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13th March 2007, 09:29 AM
Aisee lazzat khalish-e-dil mein kahaan hoti hai
Reh gayaa seene me.n usakaa koii paikaa.N hogaa
--Momin
Dosto Namaskaar, Aadaab, Sat Sri Akaal…
Kaise hain aap sab? Raunak tau khuub hai yahaan…bahut se naye naye members dekh rahi hoon…bahut achhe!! Aapki mehfil mein aik nayaa kalaam meri jaanib se…nazar-e-inaayat kijieyegaa…tau arz hai…
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
zer-e-mizghaa.n = under the lashes
darmaan = treatment (ilaaj)
qurb-e-khizaa.N = in close proximity to spring
lazzat = enjoyment
pur khaar = full of thorns
dast-e-uduu = hands of the enemy
pashemaan = remorseful, regretful
dard-e-nihaa.n = pain that is hidden
tar = wet
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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13th March 2007, 07:26 PM
aadaab paras ji!!!!!!!!!
kaisi hain aap!!!!!
bahut din baad dikhaay din.bada gazab ka likha hai aapne,hamesha ki tarah.aapke andaaz-e-bayaan ke kya kehne.sach kahun to baht rashk hota hai kabhi kabhi(dont mind).kaash hum bhi aap jaisa likh paate.
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
yeh do ashaar to behad pasand aaye,dil ke bahut kareeb lage.aap yunhin umdaah likhti rahen aur hamesha khush rahen,yehi dua hai.
dil se di daad kabool kijiye.
tc,bye.
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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bhut khub -
14th March 2007, 11:04 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Parastaar
Aisee lazzat khalish-e-dil mein kahaan hoti hai
Reh gayaa seene me.n usakaa koii paikaa.N hogaa
--Momin
Dosto Namaskaar, Aadaab, Sat Sri Akaal…
Kaise hain aap sab? Raunak tau khuub hai yahaan…bahut se naye naye members dekh rahi hoon…bahut achhe!! Aapki mehfil mein aik nayaa kalaam meri jaanib se…nazar-e-inaayat kijieyegaa…tau arz hai…
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
zer-e-mizghaa.n = under the lashes
darmaan = treatment (ilaaj)
qurb-e-khizaa.N = in close proximity to spring
lazzat = enjoyment
pur khaar = full of thorns
dast-e-uduu = hands of the enemy
pashemaan = remorseful, regretful
dard-e-nihaa.n = pain that is hidden
tar = wet
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wah wah!paras ji kyaa baat hai kyaa andaaz hai....ek bar parna jo shuru kiyaa to pata hii nahi chala kab khatam ho gayii ye gazal.....makta bhut dil frabe bana hai waise to poori gazal hii kabile tareef hai......hamari dil se daad hazir hai.......yun hii likti rahiye........raj.........
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
wah wah wah wah wah wah !kitni dafa wah wah likhu.........
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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14th March 2007, 12:31 PM
paras ji namskaar,
bahot hi khoobsooraT andaaz ke sath ek baar fir kamaal kar diya paras ji aapne.. aapko paRHna hamesha achHa lagta hai mujhe..lafzoN ke sath khoob insaaf kiya hai aapne ..ash'aar bahot hi achHe lage ..ek behtrin ghazal ke liye dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenGa..paras ji aise hi liKhte raheN taaki hum bhi kuch siKh sakeN aap se ..
apna khayaal rakheN aur khusH raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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18th March 2007, 12:04 PM
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
Kyaa baat hai.... Doosra sher bahut kamaal hai...
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
Waaahh...bahut hi khoob....
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
Uff... kya baat kahi hai... loved these lines...
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
Waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
Dearest Guruji,
As always a wonderful wonderful expression of thoughts... bahut hi khoobsurat aashaar hain... Mazaa aa gaya inhe padhkar... Haan urdu ki classes heavy thhin...so took a bit of time to get the meaning...
