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Smile Harash Mahajn ji se guftagu ka silsilla (01.09.2015) - 1st September 2015, 03:46 PM

Namaskaar Dosto

guftagu ke silsilley ko aage badatey haiN aur aaj ham jis shayar ko aap sabse milwane ja rhe haiN, wo sdc ke 9 saal purane member hain, unhone bahut khoobsurat gazaloN se sdc ki bazm ko sajaya hai. aaj ham es shayar ko enhi ki jubaani jaanege.

enki shayri apne aap meiN ek misaal hai...koi bhi topic ho ishq aur dard ho ya aaj ke tazza halaat, enhone har topic par bahut khoobsurti se apne vichaaroN ko lafzoN se sajjaya hai. aap bhi enka naam jaa.ne ko utsuk honge to lijiye ji enki shayri se bhi taruff karva doon aur naam se bhi




Cha'Nd sheroN meiN unka hunar ik raaz zaroor batlaayega,
Be-rukhi unki qaafiya-o-radeef.............meiN nazar aayega.
Kitne chhipey haiN saaNp...unki aasteen meiN fann failaaye,
Aane waala har sher..........unki khabar ba-dastoor laayega.


"Harash Mahajan"

kuch waqt se yeh sdc se gayab rhe hai...to enko vapis laane ka yehi aik zariya nazar aaya hame, ham chahte thy ki es umda shayar ko hamare sabhi member jaane bhi aur padey bhi, esi liye ham enko jaise taise pakad laaye hai ki aapko ab regular aana bhi hoga aur sabhi dosto se aik mahina regular baat-cheet bhi karni hogi

ji dosto, es mahine ham enhi se baat kareNge, ham sab enke bare meiN wo sab kuch jaan.na chaheNge jo hame maloom nahi hai, hamne to bas enki shayri padi hai, par yeh asal zindgi meiN kaise haiN ense hi jaanege.

Harash ji, aapka SDC ke es guftagu wale silsiley meiN dil se suwagat hai…umeed hai ki aap es gufatagu ko khoob enjoy karogey…aur ham sab bhi aapse baate karke khoob lutf uthaNge.

Harash ji…es silsiley ko aage badate hue ham chahte hai ki sabse pehle aap apni introduction dijiye.

1. Aap kahan ke rehne wale hai ?
2. kya kaam karte hai ?
3. aapki family meiN kaun kaun hai…family se bhi thoda introduce karwa dijiye ?
4. SDC se kaise judey aap ?
5. kya aapke pariwaar ka koi aur member bhi SDC pariwaar meiN shamil hai ?


filhaal etna hi...aapke intejaar aur suwagat meiN SDC team

SDC team ki taraf se Aik baar phir dil ki gehraiyoN se suwagat hai.





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1st September 2015, 11:10 PM

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Namaskaar Dosto

guftagu ke silsilley ko aage badatey haiN aur aaj ham jis shayar ko aap sabse milwane ja rhe haiN, wo sdc ke 9 saal purane member hain, unhone bahut khoobsurat gazaloN se sdc ki bazm ko sajaya hai. aaj ham es shayar ko enhi ki jubaani jaanege.

enki shayri apne aap meiN ek misaal hai...koi bhi topic ho ishq aur dard ho ya aaj ke tazza halaat, enhone har topic par bahut khoobsurti se apne vichaaroN ko lafzoN se sajjaya hai. aap bhi enka naam jaa.ne ko utsuk honge to lijiye ji enki shayri se bhi taruff karva doon aur naam se bhi




Cha'Nd sheroN meiN unka hunar ik raaz zaroor batlaayega,
Be-rukhi unki qaafiya-o-radeef.............meiN nazar aayega.
Kitne chhipey haiN saaNp...unki aasteen meiN fann failaaye,
Aane waala har sher..........unki khabar ba-dastoor laayega.


"Harash Mahajan"

kuch waqt se yeh sdc se gayab rhe hai...to enko vapis laane ka yehi aik zariya nazar aaya hame, ham chahte thy ki es umda shayar ko hamare sabhi member jaane bhi aur padey bhi, esi liye ham enko jaise taise pakad laaye hai ki aapko ab regular aana bhi hoga aur sabhi dosto se aik mahina regular baat-cheet bhi karni hogi

ji dosto, es mahine ham enhi se baat kareNge, ham sab enke bare meiN wo sab kuch jaan.na chaheNge jo hame maloom nahi hai, hamne to bas enki shayri padi hai, par yeh asal zindgi meiN kaise haiN ense hi jaanege.

Harash ji, aapka SDC ke es guftagu wale silsiley meiN dil se suwagat hai…umeed hai ki aap es gufatagu ko khoob enjoy karogey…aur ham sab bhi aapse baate karke khoob lutf uthaNge.

Harash ji…es silsiley ko aage badate hue ham chahte hai ki sabse pehle aap apni introduction dijiye.

1. Aap kahan ke rehne wale hai ?
2. kya kaam karte hai ?
3. aapki family meiN kaun kaun hai…family se bhi thoda introduce karwa dijiye ?
4. SDC se kaise judey aap ?
5. kya aapke pariwaar ka koi aur member bhi SDC pariwaar meiN shamil hai ?


filhaal etna hi...aapke intejaar aur suwagat meiN SDC team

SDC team ki taraf se Aik baar phir dil ki gehraiyoN se suwagat hai.



Sunita ji

Sabse pahle Shayri.com par ahal-e-bazm ko merii jaanib se Aap Sabhi dostoN ko is Inaayaat ke Liye Tahe-E-Dil Se Shukar guzaar Hun..ki aapne is naacheez ko yaad kiya....us se bhi ziyada meri dost Sunita Virender Singh ji ka jinki muhabbatoN ke liye maiN phir se tah-e-dil se mashkoor-o-mamnoon hooN....halaanke merii zindagi ke safar meiN kuch bhi aisa khaas nahiN jisey byaan kiya jaa sake lekin is nihayat hi khoobsoorat bazm meiN poochhe gaye sabhi dostoN ke swaaloN ka apne sacche dil se jawaab pesh karne ki koshish karooNga .....waise to mera SDC par aana jaana ek Dr ki bhasha meiN SOS hi raha ...kabhi lagataar~~~~ toh kabhi Gaah-e-bagaahe ..kyuN ki yahaaN kuch aise shou'ra moujood haiN jinhe padhne ka bahut lutf aata hai our unke fikr-o-fun ka main kaayal bhi huN our unhe salaam bhi karta huN.....lekin maine is site ko hameshaaN apne Ghar ki tarah hi dekha ...kaii baar is par read karte Ghanto bitaaye to kabhi thodi der ke liye kuch na kuch padaa ya post kiya....lekin is yaaraan-e-bazm meiN kabhi koi itna bhi khaas Gehen yaraana nahiN rahaa ke SDC ki depth pataa ho....Sunita ji se to kuchh baateiN ho jaaya karti haiN our aaj maiN yahaN huN shayad unhiN ki badaulat ...mere baare meiN jo kuch bhi inhone aaj kaha maiN us qaabil to nahiN huN...lekin unki garimaa ka khyaal zaroor rakhne ki koshish karooNga.....aaj ki bazm meiN mere liye jo naya silsila shuru hua hai our aap ke pooche gaye swaaloN ka jawaab....... liijiye maiN aaGhaaz karta huN...


1. Aap kahan ke rehne wale hai ?
MaiN toh waise, Janam se hi, Delhi ka rehne waala huN...lekin basically mere waaldain, partition se pahle...Siyal-Kot meiN rehte the..

2. kya kaam karte hai ?

Ek Nationalised Bank ki sewa hetu maine jeevan ke 37 saal istemaal kar MaiN is waqt karya-mukt huN our aajkal kuch samajik karyoN meiN vyast huN our kuch thoda bahut waqt jab bachta hai toh wo, apni is lekhni sang, apne ahsaasoN ke saath vyateet karte hue apni adnaa sii koshish, ki unheN koii naam(Gazal/qattaa/sher ya kuch or) de sakooN.

3. aapki family meiN kaun kaun hai…family se bhi thoda introduce karwa dijiye ?

Meri zindagi ke is safar meiN khoon ke rishtoN meiN ...ham chaar brothers our three sisters haiN our sabhi apne family meiN bharpoor vyast haiN ....
Lihaja maiN apni family ki baat karooN to merii family meiN ham chaar log..

-MaiN Khud/wife/two daughters
-Dono MBA our donoN betiyoN ki shaadi ho chuki hai...

-Wife/Govt Job /Senior Section Supervisor

-Badii bitia Ek nationalised bank maiN Cheif manager ki post par karyarat hai
-Daamaad-MBA/MNC meiN/Regional Head
-two kids

-Chhoti Bitia/MNC/HR Manager
-Damaad-MBA/MNC/ Regional Head/mumbai Region.
- One Kid

4. SDC se kaise judey aap ?

Ek mushquil sawaal- ek site jiske bahut se member Shayri.com se wabasta the ...jinki maarfat is behtareen site par mere safar ka agaaz hua our abhi tak parvaaz par huN.

5. kya aapke pariwaar ka koi aur member bhi SDC pariwaar meiN shamil hai ?

NahiN --mere parivaar meiN takreeban bahut se member media se jude haiN magar maiN akela huN jo writing work meiN mashgool huN.

Sunita Virender ji mujhe umeed hai maiN aapke sabhi prashnoN ke uttar saade lafzoN meiN de kar aapko santusht kar paaya huN ---Shukriyaa !!

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1st September 2015, 11:20 PM

maufi chahoongi...zara der se aa payi.....sunita di aap ka bahut shukriya aap dhoondh kar jo umda shayr hamare beech lati hain interview thread par usse mujhe wakai bahut khushi hoti hai..kyun ki mujhe mauka milta hai un sab ko padhne ka aur janne ka jinse main pahle nahi mil saki....

Harash ji....aapka dil se swaagat hai guftagu ke silsile mein...asha karti hoon ye safar aapke liye rochak aur yaadgar rahega.....

Jald hee hazir hoti hoon sawalon ke sath ..
Filhaal ijazat...



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Waah waah waah...........................

AAj to Harsh ji aaye hain yahaan. Mere pasandida shayron mein se ek aur ek suljhi hui shaqsiyat.

Harsh Sir Aapka yahan swaagat hai. ummeed hai humein aapse bohut kuch seekhne ka avsar milega.

Main bhi apne prashno.n ki fehrist taiyyaar kar ke phir loutati hun.


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aapka tahe dil se waagat karta hoon main Harash bhaiyaa........

ummeed karta hoon aapka yahana waqt behad acchaa guzregaa....

ye bhi duuaa karungaa ke aapka ye waqt bahut yaadgaar guzregaa..

aur aapke baare me jaanne ke mauqe milte rahenge..... sawaalon ka intzaar kariyegaa...

duaaon me yaad rakhen...

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Harash ji, aapne baatoN baatoN meiN kaha hai ki SDC ke kuch aise shayar hai jinko padne ka aap ko bharpoor lutf aata hai. to hamara agla sawaal bhi esi se related hai

1. SDC par apni pasand ke shayroN ke naamoN se hame bhi ru-b-ru karayeN ?

2. yu to har shayar ko apni har rachna behad pyari hoti hai...phir bhi ham chahte hai ki aap apni koi 5 rachnao ke link yahan dijiye


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Harash jee

Namaste


Shayri pariwaar ke kaThGhare mein aapkaa swaagat haii......aapke baare mein jaan kar khushii hongii

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Harash ji, aapne baatoN baatoN meiN kaha hai ki SDC ke kuch aise shayar hai jinko padne ka aap ko bharpoor lutf aata hai. to hamara agla sawaal bhi esi se related hai

1. SDC par apni pasand ke shayroN ke naamoN se hame bhi ru-b-ru karayeN ?

2. yu to har shayar ko apni har rachna behad pyari hoti hai...phir bhi ham chahte hai ki aap apni koi 5 rachnao ke link yahan dijiye


aik mahine ke liye agar aap apni photo profile meiN lageyeN to hame accha lgega, aur members aapko pehchaan bhi sakeNge...photo saamne hone se shakas ke saam.ne baithe hone ka ehsaas hota hai


Sunita Virender ji mere liye to ye manch Mahfil-e-shouq bhi raha hai yahaaN aanaa our reading ke shouq ki wazeh se likhna kam our padnaa ziyada hota hai, padne ke muaamle meiN jo regular hote haiN unki bhasha ka gyaan ho jaata hai to phir lutf bhi unhi ke kahe shabdoN meiN aana shuru ho jaata hai.

1. SDC par apni pasand ke shayroN ke naamoN se hame bhi ru-b-ru karayeN ?

Aapke is bouncer prashn par ab maiN kya kahuN.. our yahaaN aakar is tarah kuch logon ka naam patal par laana be-maani saa ho jaayega lekin jinki shayrii dil ko chhooti hai na jaane kyuN cursar wahaaN khud hi chala jaata hai…pasandeedah shayar kaho ya unhoN ki shayri ka hunar jo dil ko chhoone meiN kasar nahiN chhodti …in shayroN se kabhi Guftagoo toh nahiN hui...…na hi kabhi mouka mila ..jab hui bhi toh bas thodi bahut…..in shayroN ki tehreeroN meiN jajbaat, be-inteha milte haiN …….magar aisa nahiN hai jinke ashar maiN de raha huN unke ilawa baaki shayro/shayaraoN ke jajbaat pheeke haiN......aisa nahiN hai....is manch par jo bhi haiN bahut hi behtareen shaksiat ke maalik bhi haiN our kahne waale bhi....jinkie hunar ko daad diye bagair nahiN raha ja sakta...ziyada kahuNga to bayas sa mahsoos hogaa ....waise aisi mahfiloN meiN is tarah bolne se parhaze karta huN.....Kam bolne meiN vishwaas rakhta huN...magar Sunita ji ne yahaaN aane ka jaise farmaan suna diya ho.....har rooh se sneh/pyaar rakhta huN..... "Faraz sahab ka ek sher hai ......

