA CHAAH RAHI THI JO SAMJH PAAYE TOH JAROOR BAATANA DABE SHABDOO MAINE MAIN KYA KEH GAYI ..........




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Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor,
Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door.

Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay
Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay

Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye
Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae





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thanx - 28th August 2005, 10:40 PM

acche koshish ki aapnay
waqt nahee abhee aapkay sawaal ka lamba jawab lekhnay...
agar zindagi rahee to zaroor jald he jawab dunga

bye tc

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hi - 28th August 2005, 10:50 PM

smack_07078 acche koshish ki aapnay
waqt nahee abhee aapkay sawaal ka lamba jawab lekhnay...
agar zindagi rahee to zaroor jald he jawab dunga

bye tc

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its okkkkk..........aap aisa kyoun keh gaye ki agar jindgi rahi toh =====''


rehne dijiye hum khud aapko bata detain hai ki ...jisko hum pyaar karte hain uss pe itna jaada paabnadi ki.... saans leni mushkil ho jaaye ...........akasar aaj kal ke bachche aisa karte hain ......."

bahut jaada pyaar karta hoon tumse... tum kisi ko dekh bhi lo ,,ya kooi tumko dekh bhi le mujhe pasand nahi"

.........ye bilkul galat hai ......aapki dost sunder hain issliye log usse dekhte hain .......khush rahiyye ki wo iss kabilll hai ........ki log usse dekhte reh jaate hain ................or wo hiraa aapke paas hai ........khush rahiye ......bye tc .........




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Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor,
Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door.

Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay
Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay

Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye
Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae





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catch me on - 28th August 2005, 11:13 PM

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30th August 2005, 01:09 PM

Aslam o alakum
SUNO ACHA NAHI LAGTA bohat hi achi poem post ki hia aap nay .... aur ye jo aap ki feelings hain mohabat ke bohat kareeb hain .... jab aap ko koi acha lagay too bilkul aisa hi hota hia jo kuch aap nay poem main beyan kia hia ...


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thanx - 30th August 2005, 09:59 PM

w/salam
i was jst trying to memorise my old days, whn i used to love with love ....
wht eva but this is good in words nothing in reality...
thanx
keep in touch bye tc
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Question What is love ? - 4th September 2005, 04:05 PM

What's love?


When you are together with that special someone, you pretend to ignore
that person. But when that special someone is not around, you might look around
to find them.
At that moment, you are in love.



Although there is someone else who always makes you laugh,
your eyes and attention might go only to that special someone.
Then, you are in love.


Although that special someone was supposed to have called you long back,
to let you know of their safe arrival,
your phone is quiet.
You are desperately waiting for the call!
At that moment, you are in love.




If you are much more excited for one short e-mail from
that special someone than other many long e-mails,
you are in love.



When you find yourself as one who cannot erase all the
emails or SMS messages in your phone because of one message
from that special someone, you are in love.



When you get a couple of free movie tickets, you would
not hesitate to think of that special someone.
Then, you are in love.


You keep telling yourself, "that special someone is just a friend",but
you realize that you can not avoid that person's special attraction. At that
moment, you are in love.


While you are reading this mail, if someone
appears in your mind,
then u are in love with that person...)


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Wink comment - 4th September 2005, 04:07 PM

the above poemstory is not mind but some person had emailed me...thought to share with u people . hope u all like it...
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5th September 2005, 02:17 PM

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Kare Jab Tazkara Koi
Kare Jab Tabsara Koi
Tumhari Zaat Ko Khoojay
Tumhari Baat Ko Soochay
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Tumhari Muskurahat Per
Hazaroon Loag Martay Hoon
Tumhari Aik Aahat Par
Hazaroon Dil Dharaktay Hoon
Kise Ka Tum Pe Yuun Marna
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta



Waah saahab waah..................yooN laga kisi ne hamara hi dil khol kar rakh diya ho.....

Kasam se ......poori ki poori rachna......dil me utar gayi...

Kya kareiN saahab ...Insaan hai....so...insecurity and love donoN hi ek saath chalte haiN...lol

ek song ka antra yaad aaya hai...Rajkumaar film se hai.

Mai keise Khuda haafiz keh dooN...mujhko to kisi ka..yakeen nahi
Mai keise khuda haafiz keh dooN...mujhoko to kisi ka...yakeen nahi
Chhup jaao hamaari baahoN me...Bhagwaan ki niyat theek nahi..
..

And this forword mail of your's too...impressed me.


You keep telling yourself, "that special someone is just a friend",but
you realize that you can not avoid that person's special attraction. At that
moment, you are in love.


While you are reading this mail, if someone
appears in your mind,
then u are in love with that person...)


Thanks for shareing it.

Chaand


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ab kya kahee - 8th September 2005, 01:06 AM

shukriya janab chand !
hum to bus isse kosshish main the ki dard bayan kare, per pata nahee kaise woh humare lafz bayan ho gaye
thanx once again
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Red face thts cool one - 18th September 2005, 12:32 AM

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kaha hu ? - 3rd November 2005, 04:39 PM

hello friends didnt seen a reply for long time from u all guys
jago jago nescafe piyo!


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10th November 2005, 09:55 PM

smack_07078 What's love?


When you are together with that special someone, you pretend to ignore
that person. But when that special someone is not around, you might look around
to find them.
At that moment, you are in love.



Although there is someone else who always makes you laugh,
your eyes and attention might go only to that special someone.
Then, you are in love.


Although that special someone was supposed to have called you long back,
to let you know of their safe arrival,
your phone is quiet.
You are desperately waiting for the call!
At that moment, you are in love.




