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Post Changes are appreciated...... - 27th October 2004, 04:39 PM

Aaj hamara jindagi ne ye hal banaya hai.......


Kisi ki talash main ham dar dar bhatakte hai,
kahi koi mil jayega hame, yahi umeed rakhte hai,

jab raste main thak jate hai chalte chalte
to koi humsafar kab..? kahan...? kis roop...? main mil jayega
ye soch kar hum kuch duur aur chal lete hai......

magar kisike ke na mile par hum bahut mayuus
(disappointed) ho jate hai,

tabi ham sochte hai ke aap sab hame sath denge
aur yahi umeed ke sath hum fir se raha pe chal dete hai......

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28th October 2004, 03:24 AM

Hi.. pankaj_sundrani
Kya Haal Hain App Ke ?

Buhat Achay Dost .Achi Koshish Hai Kuch Hasil Karne Ki
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sorry - 8th November 2004, 11:42 PM

hi dost

how r u...? hope fine...!!

sorry for late reply as i was busy in my own life and didnt get time to visit shayri.com and to read your message.

anyway thanks for your encouragement.

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sorry - 8th November 2004, 11:49 PM

hi dost

how r u...? hope fine...!!

sorry for late reply as i was busy in my own life and didnt get time to visit shayri.com and to read your message.

anyway thanks for your encouragement.

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8th July 2010, 09:40 AM

Hi Shakil

Hope you are fine and still on shayri.com, please advise your recent post's....
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