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Khawab ka sehar...! - 1st September 2004, 01:23 AM

Pyaar ki gali .Khawab ka sehar
Har jagah tujhe dekhe nazar;

Zor na chale ,Jazabaat par
Dediya tujhe jaan o jigar

Tere bina ab toa mushkil hai
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1st September 2004, 12:17 PM

Pyaar ki gali .Khawab ka sehar
Har jagah tujhe dekhe nazar;

Zor na chale ,Jazabaat par
Dediya tujhe jaan o jigar

Tere bina ab toa mushkil hai
Mera guzar mera guzar.....!


Waha Fareed Wah!! Kitna sundar likha hai tumne is baar! Ur getting better day by day... Mujhe bahut pasand aye tumhare yeh sher.... Aage bhi aise hi likhte rehna


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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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hello - 1st September 2004, 08:35 PM

hi


aapki kavita padi achha laga , Pahle mai apni kavitaye likh kar

khud pad kar hasta tha , ek din kuchh dosto ne Air delhi par kavita padne ka davat nama bheja .

Maine apni kavita padni shuru kar di phir to ye silsila shuru ho gaya .aub tak jaari hai. aaj kal aap kya kar rahi hai, jara apne baare me kuchh bataye to hum apne aapko khushnaseev samjhege apni kavtaoo ko naya rang rup dete rahe .

chand line .......

hum apni barbaad jindgi ka boojh apne kandho par dho rahe hai , maout ke entjaar me ek muddat se ro rahe hai.

maout bhi bhepha jo kareev nahi aati hai , muphlish ke dour me wo tarsati hai.

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2nd September 2004, 12:57 PM

hi pulkit thnx 4 liking my words dude.Ur words make me more n more confident thnx.


Hi sushil thnx dude.ur words r precious 2 me thnx dude thnx a lot
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Hi Fareed Sahab,

Very nice n touchin words there. Luved it a lot. Hope 2 c more from u.

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2nd September 2004, 11:59 PM

Hi Salim sahab bahut bahut shukriya bhaisaab meri lines ki tareef karne ka.
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