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Biteeyaa..!!!! - 29th December 2012, 06:42 PM

Ik Nirdhan ki Ik Biteeyaa thhee,
Unaki Chhoti si Ik Duniyaaa thhee,
Din Beet Chale, Beeta Bachpan,
Us Gudiyaaa Pe Aaayaa yauvan,
Yauvan Ki Masti ne, Usko raaah bhulaayi..

Pag Phisal gaya, Woh Cheekh Padi,

Uunchaayee See Khaayi me Giri,
Murjhaa Gayi Woh Phoolon Si Raaani,

Ab Yeh Sacchaayi Sabne hai Jaani...!!!!


Kaun Kambakhat Kehta hai,
Ke Sirf Ghaalib ko hai pata,
Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!!
Yeh Teer-E-Ishq kyaa 'Zindagi' se Ziyada,
Kya Ghaalib ko hai Chubhata....!!!!!
   
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30th December 2012, 10:26 AM

Behad acchi koshish hai Zindgee jee....

Aapke ehsaas bahot pasand aaye mujhe... likhte raheN.... shhhukriyaa

Shaad...


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30th December 2012, 10:31 PM

zindagii jee:

namaste!

dil ko chhu gayii aapki koshish... yuunhi likhae rahiye aage bhee

khush rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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2nd March 2013, 10:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Zindagi5 View Post
Ik Nirdhan ki Ik Biteeyaa thhee,
Unaki Chhoti si Ik Duniyaaa thhee,
Din Beet Chale, Beeta Bachpan,
Us Gudiyaaa Pe Aaayaa yauvan,
Yauvan Ki Masti ne, Usko raaah bhulaayi..

Pag Phisal gaya, Woh Cheekh Padi,

Uunchaayee See Khaayi me Giri,
Murjhaa Gayi Woh Phoolon Si Raaani,

Ab Yeh Sacchaayi Sabne hai Jaani...!!!!
aapke ahsaas hame acche aur bahut nazuk lge...par agar aap thoda aur likhtey to shayad baat aur jayada asardaar lagti...yeh meri apni rai hai...khoobsurat ahsaasoN ke liye daad.

god bless u


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3rd March 2013, 01:42 PM

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aapke ahsaas hame acche aur bahut nazuk lge...par agar aap thoda aur likhtey to shayad baat aur jayada asardaar lagti...yeh meri apni rai hai...khoobsurat ahsaasoN ke liye daad.

god bless u
Shukriyaa, Bahot bahot Shukriyaa..!!


Kaun Kambakhat Kehta hai,
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Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!!
Yeh Teer-E-Ishq kyaa 'Zindagi' se Ziyada,
Kya Ghaalib ko hai Chubhata....!!!!!
   
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