Sooo... Meri dil se daad kubool kijiyega... likhti rahiye bass yun hi.... Apna khayal rakho ache se...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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18th March 2007, 02:04 PM
pairi pauna dd,
bahut muddatoN ke baad aapko itne aaraam se padha hai dd, aur yakeeN maaniye dil ko beintehaaN tasalli hui aapko padh kar, khaash taur se maqta mere khayaal me haasil-e-ghazal raha, bahut khub bayaani ki aapne dad ki, bas guzarish yahi karuNga ki aap age v isi tarah mehfileN sajati raheN...!
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20th March 2007, 01:56 PM
My 4everluvly Guru Ji,
Pehle toh maafi chaahta hu itni deri se reply karne ke liye. Par kya karu, aapka kalaam itna gehra tha ki iski gehraayi samajte samajte bohot waqt lag gaya Lekin bohot pasand aaya. Har baar ki tarha kuch naya kuch mukhtalif per wohi josh aur wohi gehraayi jisse hum itna chaahte hai. Likhte rahiye aur hume uhi seekh dete rahiye.
Aapka nalayak shagird
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
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30th March 2007, 12:28 PM
Pehle tau der se jawaab dene ke liye muaafi chaahti hoon aap sabse...
My Dear Akelijaan,
Mera likha pasand aaya aapko, khushqismati hai meri…duaaon ke liye aur daad ke liye bahut shukriyaa…yoonhi aati jaati rahein…khayaal rakhein apna
Lol Rajveer ji…
At least poori line tau waah waah se bhar dee hoti…just kidding…a shayar of your hunar agar daad de tau bahut achha lagta hai…shukriya mujhe padhne ke liye…
Dear Dhaval,
Main tau yahin se, aap sab se seekhti hoon…seekhti rahoongi…kisi ko sikhaana is kaabil nahin hoon main…phir bhi itna maan dene ke liye shukriyaa…take care
Hey Buddy,
How are you doing? Tumhara word to word padhna aur phir daad dena aisa lagta hai ki main tumhein padh ke suna rahi hoon…love it…keep it up….
Sweet Lucky,
Kaise ho? Haan maktaa tau mera favorite hai hee…kyunki wahi pehle likha gaya thaa…phir baaki kee ghazal…khayaal rakhna apna
My Shugary Sweet Shaagird…
You will never be short of sweet words…that is for sure…thanks for taking time to reply…take care
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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30th March 2007, 05:28 PM
Paras..
This one really needs a good reply.... Got to post one.... Gi me some time..
TY
Till later...
TC
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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30th March 2007, 09:47 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Parastaar
Aisee lazzat khalish-e-dil mein kahaan hoti hai
Reh gayaa seene me.n usakaa koii paikaa.N hogaa
--Momin
Dosto Namaskaar, Aadaab, Sat Sri Akaal…
Kaise hain aap sab? Raunak tau khuub hai yahaan…bahut se naye naye members dekh rahi hoon…bahut achhe!! Aapki mehfil mein aik nayaa kalaam meri jaanib se…nazar-e-inaayat kijieyegaa…tau arz hai…
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
zer-e-mizghaa.n = under the lashes
darmaan = treatment (ilaaj)
qurb-e-khizaa.N = in close proximity to spring
lazzat = enjoyment
pur khaar = full of thorns
dast-e-uduu = hands of the enemy
pashemaan = remorseful, regretful
dard-e-nihaa.n = pain that is hidden
tar = wet
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Paras ji aapko shaan ka salam,
bahut dino baad aapki post padhne ko mile... bahut achee alfaz use kiye hain aapne... mujhe aapka aage bhi intezaar rahega..
Aap kush rahen or muskurate rahe..
take care
SHAAN
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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31st March 2007, 02:19 AM
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
wah wah wah aapa kya baat apke qalaam ki
bahut hi khub likha hai last sher to dil le gya hai ji...
kitne din mein pada apka likha hua kuch bahut acha laga..
