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Ghazal- jahaaN har haath me PATTHAR salamat hai...!! -
8th August 2015, 06:38 PM
Ik ghazal aap sabki mohabbaton ke hawaale...
JahaaN har haath mein patthar salamat hai,
Kahe kaise koi ke sar salamat hai...
Hume kya gham jaliN haiN bastiyaaN kitni,
SukooN humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
Mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai...
Hue hain aaj fir se sher ulfat ke,
Khabar kar do mira dilbar salamat hai...
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
KahaaN vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
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8th August 2015, 11:46 PM
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
Wahhh bahut he badhiya....dost
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9th August 2015, 12:49 AM
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
Mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai
KahaaN vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
Bahut khoob...
Waah! taish ji...hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi bahut pasand aayi aapki ye peshkash...par ye do sher khas achche lage.....
Likhte rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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9th August 2015, 09:15 PM
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Originally Posted by taish
ik ghazal aap sabki mohabbaton ke hawaale...
jahaan har haath mein patthar salamat hai,
kahe kaise koi ke sar salamat hai...
Hume kya gham jalin hain bastiyaan kitni,
sukoon humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai...
Hue hain aaj fir se sher ulfat ke,
khabar kar do mira dilbar salamat hai...
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
Kahaan vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
yahaan bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
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bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh ghazal lucky bhai.................
Likhte rahen
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'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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11th August 2015, 03:11 AM
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Originally Posted by armaan1
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
Wahhh bahut he badhiya....dost
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shukriya dost, umeed karta huN aapka pyar aage bhi yuNhi milta rahega, aur aapse mukhatib hone ke mauke bhi milte raheNge...
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11th August 2015, 08:30 AM
kya khoob ghazal huee aapki lucky bhai ...waah maza gaya per ke .
Ek ek sher lajawab tha ...bahut ache Miya , aapki kalam salamat rahe.
Hamdam
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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11th August 2015, 11:10 AM
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Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
Mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai
KahaaN vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
Bahut khoob...
Waah! taish ji...hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi bahut pasand aayi aapki ye peshkash...par ye do sher khas achche lage.....
Likhte rahein...
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tahe dil se shukraguzaar hun madhu ji aapki is hausla afzaayi ka, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saat deti raheN....
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11th August 2015, 12:37 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh ghazal lucky bhai.................
Likhte rahen
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Rajinder ji tahe dil se aapka shukraguzaar hun...bas yunhi aage v saathvdere rahen...
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12th August 2015, 09:57 AM
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Originally Posted by Taish
Ik ghazal aap sabki mohabbaton ke hawaale...
JahaaN har haath mein patthar salamat hai,
Kahe kaise koi ke sar salamat hai...
Hume kya gham jaliN haiN bastiyaaN kitni,
SukooN humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
Mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai...
Hue hain aaj fir se sher ulfat ke,
Khabar kar do mira dilbar salamat hai...
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
KahaaN vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
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waahhh janaab waaahhhhh ye ghazal behad aalaa huii aapki jaanaib se ke bas dil ko sukoon pahuchaa hai samajh liijiye.......
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai
kyaa khoob khoob sher hue hain, jitni daad pesh ki jaae kamm hai..... duaa karta hoon Rab se ke zore kalam barqaraar rahe...... likhte rahiye
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12th August 2015, 12:49 PM
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Originally Posted by Taish
Ik ghazal aap sabki mohabbaton ke hawaale...
JahaaN har haath mein patthar salamat hai,
Kahe kaise koi ke sar salamat hai...
Hume kya gham jaliN haiN bastiyaaN kitni,
SukooN humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
Mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai...
Hue hain aaj fir se sher ulfat ke,
Khabar kar do mira dilbar salamat hai...
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
KahaaN vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
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wahhhhh kya khoobsurat likhtey ho Lucky aap.....har baar ki tarah es baar bhi aapki gazal kamaal ki rhi...yu hi likhtey rhiye aur bazm ki shaan bane rehiye.
duaoN ke saath
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13th August 2015, 10:14 AM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
kya khoob ghazal huee aapki lucky bhai ...waah maza gaya per ke .
Ek ek sher lajawab tha ...bahut ache Miya , aapki kalam salamat rahe.
Hamdam
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Sanjay ji aapki mohabbaton ke liye tahe dil se shukraguzaar hun. Yunhi pyar barqaraar rakhen...
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13th August 2015, 07:25 PM
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Originally Posted by taish
ik ghazal aap sabki mohabbaton ke hawaale...
jahaan har haath mein patthar salamat hai,
kahe kaise koi ke sar salamat hai...
Hume kya gham jalin hain bastiyaan kitni,
sukoon humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai...
