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Love Gunhegar...... - 2nd September 2007, 06:04 PM


main sone gaya, so nai paya.......

main parne betha, par nai paya.......

tuje bulne ki koshis ki, par bool nai paya............

maine tuje apnaya...... tune muje apnaya

fir kya hua tuje, jo tune muje gaer (paraya) banaya.......

tu kyon nai samajti tere bager jindagi meri hai badkismati ka ek saya.....


kya yahi din tha dekhna muje
jo
maine
tuje apna banaya......

kya yeh tha mera gunaha (tuje apna banane ka)
jo tune muje gunehgar banaya....?


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14th October 2007, 08:52 PM

Sundrani ji,

koshish theek hai. raah pe badte rahiyee manjil jaroor milegi. humne bhi apni do ghazale.n ghazal section me.n likhii hai.n pad kar bataaiyegaa ki kaisee lagii.

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3rd November 2007, 07:14 PM

hi dear....

thanks for apprication....sorry to inform you due to lack of time will go through ur ghazal in free time...

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8th July 2010, 10:38 AM

Hi Nahta

How r u? wats up? hope i will get pleasure to read yoru ghazal's...
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21st August 2010, 10:47 AM

A Very Very Happy Birthday To You...!

Nice Poetry........... Sundrani Ji ! bahut umdaa ehsaas ke saath likha hai aapne !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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17th September 2010, 07:26 PM

Hi Mr. Naresh

thanks for wishes & appreciation also...
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29th September 2010, 04:19 PM

Mr Sundrani Ji,
Aapne apne jazbaat-o-ehsaasaat ki achchhi tarjumaani ki hai apni in tehreeron mein, paRhkar achchha laga. Daad haazir hai.

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Dear Mr Ansari..

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