"jab kabhi bolna wakt par bolna.mudatto sochna mukhtasar bolna "...Faraz

Leejiye is manch par meri pasandeedaH kalam

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“Tabassum chehre par sajaane se hoga kya...?
aansoo chhupaa ke muskurane se hoga kya...?”


Mujhe yaad hai jin dinoN maiN is mahfil-e-khaas meiN aayaa tha mere saamne is shayar ki ek ghazal jo saamne aayii jo mujhe bahut padand thi..har sher ice cream meiN garam chaako ki tarah utarta chala gayaaa……

“Muuhabbat ke gawaah apnii , ye chaaNd sitaare haiN
din humne judaaii ke , gin-gin ke guzaare haiN “

Kitna araam kitna khuloos..kitna dard shayad ye mere hi bhaav ho…..our yahaaN ke acche our tareen shayroN ko pandna unke bhaavoB par hi munassar hota hai……achha kehte haiN our koi tanz-o-lahza se talluk nahiN sapaat…

"bhujhta hai ai chiraaGh-e-ziNdagi to bhujh hi jaa
ab ham se teri aur hifaazat nahiiN hoti.."


Dard se sarabhor…………………

Agla shayar/ shayra

Is shayar meiN dil ko chhoone ki adaa hai ahsaas patal par aate hi aankhoN ko pakadte haiN

"kahe wo mujhe bura to bura kyaa hai
maine khattaon ke siva kiya kyaa hai..…… Kya kahuN"


Agle shaya/shayra ko padh kar yuN lagta hai ki sunte hi chalo..bahut hi oomda our kahen meiN kashish

"sulagti hai raateiN meri, sulagte haiN din
Dilbar tere pyaar ki barsaat baki hai"


ek our shayar/shayra

"Daaman-ae-sabr thaam lo bardh ker
Ae na kehna kahin,Khuda bhi nahin "


Har sher dil –o-demaag padta hai ……

Agle shayar/shayra

"Andhere MeN Jo Murjhaai Sii Hai
Roshni MeN Woh Parchhaai Sii Hai ..."


Agle shayar/shayra

"Ye mohbbat kahaN kisi ke liye asaan hoti hai…
Ye kaisi hanshi hai jo ro ro ke bayaN hoti hai…"


Aise kuch our bhi haiN ….bahut waqt chahiye ..kahaaN tak byaan karooN…. umeed hai jo mouzood haiN SDC maiN ye ahbaab-o-qadar-daanoN ko aap apne aala zoquo se nawazte raheNge....umeed hi nahi yaqeen hai ki aapki inayat aise hi bani rahegi....

2. yu to har shayar ko apni har rachna behad pyari hoti hai...phir bhi ham chahte hai ki aap apni koi 5 rachnao ke link yahan dijiye

Aapke is prashn kuch kahte hue yuN lagta hai ki kis tehreer ko chhodooN our kis ko rakhooN…..lekin ahsaas bator kar likhne meiN our Qaid karne meiN us tahreer ke saath ik rishta sa kaayam ho jaata hai …..jo byaan nahiN kiya ja sakta hai ….kuch tehreeroN ke links haiN jo main yahaN dena chahooNga….

1)Hui YuN GamoN Ki ye shaam Aakhiri hai
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52863

2) उसको लफ्ज़ ए मुहब्बत सिखाता रहा
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77318

3) ZulfeiN yuiN hi sar-e-aam sanwara na keejiye
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57022

4) Ho rahe jo haadse yuN baat kuchh toh jaroor hai
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69132

5) Tu RakeeboN Ki jaanib Sarakti Rahi
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52913

InhiN shabdoN ke saath aaj ka safar ka yahiN ant hua ……umeed karta huN aapko apne swaaloN ka jwaab mil gaya hoga ……

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Sunita Virender ji mere liye to ye manch Mahfil-e-shouq bhi raha hai yahaaN aanaa our reading ke shouq ki wazeh se likhna kam our padnaa ziyada hota hai, padne ke muaamle meiN jo regular hote haiN unki bhasha ka gyaan ho jaata hai to phir lutf bhi unhi ke kahe shabdoN meiN aana shuru ho jaata hai.

1. SDC par apni pasand ke shayroN ke naamoN se hame bhi ru-b-ru karayeN ?

Aapke is bouncer prashn par ab maiN kya kahuN.. our yahaaN aakar is tarah kuch logon ka naam patal par laana be-maani saa ho jaayega lekin jinki shayrii dil ko chhooti hai na jaane kyuN cursar wahaaN khud hi chala jaata hai…pasandeedah shayar kaho ya unhoN ki shayri ka hunar jo dil ko chhoone meiN kasar nahiN chhodti …in shayroN se kabhi Guftagoo toh nahiN hui...…na hi kabhi mouka mila ..jab hui bhi toh bas thodi bahut…..in shayroN ki tehreeroN meiN jajbaat, be-inteha milte haiN …….magar aisa nahiN hai jinke ashar maiN de raha huN unke ilawa baaki shayro/shayaraoN ke jajbaat pheeke haiN......aisa nahiN hai....is manch par jo bhi haiN bahut hi behtareen shaksiat ke maalik bhi haiN our kahne waale bhi....jinkie hunar ko daad diye bagair nahiN raha ja sakta...ziyada kahuNga to bayas sa mahsoos hogaa ....waise aisi mahfiloN meiN is tarah bolne se parhaze karta huN.....Kam bolne meiN vishwaas rakhta huN...magar Sunita ji ne yahaaN aane ka jaise farmaan suna diya ho.....har rooh se sneh/pyaar rakhta huN..... "Faraz sahab ka ek sher hai ......

"jab kabhi bolna wakt par bolna.mudatto sochna mukhtasar bolna "...Faraz

Leejiye is manch par meri pasandeedaH kalam

Ek Shayar/shayra

“Tabassum chehre par sajaane se hoga kya...?
aansoo chhupaa ke muskurane se hoga kya...?”


Mujhe yaad hai jin dinoN maiN is mahfil-e-khaas meiN aayaa tha mere saamne is shayar ki ek ghazal jo saamne aayii jo mujhe bahut padand thi..har sher ice cream meiN garam chaako ki tarah utarta chala gayaaa……

“Muuhabbat ke gawaah apnii , ye chaaNd sitaare haiN
din humne judaaii ke , gin-gin ke guzaare haiN “

Kitna araam kitna khuloos..kitna dard shayad ye mere hi bhaav ho…..our yahaaN ke acche our tareen shayroN ko pandna unke bhaavoB par hi munassar hota hai……achha kehte haiN our koi tanz-o-lahza se talluk nahiN sapaat…

"bhujhta hai ai chiraaGh-e-ziNdagi to bhujh hi jaa
ab ham se teri aur hifaazat nahiiN hoti.."


Dard se sarabhor…………………

Agla shayar/ shayra

Is shayar meiN dil ko chhoone ki adaa hai ahsaas patal par aate hi aankhoN ko pakadte haiN

"kahe wo mujhe bura to bura kyaa hai
maine khattaon ke siva kiya kyaa hai..…… Kya kahuN"


Agle shaya/shayra ko padh kar yuN lagta hai ki sunte hi chalo..bahut hi oomda our kahen meiN kashish

"sulagti hai raateiN meri, sulagte haiN din
Dilbar tere pyaar ki barsaat baki hai"


ek our shayar/shayra

"Daaman-ae-sabr thaam lo bardh ker
Ae na kehna kahin,Khuda bhi nahin "


Har sher dil –o-demaag padta hai ……

Agle shayar/shayra

"Andhere MeN Jo Murjhaai Sii Hai
Roshni MeN Woh Parchhaai Sii Hai ..."


Agle shayar/shayra

"Ye mohbbat kahaN kisi ke liye asaan hoti hai…
Ye kaisi hanshi hai jo ro ro ke bayaN hoti hai…"


Aise kuch our bhi haiN ….bahut waqt chahiye ..kahaaN tak byaan karooN…. umeed hai jo mouzood haiN SDC maiN ye ahbaab-o-qadar-daanoN ko aap apne aala zoquo se nawazte raheNge....umeed hi nahi yaqeen hai ki aapki inayat aise hi bani rahegi....

2. yu to har shayar ko apni har rachna behad pyari hoti hai...phir bhi ham chahte hai ki aap apni koi 5 rachnao ke link yahan dijiye

Aapke is prashn kuch kahte hue yuN lagta hai ki kis tehreer ko chhodooN our kis ko rakhooN…..lekin ahsaas bator kar likhne meiN our Qaid karne meiN us tahreer ke saath ik rishta sa kaayam ho jaata hai …..jo byaan nahiN kiya ja sakta hai ….kuch tehreeroN ke links haiN jo main yahaN dena chahooNga….

1)Hui YuN GamoN Ki ye shaam Aakhiri hai
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52863

2) उसको लफ्ज़ ए मुहब्बत सिखाता रहा
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77318

3) ZulfeiN yuiN hi sar-e-aam sanwara na keejiye
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57022

4) Ho rahe jo haadse yuN baat kuchh toh jaroor hai
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69132

5) Tu RakeeboN Ki jaanib Sarakti Rahi
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52913

InhiN shabdoN ke saath aaj ka safar ka yahiN ant hua ……umeed karta huN aapko apne swaaloN ka jwaab mil gaya hoga ……

saadar !!!

Du'aaoN ke saath..
Namaskaar Harash ji

Sach maniye aapka yeh reply padkar dil ko behad accha lga, aapne jis tarah shayar ka naam na likh kar uski shayri ko uski pehchaan bataya hai...bahutttttt accha lga dil se

aapne jo apni shayri ke link diye hai wo bhi behad umda shayri hai...dil se shukriya Harash ji.

regards


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Sunita Virender ji mere liye to ye manch Mahfil-e-shouq bhi raha hai yahaaN aanaa our reading ke shouq ki wazeh se likhna kam our padnaa ziyada hota hai, padne ke muaamle meiN jo regular hote haiN unki bhasha ka gyaan ho jaata hai to phir lutf bhi unhi ke kahe shabdoN meiN aana shuru ho jaata hai.

1. SDC par apni pasand ke shayroN ke naamoN se hame bhi ru-b-ru karayeN ?

Aapke is bouncer prashn par ab maiN kya kahuN.. our yahaaN aakar is tarah kuch logon ka naam patal par laana be-maani saa ho jaayega lekin jinki shayrii dil ko chhooti hai na jaane kyuN cursar wahaaN khud hi chala jaata hai…pasandeedah shayar kaho ya unhoN ki shayri ka hunar jo dil ko chhoone meiN kasar nahiN chhodti …in shayroN se kabhi Guftagoo toh nahiN hui...…na hi kabhi mouka mila ..jab hui bhi toh bas thodi bahut…..in shayroN ki tehreeroN meiN jajbaat, be-inteha milte haiN …….magar aisa nahiN hai jinke ashar maiN de raha huN unke ilawa baaki shayro/shayaraoN ke jajbaat pheeke haiN......aisa nahiN hai....is manch par jo bhi haiN bahut hi behtareen shaksiat ke maalik bhi haiN our kahne waale bhi....jinkie hunar ko daad diye bagair nahiN raha ja sakta...ziyada kahuNga to bayas sa mahsoos hogaa ....waise aisi mahfiloN meiN is tarah bolne se parhaze karta huN.....Kam bolne meiN vishwaas rakhta huN...magar Sunita ji ne yahaaN aane ka jaise farmaan suna diya ho.....har rooh se sneh/pyaar rakhta huN..... "Faraz sahab ka ek sher hai ......

"jab kabhi bolna wakt par bolna.mudatto sochna mukhtasar bolna "...Faraz

Leejiye is manch par meri pasandeedaH kalam

Ek Shayar/shayra

“Tabassum chehre par sajaane se hoga kya...?
aansoo chhupaa ke muskurane se hoga kya...?”


Mujhe yaad hai jin dinoN maiN is mahfil-e-khaas meiN aayaa tha mere saamne is shayar ki ek ghazal jo saamne aayii jo mujhe bahut padand thi..har sher ice cream meiN garam chaako ki tarah utarta chala gayaaa……

“Muuhabbat ke gawaah apnii , ye chaaNd sitaare haiN
din humne judaaii ke , gin-gin ke guzaare haiN “

Kitna araam kitna khuloos..kitna dard shayad ye mere hi bhaav ho…..our yahaaN ke acche our tareen shayroN ko pandna unke bhaavoB par hi munassar hota hai……achha kehte haiN our koi tanz-o-lahza se talluk nahiN sapaat…

"bhujhta hai ai chiraaGh-e-ziNdagi to bhujh hi jaa
ab ham se teri aur hifaazat nahiiN hoti.."


Dard se sarabhor…………………

Agla shayar/ shayra

Is shayar meiN dil ko chhoone ki adaa hai ahsaas patal par aate hi aankhoN ko pakadte haiN

"kahe wo mujhe bura to bura kyaa hai
maine khattaon ke siva kiya kyaa hai..…… Kya kahuN"


Agle shaya/shayra ko padh kar yuN lagta hai ki sunte hi chalo..bahut hi oomda our kahen meiN kashish

"sulagti hai raateiN meri, sulagte haiN din
Dilbar tere pyaar ki barsaat baki hai"


ek our shayar/shayra

"Daaman-ae-sabr thaam lo bardh ker
Ae na kehna kahin,Khuda bhi nahin "


Har sher dil –o-demaag padta hai ……

Agle shayar/shayra

"Andhere MeN Jo Murjhaai Sii Hai
Roshni MeN Woh Parchhaai Sii Hai ..."


