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Thumbs down madad chahti hei ye hawwa ki beti.........L a j j a - 10th November 2003, 01:35 AM

Kaun kehta hei mujhe naz hei apne mulk pe............. Aye padhe or phir bataye kya use naz hei ....................... aaina dikhate hein ye ashar .....

ye kuche ye neelam ghar dilkashi ke
ye lut te hue karwan zindagi ke
kahan hein kahan hein muhafiz khudi ke
jinhein naz heihind pe wo kahan hein

ye purpech galiyan ye badnaam bazar
ye gumnaam rahi ye sikkon ki jhankar
ye asmat ke saude ye sudon pe takraar
jinhein naaz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

ye sadiyon se bekhwab sehmi si galiyan
ye masli hui adhkhilin zard kaliyan
ye bikti hui khokhli rang raliyan
jinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

wo ujle darichon me payal ki chanchan
thaki haari sanson pe table ki dhan dhan
ye berooh klamron me khnsi ki than than
jinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

ye phoolon ke gazre pe peepon ke cheetein
ye bebak nazrein ye gustakh fikre
ye dhalke badan or ye beemar chehre
jinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

yahan peer bhi aa chuke hein jawan bhi
tanomand bete bhi abba miyan bhi
ye biwi bhi hei, or behen bhi hei maa bhi
jinhein naaz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

madad chahti hei ye hawwa ki beti
yashoda ki kamsin wo radha ki beti
payambar ki ummat zulekha ki beti
zinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

zara mulk ke rehbaron ko bulao
ye kooche ye galiyan ye manzar dikhao
zinhein naz hei hind par unko lao
kahan hein kahan hain kahan hainnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.........

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hello - 10th November 2003, 12:15 PM

Dard-e-sush ji,

aapne jo kavita yaha share ki hai. bhaie mujhe to bahut achchhi lagi. man mein ek naya utsaah bher aaya.likhate rahiye,




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Re: hello - 10th November 2003, 01:55 PM

DARD BHAI
bahoot khoob gazal se ru-b-ru karwaya hai aapne,,,mein halaki is gazal ko kai martaba sun chuka hoon magar jab bhi sunta hoon is mein chupa marm mujhe udelit kar jata hai...is gazal ko janab Sahir Ludhiyanwi ne likha hai,,, bahoot khoob hai yeh gazal....
aap ka shukriya isko yahan share karne ke liye.
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10th November 2003, 03:00 PM

Kaal raat ko hi meine parhlee thi lekin chaha koi aur ake reply kare pehle. Aapne yeh gazal yeaha post karke dil ki baate jabah par le aye hein, bohot bohot shukriya aapka. Poet ka pata chal gaya hein, manoj Jeeka shukriya. Aise hi likhte aur post karte rahiyega. I know how you feel. Khudako hi pata kyu aise hein!! Hum Insaan keya kehsakte hein duwahi karsakte hein aur duwa toh hamesha rahti hein. Thanks. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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10th November 2003, 05:37 PM

SusH BHai ..

AapNe too socHNe pe mazBooR kaR Diya wakeyi KaHaN HaiN .. BHai aapki SHikayat BHi Beja NaHi Hai auR JiNHoNe Ye LikHa Hai unke too DiL ke juzBaat HaiN .. MaiN kya kaHuN KHuD ki Hi ziNDGi ko NaHi samjH paa RaHa HuN iNN GaHRe sawaLaat ka kya jawaB DuNGa .. fiR BHi BHai .. aapNe yaHaN isse post kiya BaHut BaHut SHukRiya ek wajiB GiLe se RuBRu KaRaya .. BaHut BaHut SHUkRiya .. KHyaaL RakHiye


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11th November 2003, 11:16 PM

waah bhai kya song dhoond kar laye hain i dont remember the name of film but its from guru dutts filmthanx for posting it


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12th November 2003, 01:07 PM

khushi ji
aap ne bilkul sahi farmaya,,,behad purasar geet hai yeh,,,jisko dard bhai ne ham sab ke saath share kiya hai,,,,film hai Pyasa,,,,shayar hai janab Sahir Ludhiyanwi aur is film ke music director hai S D Burman...aur geet ko apni aawaz bakshi hai Mohd. Rafi saheb ne,,,
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shukriya manoj ji yaad dilane ke liye


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... - 29th November 2003, 11:22 PM

thanks doston...

aao kuch karein milke...