If you are much more excited for one short e-mail from
that special someone than other many long e-mails,
you are in love.



When you find yourself as one who cannot erase all the
emails or SMS messages in your phone because of one message
from that special someone, you are in love.



When you get a couple of free movie tickets, you would
not hesitate to think of that special someone.
Then, you are in love.


You keep telling yourself, "that special someone is just a friend",but
you realize that you can not avoid that person's special attraction. At that
moment, you are in love.


While you are reading this mail, if someone
appears in your mind,
then u are in love with that person...)



[c]very true ...............................[/b]







aab kutch naya bhi toh likho
ki........
kooi kitna coffe piye
or.........
raatoon ko jaaga kare
or.........
bas ek hin movie dekha kare.....................hah hah a...just kidding




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Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor,
Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door.

Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay
Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay

Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye
Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae





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11th November 2005, 10:41 PM

salaam,accha likkha hai sohail....yuhin likhte raho...take care....allahhafiz


"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
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Thumbs up ASAK - 12th November 2005, 12:34 AM

Assalamu aly kum wrbt !
pehle to humaree taraf say belete EId mubarak!

shukriya bohatt bohatt ki aap sabhee dost log humari ek choti si kalam ko eetni ezzatt aur pasand kiya!
meri paas lafz nahi kiss tarha say main-e apna dard aap sabhee kay saath sher kiya.

aur isse dosti kay qhateer 2 line bolna chahata hu :


Karke dosti, hum doston ko nahi bhulate
Zindagi bhar hum dosti hain nibhate
Na tumhe ho batwaare ka ehsaas....
Isliye ab hum naye dost nahi banate..




allahfeez
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Salam - 24th November 2005, 05:05 PM

thank u so much Farhana jii
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27th November 2005, 07:11 PM

smack_07078 Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Ke Koi Dosra Dekhay
Tumhari Sharbati Aankhen
Lab-o-Rukhsaar Aur Pakein
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Kare Jab Tazkara Koi
Kare Jab Tabsara Koi
Tumhari Zaat Ko Khoojay
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Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

Suno Acha Nahin Lagta
Tumhari Muskurahat Per
Hazaroon Loag Martay Hoon
Tumhari Aik Aahat Par
Hazaroon Dil Dharaktay Hoon


Kise Ka Tum Pe Yuun Marna
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta

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Hawa Guzray Tumhain Choo Kar
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Ke Apni Roshni Bakhshoon
Rukh-e-Jana Koi Dekhay
Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta



baar baar aapke poem ko padhna achcha lagta hai .............



pehle jab reply di thi tab wo keval aapke poem ko........... poem ke bhaav ko reply di thi ....................




par ye bhi sach hai ki aapke iss poem main bas pyaar hin pyaar hai kisi ke liye .................or isse baar baar padhna achcha lagta hai .....................kutch poem ko jitna padho wo or bhi achcha lagta jaata hai ..........

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Cool thts cho chweet - 28th November 2005, 06:43 PM

Salam Chandsi jii
my gooodness jab lekha tha to dard aur pooranay ghav ko zinda karr likha tha...pata nahi mere aanso lahu bann karr is kadar bayaan kardayngay!
humari to bus yahi koshish thee aap sab isse pade aur samjhe jo ki mujhe aaj laga!
thanx once more
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3rd December 2005, 11:00 AM

Salam Chandsi jii
my gooodness jab lekha tha to dard aur pooranay ghav ko zinda karr likha tha...pata nahi mere aanso lahu bann karr is kadar bayaan kardayngay!
humari to bus yahi koshish thee aap sab isse pade aur samjhe jo ki mujhe aaj laga!
thanx once more
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hi.............

but bachche mujhe toh iss poem main bas pyaar hin pyaar dikha ...............................

hadd se jyaada pyaar.....................

aapne aasoon kyoun bahaaye .....................aapki saathi jo bhi hai wo toh khud ko behad lucky feel kar rahi hogi ......................


bye ......................likhte rahiye......... khush rahiy.....................





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Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay
Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay

Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye
Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae





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Post woh ! - 3rd December 2005, 11:47 AM

asak!

shahyad lucky ho.per not ny more now~ as my bad luck is very good

am no more in love!


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3rd December 2005, 01:53 PM

asak!

shahyad lucky ho.per not ny more now~ as my bad luck is very good

am no more in love!




i am sorry ..........
.........................kya kahoon main aab .............!!!



.likhte rahiye ...........aise hin pyaare pyaare poemssssssssss...............

jab kabhi iss panne ko dobaara padhoge kisi or mod pe tab jab saari khushiyaan hogi saath maine ..............tab bhi ye poem aapko utni hin achchi lagegi........... tab kya pata aap apne saathi se keh do ye toh maine tumhaare liye likha tha bade pyaar se ...taaki tum samjh sako ki maine tumse kitna pyar karta hoon ..........hai ki nahi ?..........kya pata shayad ..........

................but ye poem sach main pyaar se bhra huaa hai ....................
chaahe jab padho jiss mood main padho ...........pyaar hin pyaar hai .......................



bye tc ..............................

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koi gal nahi - 8th January 2006, 12:29 AM

Salam
hehehe koi baath nahi
hum to humesha say kuch na kuch lkihtay hain
bus aap sab ki duwa chaheye thi
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8th January 2006, 01:11 AM

nice v nice chandsi ji aap ny sach main bohat acha likha hay

main samajhti hoon aap ki feelings kia rahi hoongi us waqt

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nice simak ji v nice

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Talking xcuse me - 8th January 2006, 01:19 AM

Asak Zindagi jii
shayad aap galat address per Post karr rahi hain..
ye likhat to humari hain basically
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