Agle shayar/shayra

"Ye mohbbat kahaN kisi ke liye asaan hoti hai…
Ye kaisi hanshi hai jo ro ro ke bayaN hoti hai…"


Aise kuch our bhi haiN ….bahut waqt chahiye ..kahaaN tak byaan karooN…. umeed hai jo mouzood haiN SDC maiN ye ahbaab-o-qadar-daanoN ko aap apne aala zoquo se nawazte raheNge....umeed hi nahi yaqeen hai ki aapki inayat aise hi bani rahegi....

2. yu to har shayar ko apni har rachna behad pyari hoti hai...phir bhi ham chahte hai ki aap apni koi 5 rachnao ke link yahan dijiye

Aapke is prashn kuch kahte hue yuN lagta hai ki kis tehreer ko chhodooN our kis ko rakhooN…..lekin ahsaas bator kar likhne meiN our Qaid karne meiN us tahreer ke saath ik rishta sa kaayam ho jaata hai …..jo byaan nahiN kiya ja sakta hai ….kuch tehreeroN ke links haiN jo main yahaN dena chahooNga….

1)Hui YuN GamoN Ki ye shaam Aakhiri hai
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52863

2) उसको लफ्ज़ ए मुहब्बत सिखाता रहा
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=77318

3) ZulfeiN yuiN hi sar-e-aam sanwara na keejiye
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57022

4) Ho rahe jo haadse yuN baat kuchh toh jaroor hai
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69132

5) Tu RakeeboN Ki jaanib Sarakti Rahi
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=52913

InhiN shabdoN ke saath aaj ka safar ka yahiN ant hua ……umeed karta huN aapko apne swaaloN ka jwaab mil gaya hoga ……

saadar !!!

Du'aaoN ke saath..
Harash ji..aapke jawaab ko padhkar bahut achcha laga mujhe...ek shayr ke liye ye bahut badi baat hoti haibki vo apni shayri se pahchana jaye.....
Aur yahaan ise padhkar un sabko bahut khushi huyi hogi yakeenan...

Aapke diye huye sare link abhi nahi padh saki main .....
Par usko lafz e muhabbat padhi....aur bahut sukoon hasil hua padhkar....bahut shukriya jo aapne ye link hamare sath share kiye.......



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Sach maniye aapka yeh reply padkar dil ko behad accha lga, aapne jis tarah shayar ka naam na likh kar uski shayri ko uski pehchaan bataya hai...bahutttttt accha lga dil se

aapne jo apni shayri ke link diye hai wo bhi behad umda shayri hai...dil se shukriya Harash ji.

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Harash ji..aapke jawaab ko padhkar bahut achcha laga mujhe...ek shayr ke liye ye bahut badi baat hoti haibki vo apni shayri se pahchana jaye.....
Aur yahaan ise padhkar un sabko bahut khushi huyi hogi yakeenan...

Aapke diye huye sare link abhi nahi padh saki main .....
Par usko lafz e muhabbat padhi....aur bahut sukoon hasil hua padhkar....bahut shukriya jo aapne ye link hamare sath share kiye.......
Madhu ji is khoobsoorat bazm meiN Harash mahajan ka aadaab !! Tasalli hui aapko jawaaboN ka silsila pasand aayaa....sach kahuN to shayarii hi insaan ki pahchaan hai...usi se uska varchasw hai.....naam our shakal dekhkar sarahaa jaana....thodi der ki pahchaan ka mohtaaz huaa jaata hai....is mahfil meiN our bhi bahut pukashish Ghazalkaar haiN jinka kad khoob ooNcha...lekin waqt ke chalte sab tak pahoonch paana kahaaN tak possible hai.......Tah-e-dil se shukriyaa ek baar phir !!....aapko mere pesh kiye links pasand aaye ,i pasandadgi Ne Mera Hounsle Ko Badhaya Hai -- is Hounsila Afzaayii Ka Bahut bahut ShukriyaaH !!!saadar

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1. aap shayri se kab se judey hue haiN ?

2. aapne shayri ki siksha kisi guru se li hai ya bade shayroN ko pad pad kar seekha hai ?

3. Mashoor ShayroN meiN se aapke pasandida shayar kaun kaun hai...jinko aap aksar padte haiN ?


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Harash ji

1. aap shayri se kab se judey hue haiN ?

2. aapne shayri ki siksha kisi guru se li hai ya bade shayroN ko pad pad kar seekha hai ?

3. Mashoor ShayroN meiN se aapke pasandida shayar kaun kaun hai...jinko aap aksar padte haiN ?
Sunita Virender ji aapke swaaloN ki fehrist ko silsilewaar jawaab dene ki koshish karta hun ….

1. aap shayri se kab se judey hue haiN ?

Ye kehna zara mere liye aasaan nahiN hai kyuN ye kab ye kalam meiN utri mujhe bhi maloom nahiN likhna likhana to school meiN jab padhte the shayad 7th ya 8th ki baat hogi tab se hi shuru ho gaya tha gaanoN par perodi / tukbandi bana kar school ke functions meiN sunaa diye karte the….. aage chal kar sheroN ki tukbandi bhu shuru ho gayi….waqt beeta to aazaad GazloN ka silsila shuru hua jo us waqt ki prachchalti GazloN par hi kehna shuru kiya – Behr ka alif se bhi koii talluk nahiN tha…..Jaise hi 11th pass out hue to jis din result aaya ----school se result lekar jyuN hi Ghar pahoonche to khushi meiN kuch sher apni copy per likh kar har meiN jami mahfil meiN ek gazal ke roop me sunaa diye……hamaare Ghar us din Ek TV artist hua karta tha Mr Dharmesh ..unka orchestra bhi hua karta tha…usne bhi wo Ghazal suni……usne jab waah waah kiya our mere bol pade to kaha waah bahr meiN bhi kahne lage…..tab mujhe maloom hua ki Gazal our gaanoN meiN bhi bahr hoti hai…..ye bhi koii chez hoti hai…..yaani tab tak to Bhr ka naam bhi suna tha ki iska gaanoN se koi talluk bhi hota hai.

2. aapne shayri ki siksha kisi guru se li hai ya bade shayroN ko pad pad kar seekha hai ?

Sunita ji asal baat kahuN to shayad aapko yaqeen hi nahiN hoga…..maiN apneaap ko shayar manta hi nahiN huN kuch ahsaas kah leta huN ….JahaaN likhta huN …apne jazbaat likhta huN ----kuch bahr meiN likhta huN….kuch aazaad likhta hun….. acche acche shayroN ko read karne ka shouq shuru se raha…unki adaaygi kaise hoti hai unhe sun sun ke gudaa huN…..bahut se manchoN par shirkat ki hai…….haaN jin ahsaasoN ko bahr meiN tabdeel karne ke liye asal ahsaasoN koagar khona padey…toh maine aisa unke saath kabhi bhi compromise nahiN kiya -------main shuru se hi ahsaasoN ka kaayal raha huN……isi liye kaha main shayar nahiN huN….

3. Mashoor ShayroN meiN se aapke pasandida shayar kaun kaun hai...jinko aap aksar padte haiN ?

Mere pasandeedaah shayar …… saahir sahib…..”saahir Ludhiyaanvi “…..MaiN Sahir sahib ka bahoot badaa fan hooN mujhe unki Nazmen, geet, ghazalen sab bahut dil se pasand hain.Bahutt hi Gehri hai unki shayri unki har tehreer unka har kalam seedha dil meiN .utar jaata hai …..”man re tu kaahe na dheer dhare “……..”Sharma ken a yuN hi kho de na “……..”abhi na jao chhod kar ke dil abhi bharaa nahiN “….kistni kashish hai inke GeetoN meiN …..Ek our Geet…” Paanv Chhoo lene do phooloN ko inaayat hogi”…”milti hai zindagi meiN mohabbat kabhi kabhi “
Doosra naam hai “Shakeel Badayuni” sahib…….
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"Jaana tumhaare pyaar mein shaitaan ban gaya hoon"

ShayaroN ki Fehrist meiN “Ahmad Faraz “ sahib in par bhi apni Nigaah aksar ruk jaati hai ……….

“So Jao Humare Dil Ke us koney Main Faraz
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Kuch our jinheN padh padh kar apni kalam ko saadhne ki koshish kii hai.....
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Sunita Virender ji aapke swaaloN ki fehrist ko silsilewaar jawaab dene ki koshish karta hun ….

1. aap shayri se kab se judey hue haiN ?

Ye kehna zara mere liye aasaan nahiN hai kyuN ye kab ye kalam meiN utri mujhe bhi maloom nahiN likhna likhana to school meiN jab padhte the shayad 7th ya 8th ki baat hogi tab se hi shuru ho gaya tha gaanoN par perodi / tukbandi bana kar school ke functions meiN sunaa diye karte the….. aage chal kar sheroN ki tukbandi bhu shuru ho gayi….waqt beeta to aazaad GazloN ka silsila shuru hua jo us waqt ki prachchalti GazloN par hi kehna shuru kiya – Behr ka alif se bhi koii talluk nahiN tha…..Jaise hi 11th pass out hue to jis din result aaya ----school se result lekar jyuN hi Ghar pahoonche to khushi meiN kuch sher apni copy per likh kar har meiN jami mahfil meiN ek gazal ke roop me sunaa diye……hamaare Ghar us din Ek TV artist hua karta tha Mr Dharmesh ..unka orchestra bhi hua karta tha…usne bhi wo Ghazal suni……usne jab waah waah kiya our mere bol pade to kaha waah bahr meiN bhi kahne lage…..tab mujhe maloom hua ki Gazal our gaanoN meiN bhi bahr hoti hai…..ye bhi koii chez hoti hai…..yaani tab tak to Bhr ka naam bhi suna tha ki iska gaanoN se koi talluk bhi hota hai.

2. aapne shayri ki siksha kisi guru se li hai ya bade shayroN ko pad pad kar seekha hai ?

Sunita ji asal baat kahuN to shayad aapko yaqeen hi nahiN hoga…..maiN apneaap ko shayar manta hi nahiN huN kuch ahsaas kah leta huN ….JahaaN likhta huN …apne jazbaat likhta huN ----kuch bahr meiN likhta huN….kuch aazaad likhta hun….. acche acche shayroN ko read karne ka shouq shuru se raha…unki adaaygi kaise hoti hai unhe sun sun ke gudaa huN…..bahut se manchoN par shirkat ki hai…….haaN jin ahsaasoN ko bahr meiN tabdeel karne ke liye asal ahsaasoN koagar khona padey…toh maine aisa unke saath kabhi bhi compromise nahiN kiya -------main shuru se hi ahsaasoN ka kaayal raha huN……isi liye kaha main shayar nahiN huN….

3. Mashoor ShayroN meiN se aapke pasandida shayar kaun kaun hai...jinko aap aksar padte haiN ?

Mere pasandeedaah shayar …… saahir sahib…..”saahir Ludhiyaanvi “…..MaiN Sahir sahib ka bahoot badaa fan hooN mujhe unki Nazmen, geet, ghazalen sab bahut dil se pasand hain.Bahutt hi Gehri hai unki shayri unki har tehreer unka har kalam seedha dil meiN .utar jaata hai …..”man re tu kaahe na dheer dhare “……..”Sharma ken a yuN hi kho de na “……..”abhi na jao chhod kar ke dil abhi bharaa nahiN “….kistni kashish hai inke GeetoN meiN …..Ek our Geet…” Paanv Chhoo lene do phooloN ko inaayat hogi”…”milti hai zindagi meiN mohabbat kabhi kabhi “
Doosra naam hai “Shakeel Badayuni” sahib…….
“ Ai mohabbat tere anjaam pe rona aaya “

waise Hasrath Jaipuri meiN mere Favourite haiN -----

"Aa jao tadapte haiN armaaN ab raat Guzarne waali hai"

"Aye Gulbadan, Aye Gulbadan "

"badan pe sitaare lapete hue, aye jaane tamanna kidher ja rahi ho"

"Jaana tumhaare pyaar mein shaitaan ban gaya hoon"

ShayaroN ki Fehrist meiN “Ahmad Faraz “ sahib in par bhi apni Nigaah aksar ruk jaati hai ……….

“So Jao Humare Dil Ke us koney Main Faraz
Jahan Hum Apni Sanson Ko Bi Jane Ki izazat Nhi Dete”

Kuch our jinheN padh padh kar apni kalam ko saadhne ki koshish kii hai.....
umeed hai aapke sawaaloN ke jawaab dene meiN safal hua hooN...


Harash ji....sach kahun to muje khud par naaz ho rha hai ki maiN aap jaise shayar ko es bazm meiN aane ke liye raaji kar paaye...bahut accha lag rha aapke jawaab padkar, jis tarah aap har sawaal ka jawaab de rhe hai poori tarah expalin karke...dil ko bahut accha lag rha hai


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1. aap jab likhne baith.te hain to kin baaton par jayada gaur krte haiN ?

2. meri nazar meiN har shayar bada nazuk sa dil rahta hai, kya yeh sahi hai ?

3. aksar sun.ne meiN aata hai ki shayar log bade dik-fenk hote hai...kya yeh sahi hai

accha lga aapne profile meiN apni photo lagaye.

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chand sawaal aur lekar aaye hu.

1. ab jab aap retire ho chuke hai to aap apna waqt kaise beeta.te hai ?

2. kya aapki dharam-patni ji bhi shuank rakhti hai shayri ka ?

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Aapke iss silsile se bazm mein raunaq aa gayi hai. Badi dilchasp mulaqaat chal rahi hai. Maza aa raha hai. Main bhi apne sawalaat ke saath jald haazir hounga.

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Wah pehle to main Sunita Didi ka shukriya karna chahunga ki itne aala shayar to dhuund kar humhe unki zindagi unki shayri se rubaaruu karwaana ka mauka diya hai....

