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Tera chehra -
24th April 2009, 07:36 PM
 Ligiye janab hum phir hajir hai kuch naya lekarHar taraf tera hi tera chehra nazar aata hai Tu mujhse door sahi par mujhme hi basa nazar aata hai JidhaR bhi dekhta hoon bas teri hi jhalak MAHSOOS HOTI HAI MUJHKO K ab to mujhe khuda me bhi tu hi basa nazar aata hai Tujhe bhool jane ki din raat nakam koshish karta hoon k ab in koshisho me bhi teri yaado ka sabab nazar aata hai Kuch bhi likhne baithta hoon to teri kasam Ab to in haatho me bhi tere haatho ka chalan nazar aata hai  ##@@ Jab hum na honge kaya rang-a-mahfil hogi &&&& Or kisko dekh kar aap sarmaya karogi#### |
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26th April 2009, 09:38 AM
nice One..............keep Writing
Zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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26th April 2009, 01:54 PM
Har taraf tera hi tera chehra nazar aata hai
Tu mujhse door sahi par mujhme hi basa nazar aata hai very beautiful............. |
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26th April 2009, 08:37 PM
Kya baat hai achchi koshish hai,
Tujhe bhool jane ki din raat nakam koshish karta hoon k ab in koshisho me bhi teri yaado ka sabab nazar aata hai Ye wala ahkafi achcha laga likhte raho... 
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30th April 2009, 01:00 PM
thank friend
for ur comments i m waiting for ur more comments in future ##@@ Jab hum na honge kaya rang-a-mahfil hogi &&&& Or kisko dekh kar aap sarmaya karogi#### |
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30th April 2009, 01:15 PM
wow gr8 feelings ......................
bahot achha likhe ho aap daad ..................  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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30th April 2009, 06:10 PM
Agar AAp sab Ki Dua sath rahi to age bhi or aacha likhne ki koshish karta rahunga
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15th May 2009, 07:23 PM
Ye aaj Jindgi mujhe kis mukaam pe le aaye hai
Jidhar bhi dekhta hoon dikhti mujhe tanhai hai ##@@ Jab hum na honge kaya rang-a-mahfil hogi &&&& Or kisko dekh kar aap sarmaya karogi#### |
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18th May 2009, 12:21 PM
Thanks Nazneen ji
 koshish karenge aage bhi aisa hi likhne ki ##@@ Jab hum na honge kaya rang-a-mahfil hogi &&&& Or kisko dekh kar aap sarmaya karogi#### |
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