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Sagar Kinare - 8th January 2013, 08:45 PM

Sagar Kinare main aaj bhi lehren ginta hun,
Gumsum sa kinare se lehron ke takrane ki awaz sunta hu,

Fark sirf itna hain ki kal tak tum mere saath thi,
aur aaj mein akela hi yadon ko chun chun ke ginta hun,

Kal tak samundar mein har jagah tera aks nazar aata tha,
Aaj kinare baitha main apne hi aks dhoondata hun,

Pata nahin sagar kinare aate aate din mahine saal guzar gaye,
Per na jaane kyon aaj bhi wahin tere kadmon ki aahat sunta hun,

Tun is wakat kis haal mein hogi Hamdam maluum nahin,
Phir bhi na jane kyun ab tak sagar kinare main tera intazaar karta hun.


Sanjay Sehgal



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.

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8th January 2013, 09:40 PM

bahot ummdah peshkash hai aapki Sehgal saab....

Fark sirf itna hain ki kal tak tum mere saath thi,
aur aaj mein akela hi yadon ko chun chun ke ginta hun,


Ye sher mujhe dil ke behad kareeb mehsoos huaa hai... shaayad iski tavajjoh ko aaj jana hai.... bahot khoob.. likhte raheN...

Shaad...


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8th January 2013, 10:01 PM

Hamdam bhai ek achhii koshish hai.
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8th January 2013, 10:28 PM

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Sagar Kinare main aaj bhi lehren ginta hun,
Gumsum sa kinare se lehron ke takrane ki awaz sunta hu,

Fark sirf itna hain ki kal tak tum mere saath thi,
aur aaj mein akela hi yadon ko chun chun ke ginta hun,

Kal tak samundar mein har jagah tera aks nazar aata tha,
Aaj kinare baitha main apne hi aks dhoondata hun,

Pata nahin sagar kinare aate aate din mahine saal guzar gaye,
Per na jaane kyon aaj bhi wahin tere kadmon ki aahat sunta hun,

Tun is wakat kis haal mein hogi Hamdam maluum nahin,
Phir bhi na jane kyun ab tak sagar kinare main tera intazaar karta hun.


Sanjay Sehgal
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Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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9th January 2013, 07:25 AM

sanjay jee.....ehsaas dil ko choo gaye...... Yun hee likhte rahein....



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10th January 2013, 07:15 PM

Shad sahib,

Pichle dino Goa mein itni lahren gini ki ek ehsaas jagA
jo maine likh diya..aapko pasand aya shukriya.

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10th January 2013, 08:10 PM

Rajinder ji ,Naresh Mehra ji aur Arvind ji,

Aap sab logo ko mera khayal pasand aya , bahut
bahut shukriya.

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12th January 2013, 07:13 AM

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12th January 2013, 12:55 PM

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Shad sahib,

Pichle dino Goa mein itni lahren gini ki ek ehsaas jagA
jo maine likh diya..aapko pasand aya shukriya.

Sanjay sehgal
Goa me... kamal hai saab.. wahan ki to baat hi alag hai , kuch saalon tak main thaa wahaan par... alag hi duniyaa ke... shayar ke liye jannat hai wo jagah.. kya khayaal aate hain.... khair aapke agle kalaam ka hame intzaar rahegaa..

likhte rahiyegaa... shukriyaa

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apko hamari gazal pasand ayi..

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Bahut khoob likha hai............

Yadown ke sahare zindagi beet jaati hai...


Yun hi likhte rahe......

apna kyaal rake

Aapka dost


Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
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Mujeeb Sahib ,Tarik Sahib aur Manjeet bhai aap sabhi ka
tahe dil se shukriya...
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sanjay jee aap aaye accha laga...shukriya



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