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Harash ji chahunga ki aap apna school waala kissa sunaye sabse pehle jaha aapne apni pehli kavita likhi thi, mujhe vo ab tak yaad hai aur main chahta hoon ki aap baaki logon se bhi vo qissa share karein...

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Bahut khshi hui dekh ker ki ek ke baad ek SDC ke purane Nageene pesh e khimat haiN SDC pe ..
Hum naye members jo ki pichle 3 to 4 years meIN sdc meiN jure hain , unko bhi aap logon se roobru hone ka aur jan.ne ka mauka milega .

Aap ko beech meIn pera hai maine SDC pe aur paya ki aap ek majhe hue shayar haiN .

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Harash ji


1. aap jab likhne baith.te hain to kin baaton par jayada gaur krte haiN ?

2. meri nazar meiN har shayar bada nazuk sa dil rahta hai, kya yeh sahi hai ?

3. aksar sun.ne meiN aata hai ki shayar log bade dik-fenk hote hai...kya yeh sahi hai

accha lga aapne profile meiN apni photo lagaye.

Harash ji

chand sawaal aur lekar aaye hu.

1. ab jab aap retire ho chuke hai to aap apna waqt kaise beeta.te hai ?

2. kya aapki dharam-patni ji bhi shuank rakhti hai shayri ka ?


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Mohtarma Sunita Virender ji Namaskaar…… Iss Adalat meiN prashnoN ke mutallaq jo silsila shuru hua hai shayad aap be-inteha prashn liye hue haiN .. Khush raheN sada. Chalte haiN aapke sawaaloN par :-

1. aap jab likhne baith.te hain to kin baaton par jayada gaur krte haiN ?

Sunita ji aapka ye swaal hai to chhota sa --- magar ye jitna muktsar sa lagta hai utna hai nahiN – ismeiN bahut se swaal chhipe haiN. Aour sach meiN aap bahoot hi zaheen zahen ki maalik haiN. MaiN aapke is swaal meiN chhipe sabhi swaaloN ke jawaab silsile waar diye deta hooN …..

(i) Aap jab likhne baith.te hain

Sirf Ahsaas—dil meiN jo ahsaas paida hote haiN …….Sunita ji mujhe yaad nahiN ki maiN kabhi khud likhne ke liye baitha hooN…albatta mujhe mere ahsaas jab jhakjhod dete haiN to kalam khud b khud chalne lagti hai …..tabhi sunita ji maiN pahle bhi yahaaN keh chuka hooN ki maiN shayar nahiN hooN main sirf ek likhwaal hooN….

(ii) to kin baaton par jayada gaur krte haiN

Mere zahen meiN jab bhi koi ahsaas uth.ta hai to usey hubahu waise hi apne shabdoN meiN utaarne ki koshish bhar karta hooN…our jab talak mere ahsaas poori tarah na utreN, jis tarah main chahta hooN, merii koshish jaari rehti hai….


IsmeiN chhupa hua ek our swaal jo aap shayad jaan.na chahti haiN…..
Tehreer jab tayyar hoti hai……toh bahr ka kya?


tehreer poori hone par dhyaan Behr ki our uth.ta hai uske baad mind game shuru hoti hai, jisey istemaal karne ki koshish karta hooN our tab tak karta hooN jab take ek sood bhi ahsaas par faraq na padey….lekin agar bahr meiN lane ke liye agar ahsaas badalne padeiN ya unki ahmiyat ya unka asar thoda bhi kam ho ….toh maiN kabhi compromise nahiN karta …….yaqeenan main bahr ka kaayal tab tak hooN jab tak unhiN bhaavoN meiN tehreer baney.

meri har tehreer ko bina rukey gaaya ja sakta hai…ye dhyaan aawashy rakhta hooN….

Meri is baat se shayad aapko ittefaaq na ho…..

sher sirf un do misroN ko hi nahiN kahte jo bahr meiN hoN wazn meiN hoN. Meri nazar meiN Sher aisa ho jo dil ko chhoo jaaye. Usmen kuch aisi baat honi chahiye. Har sher ka koii matlab hona chaahiye.. DonoN misroN meN rabt hona chahiye. Agar sirf bahr men do misre kah liye koii matlab nahiN nikla jo aajkal ke nav shayar kehne meiN vyast haiN sirf 1,2, 1, 2 ya laghu guru aadi aadi …karte nazar aate haiN….

Sirf yahi dhyaan rakhne ki koshish bhar karta hooN…..


2. meri nazar meiN har shayar bada nazuk sa dil rahta hai, kya yeh sahi hai ?

Jo insaan Naazuk dil nahiN hai wo kabhi bhi shayar nahiN ho sakta ya sirf likhwaal bhi nahi ho sakta …sanvednaayeiN uski dharohar hoti haiN…..wo apni rachnaoN ke saath ghantoN hansta bhi hai our Rotaa bhi hai.

3. aksar sun.ne meiN aata hai ki shayar log bade dik-fenk hote hai...kya yeh sahi hai

Aapke is swaal ka jawaab kis lahze meiN dooN -----ye toh apne aap meiN hi be-maani sa hai….. koi bhi ahsaas ko kahna our shayri meiN kehna … jo sach hai jahaN se Ghazal ki utpatti hui wo to yahi kahti hai….shayrii ka astitv hi do pyaar karne waaloN ke beech meiN vaarta laap se hai …so pyaar karne waaloN ke dil se ye swar lehriyaaN nikalti haiN our aapas meiN exchange hoti haiN. Lekin aajkal ye shayri har subject meiN utarni shuru ho chukii hai ….

Kuch log shayar na ho kar dil phenk hoN wo alag baat hai 



4. ab jab aap retire ho chuke hai to aap apna waqt kaise beeta.te hai ?

Saamajik kaaryoN meiN vyast rehta hooN….waise adhiktar waqt to bachoN ke paas –jaise maine pahle bhi bataya do betiyaaN haiN …unke bachhe haiN …unke saath bhi waqt beet.ta hai .. logon ki help karna acchha lagta hai….


5. kya aapki dharam-patni ji bhi shuank rakhti hai shayri ka ?


HaaN sirf itna – merii job hi tehreer hoti hai usey padne ka shouq hai unheN, lekin likhne ka hunar unmeiN nahiN hai aisa wah kahti haiN.



Umeed karta hooN mere jawaab aroochikar nahiN hoNge…..

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harash ji ek chhota sa sawaal..
.kya kabhi kisi sdc member se aapki mulaqat huyi hai..agar haan to kisse hame bhi bataiye unke bare me..

Agar nahi to aisa koi khaas yahaan par jisse aap milna chahte hain aur kyun.....

Filhaal itna hee fir hazir hoti hoon..
Madhu ji namaskaar ...aapke muktsar se swaal ka ka muktsar sa jawaab…….

HaaN Madhu ji is khoobsoorat manch k eek sipe-salaar Mohtaram Janaab Anubha Minocha ji our unki shareeke-hayaat mohtarma Sarika ji se rubaroo mulaqaat ho chuki hai ….ek bahut hi zaheen personalityy ke maalik haiN donoN…us do ghante ki mulaqaat meiN unse bahut kuch seekha hamne …..bahut hi milansaar our paak dil …Mumbai meiN jab aaya to ek phone call our mulaqaat …salaams aisi Jodi ko ...khudaa inheN hameishaaN apni parchhaaiyoN meiN rakhe….aameen !!

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Janab Harash sahab
Aapke iss silsile se bazm mein raunaq aa gayi hai. Badi dilchasp mulaqaat chal rahi hai. Maza aa raha hai. Main bhi apne sawalaat ke saath jald haazir hounga.

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Praveen ji aadaab ….sir zarra nawaazi hai aapki ----yahaaN mehfil meiN mouzood sabhi ki muhabbatoN ke liye tah-e-dil se mashkoor-o-mamnoon hooN...ye jaankar mujhe bhi achha lagaa ki aapko achha lag raha hai……ye merii khush naseebi hai …..aapke swaaloN ka intzaar rahega….Shukriyaa !!!.

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Thumbs up shukriyaaaaaaaaaa - 5th September 2015, 11:42 AM

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Mohtarma Sunita Virender ji Namaskaar…… Iss Adalat meiN prashnoN ke mutallaq jo silsila shuru hua hai shayad aap be-inteha prashn liye hue haiN .. Khush raheN sada. Chalte haiN aapke sawaaloN par :-

1. aap jab likhne baith.te hain to kin baaton par jayada gaur krte haiN ?

Sunita ji aapka ye swaal hai to chhota sa --- magar ye jitna muktsar sa lagta hai utna hai nahiN – ismeiN bahut se swaal chhipe haiN. Aour sach meiN aap bahoot hi zaheen zahen ki maalik haiN. MaiN aapke is swaal meiN chhipe sabhi swaaloN ke jawaab silsile waar diye deta hooN …..

(i) Aap jab likhne baith.te hain

Sirf Ahsaas—dil meiN jo ahsaas paida hote haiN …….Sunita ji mujhe yaad nahiN ki maiN kabhi khud likhne ke liye baitha hooN…albatta mujhe mere ahsaas jab jhakjhod dete haiN to kalam khud b khud chalne lagti hai …..tabhi sunita ji maiN pahle bhi yahaaN keh chuka hooN ki maiN shayar nahiN hooN main sirf ek likhwaal hooN….

(ii) to kin baaton par jayada gaur krte haiN

Mere zahen meiN jab bhi koi ahsaas uth.ta hai to usey hubahu waise hi apne shabdoN meiN utaarne ki koshish bhar karta hooN…our jab talak mere ahsaas poori tarah na utreN, jis tarah main chahta hooN, merii koshish jaari rehti hai….


IsmeiN chhupa hua ek our swaal jo aap shayad jaan.na chahti haiN…..
Tehreer jab tayyar hoti hai……toh bahr ka kya?


tehreer poori hone par dhyaan Behr ki our uth.ta hai uske baad mind game shuru hoti hai, jisey istemaal karne ki koshish karta hooN our tab tak karta hooN jab take ek sood bhi ahsaas par faraq na padey….lekin agar bahr meiN lane ke liye agar ahsaas badalne padeiN ya unki ahmiyat ya unka asar thoda bhi kam ho ….toh maiN kabhi compromise nahiN karta …….yaqeenan main bahr ka kaayal tab tak hooN jab tak unhiN bhaavoN meiN tehreer baney.

meri har tehreer ko bina rukey gaaya ja sakta hai…ye dhyaan aawashy rakhta hooN….

Meri is baat se shayad aapko ittefaaq na ho…..

sher sirf un do misroN ko hi nahiN kahte jo bahr meiN hoN wazn meiN hoN. Meri nazar meiN Sher aisa ho jo dil ko chhoo jaaye. Usmen kuch aisi baat honi chahiye. Har sher ka koii matlab hona chaahiye.. DonoN misroN meN rabt hona chahiye. Agar sirf bahr men do misre kah liye koii matlab nahiN nikla jo aajkal ke nav shayar kehne meiN vyast haiN sirf 1,2, 1, 2 ya laghu guru aadi aadi …karte nazar aate haiN….

Sirf yahi dhyaan rakhne ki koshish bhar karta hooN…..


2. meri nazar meiN har shayar bada nazuk sa dil rahta hai, kya yeh sahi hai ?

Jo insaan Naazuk dil nahiN hai wo kabhi bhi shayar nahiN ho sakta ya sirf likhwaal bhi nahi ho sakta …sanvednaayeiN uski dharohar hoti haiN…..wo apni rachnaoN ke saath ghantoN hansta bhi hai our Rotaa bhi hai.

3. aksar sun.ne meiN aata hai ki shayar log bade dik-fenk hote hai...kya yeh sahi hai

Aapke is swaal ka jawaab kis lahze meiN dooN -----ye toh apne aap meiN hi be-maani sa hai….. koi bhi ahsaas ko kahna our shayri meiN kehna … jo sach hai jahaN se Ghazal ki utpatti hui wo to yahi kahti hai….shayrii ka astitv hi do pyaar karne waaloN ke beech meiN vaarta laap se hai …so pyaar karne waaloN ke dil se ye swar lehriyaaN nikalti haiN our aapas meiN exchange hoti haiN. Lekin aajkal ye shayri har subject meiN utarni shuru ho chukii hai ….

Kuch log shayar na ho kar dil phenk hoN wo alag baat hai 



4. ab jab aap retire ho chuke hai to aap apna waqt kaise beeta.te hai ?

Saamajik kaaryoN meiN vyast rehta hooN….waise adhiktar waqt to bachoN ke paas –jaise maine pahle bhi bataya do betiyaaN haiN …unke bachhe haiN …unke saath bhi waqt beet.ta hai .. logon ki help karna acchha lagta hai….


5. kya aapki dharam-patni ji bhi shuank rakhti hai shayri ka ?


HaaN sirf itna – merii job hi tehreer hoti hai usey padne ka shouq hai unheN, lekin likhne ka hunar unmeiN nahiN hai aisa wah kahti haiN.



Umeed karta hooN mere jawaab aroochikar nahiN hoNge…..

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5th September 2015, 11:48 AM

Harash ji...mere pitare meiN bahut saare sawaal hai, aap jawaab detey jayeN main aur sawaal lekar aati rhuNgi

1. aapka bachpan Delhi meiN beeta hai to hame apne bachpan se judi koi aisi baat batayeN jo aapko reh reh kar bachpan ki yaad dilati hai aaj bhi.

2. aap school meiN kaise student thy ? padaku ya shararti agar padaku thy to padai se judii koi khaas baat batayeN aur agar shararti thy to koi khaas shararat school time ki hamse share kijiye

3. Harash ji, agar shayri aapka janoon na hota to aur kya hota ?

4. aapke mutabik aik acche shayar meiN kya khoobiyaa honi chahiye ?

