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jalaya na hota - 4th July 2005, 12:47 AM

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kaash bhool hi paate unhe,,,
yu zinda hi khud ko pal pal jalaya na hota...
unki hi yaado ko, unki hi berukhi ne,
door kahin dil me dafnaya na hota....

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Duniya Bhar Ki Khushiya Chahe Khhon Jaaye Tou Khhon Jaaye_Tum Khhona Nahin :)** - 4th July 2005, 12:52 AM

Dear Pallavi Jee, Hope You are well Ek Gane Ki Bol Yaad Aayi Hain...Ek Tu Na Mila_Sari Duniya Milein Bhi Tou Keya Hain~Lata Jee**I can Understand~Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Shukriya Daad Kuboul Kijiyega **Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care**...**God bless You.

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short n simple bt yet well expressed

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Re: jalaya na hota - 4th July 2005, 01:48 AM

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kaash bhool hi paate unhe,,,
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unki hi yaado ko, unki hi berukhi ne,
door kahin dil me dafnaya na hota....

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Re: jalaya na hota - 4th July 2005, 01:51 AM

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kaash bhool hi paate unhe,,,
yu zinda hi khud ko pal pal jalaya na hota...
unki hi yaado ko, unki hi berukhi ne,
door kahin dil me dafnaya na hota....

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Very nice...Pallu ji!

Younhi likhte rahiye...

Mere dard ko mehkaaya
teri yaadon ki khoushbou ne
Bahout roulayaa moujhe
tujhe bhool jane ki arzou ne...


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Re: Duniya Bhar Ki Khushiya Chahe Khhon Jaaye Tou Khhon Jaaye_Tum Khhona Nahin :)** - 4th July 2005, 12:26 PM

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Dear Pallavi Jee, Hope You are well Ek Gane Ki Bol Yaad Aayi Hain...Ek Tu Na Mila_Sari Duniya Milein Bhi Tou Keya Hain~Lata Jee**I can Understand~Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Shukriya Daad Kuboul Kijiyega **Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care**...**God bless You

Keep smilling.......**
dear shimul.jee... so nice to c u here zajbaat shayad mann me reh jaate aur aap log saath na hote .... thanx for sharing d feelings shimul jee apna khayal rakhiyega...
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4th July 2005, 12:30 PM

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Re: jalaya na hota - 4th July 2005, 03:35 PM

the first good thing abt this is.....itne kum shabdon mein hai....par phir bhi kitna complete hai.....I really like such 4 lines effective shers.....keep writing!

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4th July 2005, 03:42 PM

hello pallavi ji....very well written.....short n sweet
take care


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Dekhna chahta hun..
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4th July 2005, 06:41 PM

wah kya baat hai pallavi dd.i will only say that it was simple,short,cute and fabulous.bahut maza aaya ise padhne me.aur hi ahche lage aapke vichar bhi.bas yunhi likhti rahiye.


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Re: Re: jalaya na hota - 4th July 2005, 09:09 PM

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Re: Re: jalaya na hota - 4th July 2005, 09:11 PM

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Very nice...Pallu ji!

Younhi likhte rahiye...

Mere dard ko mehkaaya
teri yaadon ki khoushbou ne
Bahout roulayaa moujhe
tujhe bhool jane ki arzou ne...


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Re: Re: jalaya na hota - 4th July 2005, 09:13 PM

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the first good thing abt this is.....itne kum shabdon mein hai....par phir bhi kitna complete hai.....I really like such 4 lines effective shers.....keep writing!

always give a 100 watt smile
hehehhehehehe thanx shalini..lolzzz main 100 watt nahi 20000 watt se jaada hansti hu..lolzz sab hil jaate hain yaar...hehehehehe & thanx a lot dear for sharing this feeling of mine.. too gud to c u at this post..
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5th July 2005, 01:22 PM

kaash bhool hi paate unhe,,,
yu zinda hi khud ko pal pal jalaya na hota...

unki hi yaado ko, unki hi berukhi ne,
door kahin dil me dafnaya na hota....

WaaaaaaaaaaaaH!

Pallavi ji!

Itna gehraa, itna asardaar, itna khoobsurat.... mat likha kijiye.. Doesn't suit ur image...

Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai.. Aise hi likhti raho... TC


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hello pallavi ji....very well written.....short n sweet
take care
hehehehhe.. so sweet of u karthik.... thanx for liking it dear...
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