miss u dear
woth mithhi apki sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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31st March 2007, 10:10 AM
bahut khub paras ji
kya bat hai
aapko hamara sadar pranaam
paras ji aapne to is rachna mein kamal hi kar diya aapne bahut hi khubsurati se apne dil ke ehsaason ko hamare samne bayan kiya hai
paras ji aaj aapki rachna aankho se hokar dil tak pohchi hai, aaj aapkii is rachna ko padhke dil khush hua hai, paras ji aapki rachna ko padhke jo mukarte the kabhi aaj unka bhi sir juka hai
ese hi likhte rehiyega aur mehfil ko sajate rehiyega
aapka dost
Merul
Quote:
Originally Posted by Parastaar
Aisee lazzat khalish-e-dil mein kahaan hoti hai
Reh gayaa seene me.n usakaa koii paikaa.N hogaa
--Momin
Dosto Namaskaar, Aadaab, Sat Sri Akaal…
Kaise hain aap sab? Raunak tau khuub hai yahaan…bahut se naye naye members dekh rahi hoon…bahut achhe!! Aapki mehfil mein aik nayaa kalaam meri jaanib se…nazar-e-inaayat kijieyegaa…tau arz hai…
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
zer-e-mizghaa.n = under the lashes
darmaan = treatment (ilaaj)
qurb-e-khizaa.N = in close proximity to spring
lazzat = enjoyment
pur khaar = full of thorns
dast-e-uduu = hands of the enemy
pashemaan = remorseful, regretful
dard-e-nihaa.n = pain that is hidden
tar = wet
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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waah wah -
31st March 2007, 11:14 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Parastaar
Aisee lazzat khalish-e-dil mein kahaan hoti hai
Reh gayaa seene me.n usakaa koii paikaa.N hogaa
--Momin
Dosto Namaskaar, Aadaab, Sat Sri Akaal…
Kaise hain aap sab? Raunak tau khuub hai yahaan…bahut se naye naye members dekh rahi hoon…bahut achhe!! Aapki mehfil mein aik nayaa kalaam meri jaanib se…nazar-e-inaayat kijieyegaa…tau arz hai…
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
zer-e-mizghaa.n = under the lashes
darmaan = treatment (ilaaj)
qurb-e-khizaa.N = in close proximity to spring
lazzat = enjoyment
pur khaar = full of thorns
dast-e-uduu = hands of the enemy
pashemaan = remorseful, regretful
dard-e-nihaa.n = pain that is hidden
tar = wet
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Hello paras didi kaisi hai aap?
aap ka ye kalaam sach mai kaabil-e-taarif hai,jab bhi ham dil ke jazbaat ko labzo mai dhaalne ki koshish karte hai to ek umdaa ghazal/kalaam bantaa hai magar yeh hunar sab mai nahi hotaa, aap mai hai didi aur ham sab ki yahi dua hai ki khudaa aap ko aur hunarmand kare
filhal dil se dad kabool kareN is umdaa kalaam par
regards
manu
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27th April 2007, 02:48 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Parastaar
Aisee lazzat khalish-e-dil mein kahaan hoti hai
Reh gayaa seene me.n usakaa koii paikaa.N hogaa
--Momin
Dosto Namaskaar, Aadaab, Sat Sri Akaal…
Kaise hain aap sab? Raunak tau khuub hai yahaan…bahut se naye naye members dekh rahi hoon…bahut achhe!! Aapki mehfil mein aik nayaa kalaam meri jaanib se…nazar-e-inaayat kijieyegaa…tau arz hai…
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
zer-e-mizghaa.n = under the lashes
darmaan = treatment (ilaaj)
qurb-e-khizaa.N = in close proximity to spring
lazzat = enjoyment
pur khaar = full of thorns
dast-e-uduu = hands of the enemy
pashemaan = remorseful, regretful
dard-e-nihaa.n = pain that is hidden
tar = wet
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paras ji ab har gazal ke liye kaya kahu...aap janti hi hai..ki main yehi kahungi bahut khoob...aap kuch bhi likho mujhe uska ek ek lafaz sshi lagta hai....!