5. aapki nazar meiN SDC ? shayri meiN bayaan kareNge to hame behaaadddd accha lgega


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Madhu ji namaskaar ...aapke muktsar se swaal ka ka muktsar sa jawaab…….

HaaN Madhu ji is khoobsoorat manch k eek sipe-salaar Mohtaram Janaab Anubha Minocha ji our unki shareeke-hayaat mohtarma Sarika ji se rubaroo mulaqaat ho chuki hai ….ek bahut hi zaheen personalityy ke maalik haiN donoN…us do ghante ki mulaqaat meiN unse bahut kuch seekha hamne …..bahut hi milansaar our paak dil …Mumbai meiN jab aaya to ek phone call our mulaqaat …salaams aisi Jodi ko ...khudaa inheN hameishaaN apni parchhaaiyoN meiN rakhe….aameen !!

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Waahhh harash ji aap mast ji aur masti se mile kya baat hai..sach kahoon meri bhi dili khwahish hai ki main unse mil sakoon.....bahut khushi huyi aapne ye baat aur apna anubhav hamse share kiya....

Shukriya.......



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Madhu ji namaskaar ...aapke muktsar se swaal ka ka muktsar sa jawaab…….

HaaN Madhu ji is khoobsoorat manch k eek sipe-salaar Mohtaram Janaab Anubha Minocha ji our unki shareeke-hayaat mohtarma Sarika ji se rubaroo mulaqaat ho chuki hai ….ek bahut hi zaheen personalityy ke maalik haiN donoN…us do ghante ki mulaqaat meiN unse bahut kuch seekha hamne …..bahut hi milansaar our paak dil …Mumbai meiN jab aaya to ek phone call our mulaqaat …salaams aisi Jodi ko ...khudaa inheN hameishaaN apni parchhaaiyoN meiN rakhe….aameen !!

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yeh to aapki zarranawaazi hai sir par sach mein aapke tajurbon se aur aapki personality se hum dono ki kaafi impressed hue they milne ke baad. Umeed hai uparwaala aur bhi kai mulaaqaaton ko taqdeer mein likhe aur hum phir jald mile....



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Wah pehle to main Sunita Didi ka shukriya karna chahunga ki itne aala shayar to dhuund kar humhe unki zindagi unki shayri se rubaaruu karwaana ka mauka diya hai....

Harash ji Welcome to Interview zone !!!

Yun to shayad aapse jyaada relate kar paata hoon aur shukrguzaar hoon ki maine aapke saath 2-3 ghante aamne saamne bitaaye hai..

Doston - Harash ji jitne SDC par down to earth nazar aate hai asal zindagi mein vo usse bhi jyaada down to earth hai agar aap mein se kisi ko bhi inko milne ka mauka mile to aapko meri baat samajh mein aayegi....

Harash ji chahunga ki aap apna school waala kissa sunaye sabse pehle jaha aapne apni pehli kavita likhi thi, mujhe vo ab tak yaad hai aur main chahta hoon ki aap baaki logon se bhi vo qissa share karein...

intezaar mein...


Janaab Anubhav Minocha ji Urf Mast ji aadaab, khato-khatawat ke is zone meiN aapki mohabbatoN ke liye shukriyaa – Aapne sach farmaaya , aapke saath aamne saamne bitaaye 2-3 ghante sach meiN bahut hi lutf bhare the……Mast ji aapse mulaaqaat ki chhaap abhi tak zahen meiN taazi hai….hamaare darmiyaaN ki guftagu meiN bachpan ka kuchh hissa aapse saanjha kiya tha ….. kuchh kisse toh aise hote haiN jo bhulaaye nahiN bhoolte … mere lekhan ke safar meiN jahaN hameiN ye bhi maloom nahiN tha ke ham kuch likhte bhi haiN mazaak-mazaakh meiN gaanoN ( songs) par parody banana hamaare liye aam sii baat thi…..tuk bandi kii our parallel song tayyar.Leejiye Anubhav ji ek our kissa aapki muhabbatoN ke hawaale ... Aajkal ka toh pata nahiN hamaare school meiN har teacher ka kuch na kuch naam-karan kar diya jaata tha…. Our demand seedhe se hamse ho jaaya karti thi ke “Doctor” is par kuch tukbandi ho jaaye… Ab school ke waqt meiN sabhi mere sehpaathi hameiN “Doctor” ke naam se pukaarte the. Ab chunki mere father Doctor the so mujhe isi naam se sambodhan hota tha. Hamaara ek teacher poora ganja tha …toh unke liye dostoN ki demand aayii to hamne bhi aanan faanan meiN, apni samajh ko idher udher ghumaya our ek song par perodi utaar dii ……. Wo gana aapne bhi bahut suna hoga , apne waqt meiN wo gana bahut hi mash’hoor hua karta tha,
saahir Ludhiyaanvi ji ka hamraaz movie ka ek geet

“Ai Neele Gagan ke tale dharti ka pyaar pale,
Aise hi jag meiN , aati haiN subheN, aise hi sham dhale.”

Hamne isko apni pairodi meiN kuch yuN tabdeel kiya

“Ai Neele Gagan ke tale Ganje ka taanga chale,
Ganje ka tanga Ganji ko lekar jungle ki or chale.”

school ke aannual function meiN hamne stage par is pairodi ko suna diya …to janaab sabhi teachers our students khoob hanse….. teachers ne bhi khoob majaa liya anjaane meiN us Ganje teacher Sir ki taraf dekhte hue … kuch students jinheN sab pata thaw o behudgi ki had tak zam kar hans rahe the. our hameiN stage se utane ke baad us par shaabaashi bhi khoob mili. Our function ke baad school ki chhuttiyaaN ho gayiN our sab Ghar chale gaye. ChhuttiyaaN jab khatam hui toh ham jaise hi school, apni class meiN pahunche, toh principle sahib ka chapraasi class meiN aaya or mera naam pukaar kar kahaa, aapko principle sahib ne talab kiya hai. Principle sahib ke naam se un dinoN toh waise hi hawa khushk ho jaati thi sabki….. ham bhi darte darte principle sahib ke room meiN pahunche. WahaaN hamaare Sanskrit ke teacher pahle hi mouzood the. Our jor jor se principle sahib ko kuch bataane meiN lage the…..mere jaane par unki Guftagu ek dam band ho gayi our dono meri taraf mukhatib ho kar dekhne lage ….principle sahib ne mujhe dekhte hi kaha oh ! toh phir aap haiN… ( Anubhav ji aapko jo kissa hamne sunaya tha woh us waqt principal sahib ko dhyaan aa gaya usi ke reference ko yaad kar unhoN ne yuN kaha ) Is par Principle sahib ne hamaare Sanskrit ke teacher ko waaapis class meiN bhej diya ye kah kar ki aapki class miss ho rahi aap jaaiye…is bacche ki maiN class leta hooN. Us teacher ke jaane ke baad….Principle sahib mere us gaane ki pairodi yaad kar phir jor se hanse lage….maiN ek dam stabd serious ho gayaa ….mujhe wo us waqt principal sahib ki hans,i ek villain ki, lagne lagi ….thodi der hansne ke baad unhone mujh se kaha harash beta ye kya hai ?….sach meiN tumne “apne teacher par” wo gaana banaya tha ?? …..maiN bhi kabhi haaN our kabhi naa karta raha ---isi beech- “beta daro nahiN…..tumhara ye art hai, mujhe bahut pasand hai, lekin beta tum honhaar bacche ho, our tum meiN hunar bhi hai…apne hunar par kabhi ….ek toh gumaan na karna …na kabhi apne hunar ko aise istemaal karna jis se kisi ko takleef ho…..agar tumhaare hunar se kisi ko takleef hoti hai toh samajh lo aapka hunar badne ki bajaaye ghatne lagega” ye kah kar meri peeth par haath rakha our jaane ke liye kaha.
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Harsh ji , Namaskar .

Bahut khshi hui dekh ker ki ek ke baad ek SDC ke purane Nageene pesh e khimat haiN SDC pe ..
Hum naye members jo ki pichle 3 to 4 years meIN sdc meiN jure hain , unko bhi aap logon se roobru hone ka aur jan.ne ka mauka milega .

Aap ko beech meIn pera hai maine SDC pe aur paya ki aap ek majhe hue shayar haiN .

Ek Sawal Shayari God gifted talent hai ya ise guru ki training se hasil kiya ja sakta hai ..

EK Request hai aapse thora bare font meIn likha kareiN , perne meiN sahuliyat hogi ..kya kareiN janab chashma laga hua hai na /////


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Q :- Ek Sawal Shayari God gifted talent hai ya ise guru ki training se hasil kiya ja sakta hai ….

A : Mohtaram Sanjay ji ….. aapne bahut achha swaal poocha hai ……. Iska jawaab sirf ek do shabdoN meiN nahiN diya ja sakta……kyuN ke donoN hi swaal ek doosre se judey haiN ……Shayari actual meiN EhsaasoN ka ek pulinda hai jo har shaks meiN paida toh hota hai magar har shaks usey byaan nahiN kar sakta our in EhsaasoN ko swar lahriyoN meiN byaan karna hi shayri hoti hai …..our ye bayaanagi God Gifted hi hoti hai , ye bayaanagi har shaks meiN nahiN hoti.

Our jis shaks ke ander ye swar lahriyaaN paida hoti haiN unheN shayri ke daayre meiN byaan kaise karte haiN uske liye Guru ki zaroorat padti hai.

Suna hoga aapne…

“bin Guru gatii na koy” …….lekin aajkal Internet ka dour hai. Our sab kuch wahaN mil jaata hai. Agar koi mehnat kar sakta hai to who khud bhi ache acche shayroN ko paRh paRh kar apne ko taraash sakta hai our apne senior saathiyoN se pukhta samajh haasil kar sakta hai…..unke liye Wahi Guru haiN. Lekin ek saccha Guru aapke ander ki shayri acchi tarah pesh karne yogya bana sakta hai ismeiN koi do raai nahiN hai.

Umeed karta huN ….maiN aapke swaal ke saath nyaay kar paaya hooN…

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Janaab Anubhav Minocha ji Urf Mast ji aadaab, khato-khatawat ke is zone meiN aapki mohabbatoN ke liye shukriyaa – Aapne sach farmaaya , aapke saath aamne saamne bitaaye 2-3 ghante sach meiN bahut hi lutf bhare the……Mast ji aapse mulaaqaat ki chhaap abhi tak zahen meiN taazi hai….hamaare darmiyaaN ki guftagu meiN bachpan ka kuchh hissa aapse saanjha kiya tha ….. kuchh kisse toh aise hote haiN jo bhulaaye nahiN bhoolte … mere lekhan ke safar meiN jahaN hameiN ye bhi maloom nahiN tha ke ham kuch likhte bhi haiN mazaak-mazaakh meiN gaanoN ( songs) par parody banana hamaare liye aam sii baat thi…..tuk bandi kii our parallel song tayyar.Leejiye Anubhav ji ek our kissa aapki muhabbatoN ke hawaale ... Aajkal ka toh pata nahiN hamaare school meiN har teacher ka kuch na kuch naam-karan kar diya jaata tha…. Our demand seedhe se hamse ho jaaya karti thi ke “Doctor” is par kuch tukbandi ho jaaye… Ab school ke waqt meiN sabhi mere sehpaathi hameiN “Doctor” ke naam se pukaarte the. Ab chunki mere father Doctor the so mujhe isi naam se sambodhan hota tha. Hamaara ek teacher poora ganja tha …toh unke liye dostoN ki demand aayii to hamne bhi aanan faanan meiN, apni samajh ko idher udher ghumaya our ek song par perodi utaar dii ……. Wo gana aapne bhi bahut suna hoga , apne waqt meiN wo gana bahut hi mash’hoor hua karta tha,
saahir Ludhiyaanvi ji ka hamraaz movie ka ek geet

“Ai Neele Gagan ke tale dharti ka pyaar pale,
Aise hi jag meiN , aati haiN subheN, aise hi sham dhale.”

Hamne isko apni pairodi meiN kuch yuN tabdeel kiya

“Ai Neele Gagan ke tale Ganje ka taanga chale,
Ganje ka tanga Ganji ko lekar jungle ki or chale.”

school ke aannual function meiN hamne stage par is pairodi ko suna diya …to janaab sabhi teachers our students khoob hanse….. teachers ne bhi khoob majaa liya anjaane meiN us Ganje teacher Sir ki taraf dekhte hue … kuch students jinheN sab pata thaw o behudgi ki had tak zam kar hans rahe the. our hameiN stage se utane ke baad us par shaabaashi bhi khoob mili. Our function ke baad school ki chhuttiyaaN ho gayiN our sab Ghar chale gaye. ChhuttiyaaN jab khatam hui toh ham jaise hi school, apni class meiN pahunche, toh principle sahib ka chapraasi class meiN aaya or mera naam pukaar kar kahaa, aapko principle sahib ne talab kiya hai. Principle sahib ke naam se un dinoN toh waise hi hawa khushk ho jaati thi sabki….. ham bhi darte darte principle sahib ke room meiN pahunche. WahaaN hamaare Sanskrit ke teacher pahle hi mouzood the. Our jor jor se principle sahib ko kuch bataane meiN lage the…..mere jaane par unki Guftagu ek dam band ho gayi our dono meri taraf mukhatib ho kar dekhne lage ….principle sahib ne mujhe dekhte hi kaha oh ! toh phir aap haiN… ( Anubhav ji aapko jo kissa hamne sunaya tha woh us waqt principal sahib ko dhyaan aa gaya usi ke reference ko yaad kar unhoN ne yuN kaha ) Is par Principle sahib ne hamaare Sanskrit ke teacher ko waaapis class meiN bhej diya ye kah kar ki aapki class miss ho rahi aap jaaiye…is bacche ki maiN class leta hooN. Us teacher ke jaane ke baad….Principle sahib mere us gaane ki pairodi yaad kar phir jor se hanse lage….maiN ek dam stabd serious ho gayaa ….mujhe wo us waqt principal sahib ki hans,i ek villain ki, lagne lagi ….thodi der hansne ke baad unhone mujh se kaha harash beta ye kya hai ?….sach meiN tumne “apne teacher par” wo gaana banaya tha ?? …..maiN bhi kabhi haaN our kabhi naa karta raha ---isi beech- “beta daro nahiN…..tumhara ye art hai, mujhe bahut pasand hai, lekin beta tum honhaar bacche ho, our tum meiN hunar bhi hai…apne hunar par kabhi ….ek toh gumaan na karna …na kabhi apne hunar ko aise istemaal karna jis se kisi ko takleef ho…..agar tumhaare hunar se kisi ko takleef hoti hai toh samajh lo aapka hunar badne ki bajaaye ghatne lagega” ye kah kar meri peeth par haath rakha our jaane ke liye kaha.
……iss baat se maiN khud bhi aahat hua. Our us haadse ke baad se kisi vyakti vishesh par tanzia nagmeiN kahna maine band kar diya.




