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Teri Yaad.... - 12th January 2013, 11:38 AM

Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz shaam dhale..
bezar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...

mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankhe roz shaam dhale..

tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyaad roz shaam dhale...

har ek mehfil me hote hai.. mere charche yun to...
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...

kise khayaal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yahaN
soone hote hain jajbaat... roz shaam dhale.....
   
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12th January 2013, 11:53 AM

khoobsurat ehsaas shipra jee....dil ko choo gaye....umda...



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12th January 2013, 12:37 PM

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Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz shaam dhale..
bezar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...

mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankhe roz shaam dhale..

tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyaad roz shaam dhale...

har ek mehfil me hote hai.. mere charche yun to...
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...

kise khayaal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yahaN
soone hote hain jajbaat... roz shaam dhale.....
waaahhh shipra ... kya baat hai kamaal ki peshkash rahi hai aapki...

bahot din baad aapka likha kuch padhaa yahaan.. accha lgaaa..

upar mention line pe kuch gunjaaish sudhaar ki nazar aati hai... zara ek baar dekh lenaa... baaki aapke ehsaas har baar ki hi tarah laajwaab lage hain....
khush raho... likhti raho...

Shaad...


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Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz shaam dhale..
bezar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...

mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankhe roz shaam dhale..

tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyaad roz shaam dhale...

har ek mehfil me hote hai.. mere charche yun to...
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...

kise khayaal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yahaN
soone hote hain jajbaat... roz shaam dhale.....
bahot sunder .................................................. .


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khoobsurat ehsaas shipra jee....dil ko choo gaye....umda...
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waaahhh shipra ... kya baat hai kamaal ki peshkash rahi hai aapki...

bahot din baad aapka likha kuch padhaa yahaan.. accha lgaaa..

upar mention line pe kuch gunjaaish sudhaar ki nazar aati hai... zara ek baar dekh lenaa... baaki aapke ehsaas har baar ki hi tarah laajwaab lage hain....
khush raho... likhti raho...

Shaad...
ehsaaso ko pasand karne ka bht bht shukria sameer ji....
   
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10th February 2013, 12:02 PM

Shipra jee

Bahut achha likha aapne

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10th February 2013, 01:41 PM

Shipra ,
aapka dard ka izhaar bahut acha laga.

Baras jati hai ankhen roz sham dhale.

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14th July 2014, 01:47 AM

har ek mehfil me hote hai.. mere charche yun to...
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...


Wahh...wahh.. Shipra Jii..

Kafi arsay baad aap ko padh'a, boht achaa laga...

aise hi mehfil roshan kartay rahiye,,

DuaooN k saath,,


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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Very Nice Shipra Ji..............Very Touching Poem.........Rep++++

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Chali aati hai teri yaad... roz shaam dhale..
bezar bahut hota hai dil ye shaam dhale...

mere naseeb me tere baadal to na the...
baras jati hai ye aankhe roz shaam dhale..

tere deedar ki dua karte hai roz sanam...
rah jati hai bas fariyaad roz shaam dhale...

har ek mehfil me hote hai.. mere charche yun to...
ankahi hoti hai har baat roz shaam dhale...

kise khayaal ki tu ab bhi basta hai yahaN
soone hote hain jajbaat... roz shaam dhale.....
   
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