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Ek Ajeeb Sa Din - 15th April 2005, 07:32 PM

Aaj ka din kutchh ajeeb sa nikla
Haalaanki savera bhi hua
Aur sooraj bhi nikla
Raaston par aamad-daraft bhi rahee
Aur bazaaron mein raunaq bhi……..

Dopahar apnee tanhayiyon ko samete
Sooraj ke jaane ka intezar kartee rahee
Jab tak ki shaam nein
apne hathon mein uska haath lekar
Andhere ki chadar uske upar daal dee
Aisa laga ki raat ho gayee

Raat bhi aayee
Aasman mein chaand sitaron ka
Nazara bhi tha
Thandak bhi
Lekin kahin par
Kutchh na hone ka ehsaas
Bhi raha

Kutchh qami si rahee
Saanson ko chalne ka
Intezar hi raha
Aur dil yuhin
Bewajah dhardkta raha………..

Shayad
Tumhaare yahan na hone ka
Ehsaas
Poore din ko kutchh
Ajeeb sa
Kar chala………….
   
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16th April 2005, 02:22 PM

Subah se dopahar,
dopahar se shaam
suraj ka zikar
shaam se raat
raat se fir chaand sitaaron ka zikar,

yun to raat ke baad fir subah hoti hai,
per yahaan to jaise armaano per oas padh gayi ho,

Likhte achha hain,per maayusiyaan achhi nahi
khush rahein...

Lailaa.....


Aapse bichadker kis kadar akelii hoon mein,
Lag raha hai yuun jaise gumshuda pahelii hoon mein.
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1st May 2005, 06:46 PM

Bahout khoubsoorat Kavita likhi hai aapne...Sem ji!

Younhi likhte rahiyega...

Amanush...


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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18th May 2005, 12:25 AM

semji

acha likha hai
ek din kya ek lamha aisa nahi jo guzra ho unke bin

sonal


~~ u never know where ur destiny takes u ~~


There would come a time when
we have to stop loving a person
not because that person started hating us .....
but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go.....
   
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18th May 2005, 07:45 PM

thenxx my friend

arz hai

Ankhon ki Saja tab tak hai, Jab tak Didar na ho,
Dil ki saza tab tak hai, Jab tak Yaar na Ho!
Yeh Zindagi bhi ek saza hai, Jab Tak Kisi se Pyar na ho!
   
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18th May 2005, 10:39 PM

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bohot hi achi aur somehow relaxing wali poem hai yeh apki!! behat pasand ayi!! keep it up!!!


Mat pad mere dil ki dastan mere chehere pe aye dost,
Ansowon ke shabd hai behe jayenge...
   
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