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Janaab Anubhav Minocha ji Urf Mast ji aadaab, khato-khatawat ke is zone meiN aapki mohabbatoN ke liye shukriyaa – Aapne sach farmaaya , aapke saath aamne saamne bitaaye 2-3 ghante sach meiN bahut hi lutf bhare the……Mast ji aapse mulaaqaat ki chhaap abhi tak zahen meiN taazi hai….hamaare darmiyaaN ki guftagu meiN bachpan ka kuchh hissa aapse saanjha kiya tha ….. kuchh kisse toh aise hote haiN jo bhulaaye nahiN bhoolte … mere lekhan ke safar meiN jahaN hameiN ye bhi maloom nahiN tha ke ham kuch likhte bhi haiN mazaak-mazaakh meiN gaanoN ( songs) par parody banana hamaare liye aam sii baat thi…..tuk bandi kii our parallel song tayyar.Leejiye Anubhav ji ek our kissa aapki muhabbatoN ke hawaale ... Aajkal ka toh pata nahiN hamaare school meiN har teacher ka kuch na kuch naam-karan kar diya jaata tha…. Our demand seedhe se hamse ho jaaya karti thi ke “Doctor” is par kuch tukbandi ho jaaye… Ab school ke waqt meiN sabhi mere sehpaathi hameiN “Doctor” ke naam se pukaarte the. Ab chunki mere father Doctor the so mujhe isi naam se sambodhan hota tha. Hamaara ek teacher poora ganja tha …toh unke liye dostoN ki demand aayii to hamne bhi aanan faanan meiN, apni samajh ko idher udher ghumaya our ek song par perodi utaar dii ……. Wo gana aapne bhi bahut suna hoga , apne waqt meiN wo gana bahut hi mash’hoor hua karta tha,
saahir Ludhiyaanvi ji ka hamraaz movie ka ek geet

“Ai Neele Gagan ke tale dharti ka pyaar pale,
Aise hi jag meiN , aati haiN subheN, aise hi sham dhale.”

Hamne isko apni pairodi meiN kuch yuN tabdeel kiya

“Ai Neele Gagan ke tale Ganje ka taanga chale,
Ganje ka tanga Ganji ko lekar jungle ki or chale.”

school ke aannual function meiN hamne stage par is pairodi ko suna diya …to janaab sabhi teachers our students khoob hanse….. teachers ne bhi khoob majaa liya anjaane meiN us Ganje teacher Sir ki taraf dekhte hue … kuch students jinheN sab pata thaw o behudgi ki had tak zam kar hans rahe the. our hameiN stage se utane ke baad us par shaabaashi bhi khoob mili. Our function ke baad school ki chhuttiyaaN ho gayiN our sab Ghar chale gaye. ChhuttiyaaN jab khatam hui toh ham jaise hi school, apni class meiN pahunche, toh principle sahib ka chapraasi class meiN aaya or mera naam pukaar kar kahaa, aapko principle sahib ne talab kiya hai. Principle sahib ke naam se un dinoN toh waise hi hawa khushk ho jaati thi sabki….. ham bhi darte darte principle sahib ke room meiN pahunche. WahaaN hamaare Sanskrit ke teacher pahle hi mouzood the. Our jor jor se principle sahib ko kuch bataane meiN lage the…..mere jaane par unki Guftagu ek dam band ho gayi our dono meri taraf mukhatib ho kar dekhne lage ….principle sahib ne mujhe dekhte hi kaha oh ! toh phir aap haiN… ( Anubhav ji aapko jo kissa hamne sunaya tha woh us waqt principal sahib ko dhyaan aa gaya usi ke reference ko yaad kar unhoN ne yuN kaha ) Is par Principle sahib ne hamaare Sanskrit ke teacher ko waaapis class meiN bhej diya ye kah kar ki aapki class miss ho rahi aap jaaiye…is bacche ki maiN class leta hooN. Us teacher ke jaane ke baad….Principle sahib mere us gaane ki pairodi yaad kar phir jor se hanse lage….maiN ek dam stabd serious ho gayaa ….mujhe wo us waqt principal sahib ki hans,i ek villain ki, lagne lagi ….thodi der hansne ke baad unhone mujh se kaha harash beta ye kya hai ?….sach meiN tumne “apne teacher par” wo gaana banaya tha ?? …..maiN bhi kabhi haaN our kabhi naa karta raha ---isi beech- “beta daro nahiN…..tumhara ye art hai, mujhe bahut pasand hai, lekin beta tum honhaar bacche ho, our tum meiN hunar bhi hai…apne hunar par kabhi ….ek toh gumaan na karna …na kabhi apne hunar ko aise istemaal karna jis se kisi ko takleef ho…..agar tumhaare hunar se kisi ko takleef hoti hai toh samajh lo aapka hunar badne ki bajaaye ghatne lagega” ye kah kar meri peeth par haath rakha our jaane ke liye kaha.
……iss baat se maiN khud bhi aahat hua. Our us haadse ke baad se kisi vyakti vishesh par tanzia nagmeiN kahna maine band kar diya.


waah....bahut khob kissa share kiya aapne sir..isme seekh bhi hai sabke liye...
shukriya mast sahab ka jo unhone aapse ise hamare sath baantne ko kaha..



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Harash ji...mere pitare meiN bahut saare sawaal hai, aap jawaab detey jayeN main aur sawaal lekar aati rhuNgi

1. aapka bachpan Delhi meiN beeta hai to hame apne bachpan se judi koi aisi baat batayeN jo aapko reh reh kar bachpan ki yaad dilati hai aaj bhi.

2. aap school meiN kaise student thy ? padaku ya shararti agar padaku thy to padai se judii koi khaas baat batayeN aur agar shararti thy to koi khaas shararat school time ki hamse share kijiye

3. Harash ji, agar shayri aapka janoon na hota to aur kya hota ?

4. aapke mutabik aik acche shayar meiN kya khoobiyaa honi chahiye ?

5. aapki nazar meiN SDC ? shayri meiN bayaan kareNge to hame behaaadddd accha lgega
Sunita ji Namaskaar— is behtareen Mehfil-e-guftagu meiN aapke sawaaloN ki potly phir se dekh raha huN main ….. Chaliye ek-ek kar Aapke pooche swaaloN ki or rukh karte haiN …

1. aapka bachpan Delhi meiN beeta hai to hame apne bachpan se judi koi aisi baat batayeN jo aapko reh reh kar bachpan ki yaad dilati hai aaj bhi.

Sunita ji har shaks ke aisi yaadeiN judi hoti haiN jo insaan ko peeche ki or dakelti haiN .. insaan baar baar unheN yaad karta hai…..aisi to bahut sii yaadeiN haiN …. Lekin ek aisa kissa jisne merii zindagii badal di aaj wo hi sunana chahta huN….
Schooling ka waqt—bachpan se study meiN pahle 10 bachoN meiN naam hua karta tha ….8th tak sab normal chalta raha….un dinoN 9th class meiN jab shift hua karte the…to subject (Science/Commerce/Arts )– choose karna hota tha. Choose karna sahi lafz nahiN hai balke 8th class ke result ke adhaar par inmeiN se subject a lot hua karta tha jo school authorities kiya karti thi. Maine Science chhoRh Commerce ko apnaayaa….kyuN ki mere sabhi ( another three)brothers ne bhi isi school meiN Commerce subject hi liya tha. Commerce Economics naye subject ----Sabhi bachoN ke demaag meiN ye pahle se hi ghar kar gya hua tha ki “Doctor” ko to koi dikkat nahiN hogi….master of commerce---bhaayii sabhi commerce students rahe haiN….. our main bhi collar ooNche rakhta tha….
Un dinoN weekly exam nahiN balke quarterly exam hua karte the…….9th ka pahla satra ……june july meiN pehla timaahi exam hua…….meri marks sheet mujhe mere zameer tak ko sharminda kar gayii ------ 5 subject hua karte the…..
(1) English (2) Math (3) Hindi (4) Commerce (5) Economics-----Max marks 40 each
Meri report card ke number –31/37/34/04/04 =total= 110 out of 200.
NazreiN jhuk gayiN …itni to mujhe bhi umeed nahiN thi…… Teacher hamaare jinka naam Sh Ramesh kumaar tha takreeban saare saal chappal pahen kar hi school aate the…oyr jab wo chalet the door se hi maloom ho jaata tha ki wo aa rahe haiN…kyu k wo chappal ko zameen par ragad ragad ke chala karte the….bahut hi sakht mizaaz ke the….thodi se galti par hi sara question galat kar dete the…. Commerce meiN sabse highest marks 40 meiN se 28 the. Meri Nazar meiN us 28 no per thi….k wo bhi to mera saathi hi tha …par pichhli class meiN normal tha. Khair ---- subject ek dam naye the to samajh ki pher thi. Teacher meiN class meiN khadaa kar bahut jaleel kiya….Our Tanz kiya- our likho kavitaayeiN ---gaane ---.
Economics ke teacher bhi kuch isi tarah ke swabhaav ke the…unhone bhi mera yahi haal kiya . Dil meiN aisi thhes lagi …sochaa ke hamaare bas ki nahiN hai ye commerce /Economics , is se accha hai is se vidaa lee jaaye. Wo din jalalat se beeta ….agle din jo hua uska toh andaza katayii bhi nahi tha ---- aisa laga jaise koii pahaad sar par gir padaa ho…… teacher ne numberoN ke hisaab se failures ki line alag kar dii ----- is se badii maar kisi ke liye kya ho sakti hai – ke uska period jab bhi aataa …sabhi failures ko us line meiN jaa kar baithna hota tha. Our is tabdeeli ke douraan jo guzarta tha…samjha ja sakta tha.
Lekin is jalalat ke chalte main zindagi ka har lamha bhool gayaa … our socha aisa kya hai is subject meiN jo samajh se bahar hua jaata hai….. ?? Jee jaan se bas books our maiN – our wo shaks jiske 28 number aaye the – mera param mitra tha…mujh se ziyada usey thhes lagi……mujhe hounsila deta our mujhe mere kathin swaaloN ko solve karta….kuch din wo mere ghar mere saath baitha…our maine commerce ko sirey se start kiya -…
aglaa satra aate aate …. Class meiN job hi home work milta – register meiN solve kar sabse pahle register mera hi table par hua karta ----Teacher ko doubt sataane laga..kahiN –nakal se to nahi solve kiya….sirf 4 no lane wala shaks….itni jald….
Usne board par mujh se swaaloN ke jawaab solve karwaane shuru kiye ----
aakhir ….usme mujhe class ka monitor bana diya…our ab halaat ye the ke class ko mere bharose chhod wo idher udher jaane lagaa. Our agle satra/timaahi meiN commerce meiN meiN 40 meiN se 36 marks our Economics meiN 31 marks aaye.

Ye haadsa mere liye turning point tha…jo aaj tak mujhe reh reh yaad aata hai….wo teacher our wo mera dost.

2. aap school meiN kaise student thy ? padaku ya shararti agar padaku thy to padai se judii koi khaas baat batayeN aur agar shararti thy to koi khaas shararat school time ki hamse share kijiye.

School meiN apni position kaisi thi ye baa-khoobi aapko ooper ke jawaab meiN pata chalhi gayii hogi . ye poora swaal ooper ke swaal meiN hi samayojit hai….
ham study meiN 9th se pahle 5/6 bachoN meiN hi aate the lekin ziyada padaaku nahiN the ..Normal apni study meiN jitni zaroorat thi utna hi kiya karte the. Shrarat bas itni….6th 7th se hi sports meiN school ki team meiN hua karte the…jis bhi teacher ka home work nahi kiya hota tha….practise ka bahana bana kar us class se rafu chakker ho jaate the.


3. Harash ji, agar shayri aapka janoon na hota to aur kya hota ?

Sunita ji Shayri meiN choice to koi hoti hi nahiN ye ahsaasoN ka uthnaa hai…jis bhi field meiN hota ye toh hota hi…..magar iske ilawa kya hota --------Toh main ek sports person bhi hota. Bahut Shouq tha ..our hunar bhi tha..lekin junoon ki had tak mere father is shouq ke against the… lekin unke objection ke baawjood…. Junior classes tak maine Kho-kho , State our national donoN khele haiN…..College level meiN VolleBall , Delhi State --- our Hockey National tak khela hooN.
University meiN Cross country race hua karti thi….10000 meter ki race meiN 3rd prize.
Lekin ????


4. aapke mutabik aik acche shayar meiN kya khoobiyaa honi chahiye ?