Hue hain aaj fir se sher ulfat ke,
khabar kar do mira dilbar salamat hai...
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
Kahaan vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
yahaan bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
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kyaa kahne ... Waah ! Bahut umdaah janaab
dilee mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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14th August 2015, 08:14 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
waahhh janaab waaahhhhh ye ghazal behad aalaa huii aapki jaanaib se ke bas dil ko sukoon pahuchaa hai samajh liijiye.......
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai
kyaa khoob khoob sher hue hain, jitni daad pesh ki jaae kamm hai..... duaa karta hoon Rab se ke zore kalam barqaraar rahe...... likhte rahiye
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Shaad bhai dil ko tasslli si hui aapka reply dekh kar. Umeed karta hun aage v aapka saath yunhi milta rahega...
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14th August 2015, 05:32 PM
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Ik ghazal aap sabki mohabbaton ke hawaale...
JahaaN har haath mein patthar salamat hai,
Kahe kaise koi ke sar salamat hai...
Hume kya gham jaliN haiN bastiyaaN kitni,
SukooN humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
Mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai...
Hue hain aaj fir se sher ulfat ke,
Khabar kar do mira dilbar salamat hai...
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
KahaaN vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
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Bahut gehri baat keh gaye bhai aur andaaz-e-bayaan to kya kehne mazaa aa gaya padh ke.....yun to puri ghazal pur asar rahi par makte par zara zor se daad nikli....
ek aur behad aacha sher jo dil ke qareed raha
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
Kya baat hai janaab, yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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15th August 2015, 08:42 PM
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Ik ghazal aap sabki mohabbaton ke hawaale...
JahaaN har haath mein patthar salamat hai,
Kahe kaise koi ke sar salamat hai...
Hume kya gham jaliN haiN bastiyaaN kitni,
SukooN humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
Mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai...
Hue hain aaj fir se sher ulfat ke,
Khabar kar do mira dilbar salamat hai...
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
KahaaN vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
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tumhein padhti hu to lagta hai bas padhti rahu....
ab iske aage kya kahun???
ek request....
apni kahani.."saaqi"... complete kar do...
please!!!!
tumhari apni
nisha
Go zaraa si baat par barsoN ke yaaraane gaye...
par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye...
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16th August 2015, 08:12 AM
aadaab-o-namaste Taish bhai,
pehle to, rasman, Ghazal par daad tasleem farmaiiye
darmiyaani beher meiN aapne mushkil kaafiya aur radeef chuna hai, tenooN ki jugal-baNdii se insaaf karna behadd mushkil kaam jaan paDta jisko aapne ba-khoobi aNjaam diya hai
jab bhi aap jaise nau-jawaan shora ki aisi Ghazal, jaisi ki aapne uupar darj ki hai, paDhta hooN to dil do-gunaa ho jaata hai!
aur dil ko yeh tassalli behadd sukoon deti hai ke shayri ke mus'taqbil meiN itna aNdhera nahiiN hai jitna bataaya jaa raha hai
dheroN mubarakbaad
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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Bohat Khoob -
18th August 2015, 04:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Taish
Ik ghazal aap sabki mohabbaton ke hawaale...
JahaaN har haath mein patthar salamat hai,
Kahe kaise koi ke sar salamat hai...
Hume kya gham jaliN haiN bastiyaaN kitni,
SukooN humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Mujhe ab rahzani ka darr nahi hota,
Mera hai jo mire andar salamat hai...
Hue hain aaj fir se sher ulfat ke,
Khabar kar do mira dilbar salamat hai...
Zamaane ka qafan mujhko nahi dena,
Meri mitti ki ik chaadar salamat hai...
KahaaN vo rooh jisko "taish" kehte the,
YahaaN bas naam ka paikar salamat hai..
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Hume kya gham jaliN haiN bastiyaaN kitni,
SukooN humko humara ghar salamat hai...
Bohat khoob ghazal kahi hai Taish bhai. Aur ye sher behud pasand aaya. Aaaj ke insaan ki fitrat ko bakhoobi bayaN karta hai. Zor-e-qalam aur ziyadah.
Khaksaar
Praveen
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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20th August 2015, 06:17 PM
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wahhhhh kya khoobsurat likhtey ho Lucky aap.....har baar ki tarah es baar bhi aapki gazal kamaal ki rhi...yu hi likhtey rhiye aur bazm ki shaan bane rehiye.
duaoN ke saath
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Sunita di, bas aap yunhi aashirwad dete rahiye...
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25th August 2015, 09:15 PM
Bohot khoob Taish ji
Bohot hi umdah peshkash.....maza aa gaya..
Dil se daad....
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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