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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27th April 2007, 05:07 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Parastaar
Aisee lazzat khalish-e-dil mein kahaan hoti hai
Reh gayaa seene me.n usakaa koii paikaa.N hogaa
--Momin
Dosto Namaskaar, Aadaab, Sat Sri Akaal…
Kaise hain aap sab? Raunak tau khuub hai yahaan…bahut se naye naye members dekh rahi hoon…bahut achhe!! Aapki mehfil mein aik nayaa kalaam meri jaanib se…nazar-e-inaayat kijieyegaa…tau arz hai…
dekhaa jo aape se baahar Gam-e-jaanaa.N hamane
to sajaa liye hai.n gauhar zer-e-mizaGhaa.n hamane
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
jo sunaa ki mausam-e-gul hai qurb-e-khizaa.N yaaro
to kar liyaa baseraa pahaloo-e-khizaa.N hamane
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
is janam nahii.n to agale janam wo hogaa meraa
dabaa rakhaa hai is yaqii.n pe dard-e-nihaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
zer-e-mizghaa.n = under the lashes
darmaan = treatment (ilaaj)
qurb-e-khizaa.N = in close proximity to spring
lazzat = enjoyment
pur khaar = full of thorns
dast-e-uduu = hands of the enemy
pashemaan = remorseful, regretful
dard-e-nihaa.n = pain that is hidden
tar = wet
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bohat khoob paras ji aap ne itna acha likha hai ke alfaaz nahi hain tareef ke liye ...
use kyaa maaluum lazzat pur khaar raaho.n kee
jisakii raaho.n me.n bichhii dekhii hai.n kaliyaa.n hamane
har ahal-e-wafaa me.n paayii dast-e-uuduu kee buu
har baar choT khaaii kiyaa dil ko pashemaa.N hamane
ye do ashaar dil ke bohat qareeb lage
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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1st May 2007, 09:17 PM
Pyaari Pyaari Paras,
Keysi ho, Aaj itne dino baad ek baar phir tumhaari ghazal paDi, to eysa kyun lag raha haiy ki aaj bhi vohi dard tum seene me chupaaye beythi ho, us naasoor ki khalish mehsoos huvi, aur tumhaari har baat yaad aane lagi.
Duaa to humesha yehi ki ke tum khush raho, tum sochti hogi ke mey yunhi keh rahii hun, lekin nahi, raabta na hone ke bavjood mey tumhe kabhi bhooli nahi. Ghazal dard me sarobar haiy, ye sheyr bohot pasand aaye
phuuTe jo dil ke aabale to ha.Ns diye hai.n ham
is taur bhii kiyaa hai dard kaa daramaa.N hamane
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras’
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N hamane
Maqta bohot dil choo lene waala hai albatta ek adna si raay ye haiy ki jab aap maqte me khood ko indirectly address kar rahi ho to us baat ke flow ko continue rakho, jeyse ki
ho kyuu.N naa shoKh ra.ng terii Gazalo.n kaa ‘paaras'
kee hai.n tar khuun-e-jigar me.n u.ngaliyaa.N 'Tumne'
ye to sirf ek poorani dost ki raay haiy, pasand na aaye to nazar-andaaz kar dena,
khush raho aabaad raho
SAFIYA
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2nd May 2007, 03:39 AM
Guddo di
Kya baat hai .. har sher wakai mere khayal se ek se bhadhkar ek hai ... itni wazni alfaaz aur itni saadgi aapke alawa koun kar sakta hai guddo di .. aapko yahan dekh kar kitni khushi hui bayaan nahi kar sata .. ishq pemar mitne ka ye junoon zaari rakhna didi
aapka bhai
Kunaal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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2nd May 2007, 01:34 PM
iss shyri ka jawaab nahi bahut khoob janaab,,,,
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Dil Itna Naazuk Hota Hai Ke,
Isski Tootne Ki Awaaz Bilkul Nahi Aathi,
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MEIN TUJHKO BHOOL JAUN YE KISSS KITAAB MEIN LIKHA HAI.
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socha tha woh hame tut kar chahenge
par chaha bhi hami ne aur tute bhi hum
KISHOR R KARKERA
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PH:-09322764070
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2nd May 2007, 07:22 PM
Bahut khoob Di..
Daad kubool keejiye..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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4th May 2007, 12:17 PM
Still waiting Sush…
For that promised good reply…
Shaan Jee…
Shukriya aapne apne qeemti waqt mein se kuchh pal is kalaam ko diye…aate rahiye…
Hello Meri Gudiyaa…
Der baad tum aayin aur der se main reply kar rahi hoon…hisaab baraabar…hamesha khush raho…
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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