Meri nazar meiN Ek achha shayar--- ya Kavi
1) wahi hai jo apne jazbat, hu b hu apne readers tak pahuncha sake.
2) Jis shayri our jumle paRh kar, unke readers unse motivate hoN.
3) Jinki shayri ko bhumika ka sahara na lena padey wo khud apna asttitv byaan kare .
4) Asal shayar – apni shayri se aspne readers ko itna prabhavit karta hai – ki readers hi unHeN khitaab de dete haiN ki who kis vidaa ka shayar hai……i.e wo Hasya kavi hai ya Karun rass ka kavi ya koi our.
5) Ek achha shayar hamesha charchaoN meiN rehta hai – apni shayri ki wazeh se ya alochnaoN ki wazeh se- uski shayri meiN dam hai to baat uth.ti hai chahe koi bhi wazeh ho.
6) kabhi apne aapko puraa shayar Ghoshit nahi hone deta…wo har waqt seekhta hai our har us shayar ki kadra karta hai jinse wah nayi shiksha haasil karta hai .

5. aapki nazar meiN SDC ? shayri meiN bayaan kareNge to hame behaaadddd accha lgega sunita

Ek geet ka chhota tukda SDc ke hawaale karta huN….

Aisi gali bazaar na basti, aisa koii ab dwaar nahiN,
JahaN pe charche SDC ke hoN phir hota pyaar nahiN .
Kitni kavitayeiN kitne qatte our ghazleiN aabaad hui
SDC chamkaati unko jab tak mite andhkaar nahiN .

saadar !!

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Sunita ji Namaskaar— is behtareen Mehfil-e-guftagu meiN aapke sawaaloN ki potly phir se dekh raha huN main ….. Chaliye ek-ek kar Aapke pooche swaaloN ki or rukh karte haiN …

1. aapka bachpan Delhi meiN beeta hai to hame apne bachpan se judi koi aisi baat batayeN jo aapko reh reh kar bachpan ki yaad dilati hai aaj bhi.

Sunita ji har shaks ke aisi yaadeiN judi hoti haiN jo insaan ko peeche ki or dakelti haiN .. insaan baar baar unheN yaad karta hai…..aisi to bahut sii yaadeiN haiN …. Lekin ek aisa kissa jisne merii zindagii badal di aaj wo hi sunana chahta huN….
Schooling ka waqt—bachpan se study meiN pahle 10 bachoN meiN naam hua karta tha ….8th tak sab normal chalta raha….un dinoN 9th class meiN jab shift hua karte the…to subject (Science/Commerce/Arts )– choose karna hota tha. Choose karna sahi lafz nahiN hai balke 8th class ke result ke adhaar par inmeiN se subject a lot hua karta tha jo school authorities kiya karti thi. Maine Science chhoRh Commerce ko apnaayaa….kyuN ki mere sabhi ( another three)brothers ne bhi isi school meiN Commerce subject hi liya tha. Commerce Economics naye subject ----Sabhi bachoN ke demaag meiN ye pahle se hi ghar kar gya hua tha ki “Doctor” ko to koi dikkat nahiN hogi….master of commerce---bhaayii sabhi commerce students rahe haiN….. our main bhi collar ooNche rakhta tha….
Un dinoN weekly exam nahiN balke quarterly exam hua karte the…….9th ka pahla satra ……june july meiN pehla timaahi exam hua…….meri marks sheet mujhe mere zameer tak ko sharminda kar gayii ------ 5 subject hua karte the…..
(1) English (2) Math (3) Hindi (4) Commerce (5) Economics-----Max marks 40 each
Meri report card ke number –31/37/34/04/04 =total= 110 out of 200.
NazreiN jhuk gayiN …itni to mujhe bhi umeed nahiN thi…… Teacher hamaare jinka naam Sh Ramesh kumaar tha takreeban saare saal chappal pahen kar hi school aate the…oyr jab wo chalet the door se hi maloom ho jaata tha ki wo aa rahe haiN…kyu k wo chappal ko zameen par ragad ragad ke chala karte the….bahut hi sakht mizaaz ke the….thodi se galti par hi sara question galat kar dete the…. Commerce meiN sabse highest marks 40 meiN se 28 the. Meri Nazar meiN us 28 no per thi….k wo bhi to mera saathi hi tha …par pichhli class meiN normal tha. Khair ---- subject ek dam naye the to samajh ki pher thi. Teacher meiN class meiN khadaa kar bahut jaleel kiya….Our Tanz kiya- our likho kavitaayeiN ---gaane ---.
Economics ke teacher bhi kuch isi tarah ke swabhaav ke the…unhone bhi mera yahi haal kiya . Dil meiN aisi thhes lagi …sochaa ke hamaare bas ki nahiN hai ye commerce /Economics , is se accha hai is se vidaa lee jaaye. Wo din jalalat se beeta ….agle din jo hua uska toh andaza katayii bhi nahi tha ---- aisa laga jaise koii pahaad sar par gir padaa ho…… teacher ne numberoN ke hisaab se failures ki line alag kar dii ----- is se badii maar kisi ke liye kya ho sakti hai – ke uska period jab bhi aataa …sabhi failures ko us line meiN jaa kar baithna hota tha. Our is tabdeeli ke douraan jo guzarta tha…samjha ja sakta tha.
Lekin is jalalat ke chalte main zindagi ka har lamha bhool gayaa … our socha aisa kya hai is subject meiN jo samajh se bahar hua jaata hai….. ?? Jee jaan se bas books our maiN – our wo shaks jiske 28 number aaye the – mera param mitra tha…mujh se ziyada usey thhes lagi……mujhe hounsila deta our mujhe mere kathin swaaloN ko solve karta….kuch din wo mere ghar mere saath baitha…our maine commerce ko sirey se start kiya -…
aglaa satra aate aate …. Class meiN job hi home work milta – register meiN solve kar sabse pahle register mera hi table par hua karta ----Teacher ko doubt sataane laga..kahiN –nakal se to nahi solve kiya….sirf 4 no lane wala shaks….itni jald….
Usne board par mujh se swaaloN ke jawaab solve karwaane shuru kiye ----
aakhir ….usme mujhe class ka monitor bana diya…our ab halaat ye the ke class ko mere bharose chhod wo idher udher jaane lagaa. Our agle satra/timaahi meiN commerce meiN meiN 40 meiN se 36 marks our Economics meiN 31 marks aaye.

Ye haadsa mere liye turning point tha…jo aaj tak mujhe reh reh yaad aata hai….wo teacher our wo mera dost.

2. aap school meiN kaise student thy ? padaku ya shararti agar padaku thy to padai se judii koi khaas baat batayeN aur agar shararti thy to koi khaas shararat school time ki hamse share kijiye.

School meiN apni position kaisi thi ye baa-khoobi aapko ooper ke jawaab meiN pata chalhi gayii hogi . ye poora swaal ooper ke swaal meiN hi samayojit hai….
ham study meiN 9th se pahle 5/6 bachoN meiN hi aate the lekin ziyada padaaku nahiN the ..Normal apni study meiN jitni zaroorat thi utna hi kiya karte the. Shrarat bas itni….6th 7th se hi sports meiN school ki team meiN hua karte the…jis bhi teacher ka home work nahi kiya hota tha….practise ka bahana bana kar us class se rafu chakker ho jaate the.


3. Harash ji, agar shayri aapka janoon na hota to aur kya hota ?

Sunita ji Shayri meiN choice to koi hoti hi nahiN ye ahsaasoN ka uthnaa hai…jis bhi field meiN hota ye toh hota hi…..magar iske ilawa kya hota --------Toh main ek sports person bhi hota. Bahut Shouq tha ..our hunar bhi tha..lekin junoon ki had tak mere father is shouq ke against the… lekin unke objection ke baawjood…. Junior classes tak maine Kho-kho , State our national donoN khele haiN…..College level meiN VolleBall , Delhi State --- our Hockey National tak khela hooN.
University meiN Cross country race hua karti thi….10000 meter ki race meiN 3rd prize.
Lekin ????


4. aapke mutabik aik acche shayar meiN kya khoobiyaa honi chahiye ?

Meri nazar meiN Ek achha shayar--- ya Kavi
1) wahi hai jo apne jazbat, hu b hu apne readers tak pahuncha sake.
2) Jis shayri our jumle paRh kar, unke readers unse motivate hoN.
3) Jinki shayri ko bhumika ka sahara na lena padey wo khud apna asttitv byaan kare .
4) Asal shayar – apni shayri se aspne readers ko itna prabhavit karta hai – ki readers hi unHeN khitaab de dete haiN ki who kis vidaa ka shayar hai……i.e wo Hasya kavi hai ya Karun rass ka kavi ya koi our.
5) Ek achha shayar hamesha charchaoN meiN rehta hai – apni shayri ki wazeh se ya alochnaoN ki wazeh se- uski shayri meiN dam hai to baat uth.ti hai chahe koi bhi wazeh ho.
6) kabhi apne aapko puraa shayar Ghoshit nahi hone deta…wo har waqt seekhta hai our har us shayar ki kadra karta hai jinse wah nayi shiksha haasil karta hai .

5. aapki nazar meiN SDC ? shayri meiN bayaan kareNge to hame behaaadddd accha lgega sunita

Ek geet ka chhota tukda SDc ke hawaale karta huN….

Aisi gali bazaar na basti, aisa koii ab dwaar nahiN,
JahaN pe charche SDC ke hoN phir hota pyaar nahiN .
Kitni kavitayeiN kitne qatte our ghazleiN aabaad hui
SDC chamkaati unko jab tak mite andhkaar nahiN .

saadar !!



Harash ji.........aapne mere sawaaloN ke jis behtreen sakreeke se dekar meri jigyasa ko shaant kiya hai...maiN shukaruguzaar hu aapki.

aapne pehle sawaal ka jo jawaab diya...wo padne wale bacchoN ke liye bahut badi siksha hai ki kuch bhi na-mumkin nahi hai "haar ke aage Jeet hai"

bahut accha lag rha hai aapse guftagu karna.


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waah har sawaal ka jawaab aap bade hee dilchasp tareeke se de rahe hain..aapko padhna bahut hee achcha lag raha hai....ab lijiye in sawalon ke beech kuch halke fulke sawaal ....

1.shayri ke alawa aur kya kya shauk rakhte hain aap...

2.ab kuch pasand aur na pasand.....

place for holidays..

favourite food..

old or new songs..

romantic or sad songs..

movies or theater..

reading or listening..

3.agar aap ki book suggest karna chahein jisne aapko bahut muttasir kiya ho to vo kaun si hogi...

ab kuch dil ki baatein jinke jawaab main aapke lafzon me janna chahoongi...

a)apne ehsaas kisi par zahir karne chahiye ya nahi aap kya kahenge kya kisi samne ro lene se aap kamzor ho jate hain..ya aansoo bah jane ke baad aapko nayi takat dete hain...

b)kya apne dil ke jazbaat dil me rakhna zyada sahi hai....

c)kabhi kisi ki baton se bahut dil dukha ho...aisi situation me kya karna chahiye...

filhaal itna hee....ijazat.....



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Harash ji.........aapne mere sawaaloN ke jis behtreen sakreeke se dekar meri jigyasa ko shaant kiya hai...maiN shukaruguzaar hu aapki.

aapne pehle sawaal ka jo jawaab diya...wo padne wale bacchoN ke liye bahut badi siksha hai ki kuch bhi na-mumkin nahi hai "haar ke aage Jeet hai"

bahut accha lag rha hai aapse guftagu karna.
Sunita ji is gaftugoo meiN aap ki aamad swaaloN ke roop meiN ...........our hamaari .hamari aik adna si koshish aapke swaaloN ke jawaab meiN ..........aor sab se bhaR ker.....aapko in jawaaboN se khud ka ahsaasoN meiN rabroo hona....sab acchha laga ------ uske liye mujhe bahut khushi hui.............

saabhaar!!
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waah har sawaal ka jawaab aap bade hee dilchasp tareeke se de rahe hain..aapko padhna bahut hee achcha lag raha hai....ab lijiye in sawalon ke beech kuch halke fulke sawaal ....

1.shayri ke alawa aur kya kya shauk rakhte hain aap...

2.ab kuch pasand aur na pasand.....

place for holidays..

favourite food..

old or new songs..

romantic or sad songs..

movies or theater..

reading or listening..

3.agar aap ki book suggest karna chahein jisne aapko bahut muttasir kiya ho to vo kaun si hogi...

ab kuch dil ki baatein jinke jawaab main aapke lafzon me janna chahoongi...

a)apne ehsaas kisi par zahir karne chahiye ya nahi aap kya kahenge kya kisi samne ro lene se aap kamzor ho jate hain..ya aansoo bah jane ke baad aapko nayi takat dete hain...

b)kya apne dil ke jazbaat dil me rakhna zyada sahi hai....

c)kabhi kisi ki baton se bahut dil dukha ho...aisi situation me kya karna chahiye...

filhaal itna hee....ijazat.....
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Mujhe lagta hai shayri.com par yaqeenan meri Janam Kundli banakar hi chhodeNge aap log..ye nayaab taree’ka hai kisi ke baare meiN sab kuch jan.ne ka…

1.shayri ke alawa aur kya kya shauk rakhte hain aap...


-ye Jag vidit hai ke umra ke hisaab se shouq bhi apna astitva badalta jaata hai….bachpan meiN shouq active tha aaj wo active ka hokar passive sa ho kar rah gayaa hai….

-Out door Sports …jiska main pahle bhi Zikra kar chukka hooN… Hockey ka full back player tha .. lekin aajkal sab band – Cricket ka zanoon logon meiN hota hai to TV par wahi dekhte haiN….waise World Cup jab pak meiN hua to dekhne ke liye Lahore ja chukka huN.
- English Poetry—Internet par sabse pahle Hindi ki bajaaye English poetry shuru hui
Shayad uska link yahaN dena munasib na ho.
-Ek tele Film ( One and half hour)– written by me “Chinaar Ki SargoshiaaN “…
Subject = Atankwaad ---produced and directed by Ms Kanchan Vatan, released in 1997 Shown at Delhi Doorshan.
-Writing Serials
-Story writing
-Reading Books – as a feedback for my writing--related to any type of shayri ….and love to find simple to simple words which can be used my writes…as I want my shayri so simple..even a lay man could understand..and it should look as mine….it shouldn’t have the words to look like a bundle of borrowed words….

2.ab kuch pasand aur na pasand.....

-place for holidays.. Simla, Mussorie, any such cool place…..lekin Simla I have gone for 12 times upto 1981 afterwards one time last year

-favourite food….. Simple Veg food …. Rice at night as a light food....

-old or new songs………… Old Songs

-romantic or sad songs….. Sad Songs

-movies or theater……… Not good in it….agar koii khaas acchhi Scipt ho to zaroor jaata hooN.

-reading or listening………. Both

3) agar aap ki book suggest karna chahein jisne aapko bahut muttasir kiya ho to vo kaun si hogi...

- sach poocho to Madhu ji Pahle ki baat our thi magar jab se computer ka zamana
aaya hai sara waqt isee per nikal jata hai. Ab kisi ko kitab haath meN lene ki Fursat hi kahan. Urdu sites bhi bahut haiN our Hindi sites bhi bahut haiN wahiN reading meiN waqt , jitna bhi milta hai ..bita deta hooN…. Main kisi bhi manch par ab nahiN janaa hota …… Na jaane kyuN Sunitaa ji dastak par unke zahneey pyaar ko dekhte hue bas chalaa aaya – Achhi our simple shahyri kehne waaloN ke liye Rekhta ek achhi site hai.

ab kuch dil ki baatein jinke jawaab main aapke lafzon me janna chahoongi...

a) apne ehsaas kisi par zahir karne chahiye ya nahi aap kya kahenge kya kisi samne ro lene se aap kamzor ho jate hain..ya aansoo bah jane ke baad aapko nayi takat dete hain...

- Aapke is swaal ka jawaab – shayad mere kisi kathan meiN aapko zaroor mil jaayega…..Insaan ek aisa shaks hai jisey doosroN ki zindagi meiN jhaankne ka bahut shouq hota hai….chahe wo legal taree’ka ho ya illegal taree’ka. Na jaane aisa kyuN hai….chahe WO us shaks ko jaanta hai ya nahiN. Us ki personal zindagi ke baare meiN sun.ne ke liye ghanto bitaa sakta hai….lekin kya wo uska dost hai ? bhayii hai ? our ya koi our Rishta? Aisa nahiN hai.
Har kisi ko aap apna nahiN kah sakte….balki kisi ko bhi aap apna nahiN kah sakte jo aapke dil ki baate aap jaise hi dil meiN rakh kar share kar sake…our dukhoN/khushiyoN meiN aapka sath de sake…ya shareek ho sake .
bahut kam shaks hote haiN jinheN aapke dukh se dukh our aapki khushi se khushi hoti hai…warnaa sabhi aapke dukhoN par Hanse ge our khushi our kaamyaabi meiN jeolousey kareNge…ooper se khush hone ka dikhawa bhar hi hota hai……Yaqeenan koi aisa dost jisey aapne apni friend list meiN daakhil kiya ho jisey aap asal friend kah sake koi rare hi ho sakta hai… …kyuN ki ek dost hi aisa shaks ho sakta hai jis se aap apne gam o khush takseem kar sakte haiN. Apne hamsafar ke saath bhi kayii baar aap apni sab baateiN share nahiN karte jo aap apne dost se kar sakte haN. Jis se aap share kar ke apne aap ko halka mehsoos karte haiN. Friend wahi jiske sabhi pros n cons ek doosre ko apnaane hote haiN…..kuch kamiyaN sabhi meiN hoti haiN…..wo bhi apnaani hoti haiN…Asal dost ke saath share karne meiN koi harz nahiN….lekin dost wahi jo asal dost ho…Zism do jaan ek. Aise shaks ke aage apne aansoo bahaane se aapko raahat zaroor milegi anyatha nahiN.

b)kya apne dil ke jazbaat dil me rakhna zyada sahi hai....

- Ye us baat us jazbaat ki Gehraaii par munassar jis baat ko lekar aap itna sanjeedah haiN…kaii baar dil ke jazbaat dil meiN hi jazb karne se depression meiN bhi jaane ka andesaa ho sakta hai…is liye us uljhan ko suljhaane ke liye us se related person se ya us baat ka relation jis se bhi ho …ya us uljhan ko suljhaane ka koi bhi tareeka dhoondhne meiN hi behtaree hai .
ya aise jazbaat waqt par zaahir na hone se nuksaan bhi ho sakta hai……ya waqt se pehle zaahir karne se nuksaan ho sakta

c) kabhi kisi ki baton se bahut dil dukha ho...aisi situation me kya karna chahiye...

-Jitni ziyada nazdeeki hogi mann utna ziyada aahat hoga---so –have a patience – waqt ka intzaar- wo agar aapka apna hai --- toh zaroor waapis aayega aapke zakhm ka dard door karne ke liye anyatha nahiN……waqt rehte sambhalna hi theek hai.


Saabhaar !!!


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Mujhe lagta hai shayri.com par yaqeenan meri Janam Kundli banakar hi chhodeNge aap log..ye nayaab taree’ka hai kisi ke baare meiN sab kuch jan.ne ka…

1.shayri ke alawa aur kya kya shauk rakhte hain aap...


-ye Jag vidit hai ke umra ke hisaab se shouq bhi apna astitva badalta jaata hai….bachpan meiN shouq active tha aaj wo active ka hokar passive sa ho kar rah gayaa hai….

-Out door Sports …jiska main pahle bhi Zikra kar chukka hooN… Hockey ka full back player tha .. lekin aajkal sab band – Cricket ka zanoon logon meiN hota hai to TV par wahi dekhte haiN….waise World Cup jab pak meiN hua to dekhne ke liye Lahore ja chukka huN.
- English Poetry—Internet par sabse pahle Hindi ki bajaaye English poetry shuru hui
Shayad uska link yahaN dena munasib na ho.
-Ek tele Film ( One and half hour)– written by me “Chinaar Ki SargoshiaaN “…
Subject = Atankwaad ---produced and directed by Ms Kanchan Vatan, released in 1997 Shown at Delhi Doorshan.
-Writing Serials
-Story writing
-Reading Books – as a feedback for my writing--related to any type of shayri ….and love to find simple to simple words which can be used my writes…as I want my shayri so simple..even a lay man could understand..and it should look as mine….it shouldn’t have the words to look like a bundle of borrowed words….

2.ab kuch pasand aur na pasand.....

-place for holidays.. Simla, Mussorie, any such cool place…..lekin Simla I have gone for 12 times upto 1981 afterwards one time last year

-favourite food….. Simple Veg food …. Rice at night as a light food....

-old or new songs………… Old Songs

-romantic or sad songs….. Sad Songs

-movies or theater……… Not good in it….agar koii khaas acchhi Scipt ho to zaroor jaata hooN.

-reading or listening………. Both

3) agar aap ki book suggest karna chahein jisne aapko bahut muttasir kiya ho to vo kaun si hogi...

- sach poocho to Madhu ji Pahle ki baat our thi magar jab se computer ka zamana
aaya hai sara waqt isee per nikal jata hai. Ab kisi ko kitab haath meN lene ki Fursat hi kahan. Urdu sites bhi bahut haiN our Hindi sites bhi bahut haiN wahiN reading meiN waqt , jitna bhi milta hai ..bita deta hooN…. Main kisi bhi manch par ab nahiN janaa hota …… Na jaane kyuN Sunitaa ji dastak par unke zahneey pyaar ko dekhte hue bas chalaa aaya – Achhi our simple shahyri kehne waaloN ke liye Rekhta ek achhi site hai.

ab kuch dil ki baatein jinke jawaab main aapke lafzon me janna chahoongi...

a) apne ehsaas kisi par zahir karne chahiye ya nahi aap kya kahenge kya kisi samne ro lene se aap kamzor ho jate hain..ya aansoo bah jane ke baad aapko nayi takat dete hain...

- Aapke is swaal ka jawaab – shayad mere kisi kathan meiN aapko zaroor mil jaayega…..Insaan ek aisa shaks hai jisey doosroN ki zindagi meiN jhaankne ka bahut shouq hota hai….chahe wo legal taree’ka ho ya illegal taree’ka. Na jaane aisa kyuN hai….chahe WO us shaks ko jaanta hai ya nahiN. Us ki personal zindagi ke baare meiN sun.ne ke liye ghanto bitaa sakta hai….lekin kya wo uska dost hai ? bhayii hai ? our ya koi our Rishta? Aisa nahiN hai.
Har kisi ko aap apna nahiN kah sakte….balki kisi ko bhi aap apna nahiN kah sakte jo aapke dil ki baate aap jaise hi dil meiN rakh kar share kar sake…our dukhoN/khushiyoN meiN aapka sath de sake…ya shareek ho sake .
bahut kam shaks hote haiN jinheN aapke dukh se dukh our aapki khushi se khushi hoti hai…warnaa sabhi aapke dukhoN par Hanse ge our khushi our kaamyaabi meiN jeolousey kareNge…ooper se khush hone ka dikhawa bhar hi hota hai……Yaqeenan koi aisa dost jisey aapne apni friend list meiN daakhil kiya ho jisey aap asal friend kah sake koi rare hi ho sakta hai… …kyuN ki ek dost hi aisa shaks ho sakta hai jis se aap apne gam o khush takseem kar sakte haiN. Apne hamsafar ke saath bhi kayii baar aap apni sab baateiN share nahiN karte jo aap apne dost se kar sakte haN. Jis se aap share kar ke apne aap ko halka mehsoos karte haiN. Friend wahi jiske sabhi pros n cons ek doosre ko apnaane hote haiN…..kuch kamiyaN sabhi meiN hoti haiN…..wo bhi apnaani hoti haiN…Asal dost ke saath share karne meiN koi harz nahiN….lekin dost wahi jo asal dost ho…Zism do jaan ek. Aise shaks ke aage apne aansoo bahaane se aapko raahat zaroor milegi anyatha nahiN.

b)kya apne dil ke jazbaat dil me rakhna zyada sahi hai....

- Ye us baat us jazbaat ki Gehraaii par munassar jis baat ko lekar aap itna sanjeedah haiN…kaii baar dil ke jazbaat dil meiN hi jazb karne se depression meiN bhi jaane ka andesaa ho sakta hai…is liye us uljhan ko suljhaane ke liye us se related person se ya us baat ka relation jis se bhi ho …ya us uljhan ko suljhaane ka koi bhi tareeka dhoondhne meiN hi behtaree hai .
ya aise jazbaat waqt par zaahir na hone se nuksaan bhi ho sakta hai……ya waqt se pehle zaahir karne se nuksaan ho sakta

c) kabhi kisi ki baton se bahut dil dukha ho...aisi situation me kya karna chahiye...

-Jitni ziyada nazdeeki hogi mann utna ziyada aahat hoga---so –have a patience – waqt ka intzaar- wo agar aapka apna hai --- toh zaroor waapis aayega aapke zakhm ka dard door karne ke liye anyatha nahiN……waqt rehte sambhalna hi theek hai.


Saabhaar !!!


Namaskaar harash ji....
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Mujhe khushi hai ki maine aapse ye sawaal kiye aur aapke bare me aur bhi janne ko mila......
Sahi kaha aapne umra ke sath shauk bhi badalte rahte hain..

Aapne hamse chinaar ki sargoshiyon ka zikra kiya mujhe khushi huyi ki aapke is hunar ke bare me main jaan payi...
Apni likhi koi short story hamse bhi share kijiyega agar munasib samjhein to.....

aajkal net par reading ka matter bahut hai aur zyadatar log ise hee prefer karte hain.....sahi baat hai ye..

..aapne meri dil ki uljhano ka jawaab bahut gahrai de diya sir bahut shukriya...sach hai..apna kahne aur apna hone me bahut fark hai...aur utna hee sach ye bhi ki bahut mushkil hai duniya me ki wakai koi apna mil jaye..jo aapke ehsaason ko apki tarah samajh paye.....bahut sahi baat kahi aapne..

Ek baar fir bahut bahut shukriya...jo aapne apne keemti vaqt me se kuch vaqt mere sawalon ke liye nikala......

Ijazat dijiyega...



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Namaskaar harash ji....
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Mujhe khushi hai ki maine aapse ye sawaal kiye aur aapke bare me aur bhi janne ko mila......
Sahi kaha aapne umra ke sath shauk bhi badalte rahte hain..

Aapne hamse chinaar ki sargoshiyon ka zikra kiya mujhe khushi huyi ki aapke is hunar ke bare me main jaan payi...
Apni likhi koi short story hamse bhi share kijiyega agar munasib samjhein to.....

aajkal net par reading ka matter bahut hai aur zyadatar log ise hee prefer karte hain.....sahi baat hai ye..

..aapne meri dil ki uljhano ka jawaab bahut gahrai de diya sir bahut shukriya...sach hai..apna kahne aur apna hone me bahut fark hai...aur utna hee sach ye bhi ki bahut mushkil hai duniya me ki wakai koi apna mil jaye..jo aapke ehsaason ko apki tarah samajh paye.....bahut sahi baat kahi aapne..

Ek baar fir bahut bahut shukriya...jo aapne apne keemti vaqt me se kuch vaqt mere sawalon ke liye nikala......

Ijazat dijiyega...
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