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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30th November 2003, 12:18 AM

aap thik kahte ho sush ji


ye aapne thik kaha hai kuch karna hoga hamein milke.
in haalat ko badalna hoga .

sakhiiiiiiiiii


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.. - 27th January 2004, 03:57 AM

Once again thanks my warm hearted friends ... Seeing ur warm response to my such posts, Now i am almost sure tht a poetry makes one a better human.

bhai Akant, Manoj, Shimuljee, Khisitiz, Khushi jee, or Sakhi jee, My Warm regards and best wishes to u all. I wish this warmness stays in ur hearts forever for everyone....


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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Friends

I wanted this thread to b read on mothers day.....

So..

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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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Re: madad chahti hei ye hawwa ki beti.........L a j j a - 14th March 2005, 05:12 PM


ye kuche ye neelam ghar dilkashi ke
ye lut te hue karwan zindagi ke
kahan hein kahan hein muhafiz khudi ke
jinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

Very Well Said!!


ye purpech galiyan ye badnaam bazar
ye gumnaam rahi ye sikkon ki jhankar
ye asmat ke saude ye sudon pe takraar
jinhein naaz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

ye sadiyon se bekhwab sehmi si galiyan
ye masli hui adhkhilin zard kaliyan
ye bikti hui khokhli rang raliyan
jinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein
too good!!


wo ujle darichon me payal ki chanchan
thaki haari sanson pe table ki dhan dhan
ye berooh klamron me khnsi ki than than
jinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

ye phoolon ke gazre pe peepon ke cheetein
ye bebak nazrein ye gustakh fikre
ye dhalke badan or ye beemar chehre
jinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

Behad asardaar!!


yahan peer bhi aa chuke hein jawan bhi
tanomand bete bhi abba miyan bhi
ye biwi bhi hei, or behen bhi hei maa bhi
jinhein naaz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

madad chahti hei ye hawwa ki beti
yashoda ki kamsin wo radha ki beti
payambar ki ummat zulekha ki beti
zinhein naz hei hind pe wo kahan hein

WaaaaaaH!


zara mulk ke rehbaron ko bulao
ye kooche ye galiyan ye manzar dikhao
zinhein naz hei hind par unko lao
kahan hein kahan hain kahan hainnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.........

Wah wah aur wah!!

Sushil Bhai!

Kasie hian janaab!! Aapki choice ke to shuru se hi fan hain hum, u've shared some beautiful thisngs with us.... And this one is exceptional... Givng a beautiful message...

Bhaut hi kam reh gaye hain jo apne desh k naam me faiz paate hain....

Bhai... bahut accha lgaa yeh padkar.. aise hi share kijiyega aage bhi.. do TC


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14th March 2005, 07:20 PM

Bohot khoobsurat ghazal se aapne ek baar phir ru-ba-ru karwaa diya....yeh ashaar shayad shaamil nahi hai iss ghazal mein...

ye bhuukii nigaahe.n hasiino.n kii jaanib
ye ba.Date hue haath siino.n kii jaanib
lapakate hue paa.Nv ziino.n kii jaanib
jinhe naaz hai hind par woh kahan hai.


issi tarah bazm sajate rahiyega....dostoN.


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15th March 2005, 05:18 AM

Sush...

Bahut badhiya nagme ko post kiya hai tumne yahan...sahir ludhiyanvi sahib was a dissappointed soul who tried to bring his jazzbaat out through his work in the films...nahin tau unhein film line kataayi pasand nahin thee...this song was banned...in fact i believe the film was banned because it brought about the failure of that first government in independant india...thanks for sharing it here...

main ek aur sahir sahib ka kalaam yahan likh rahi hoon...gaur kijieygaa...

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......... - 15th August 2005, 09:14 PM

THANKS MY DEARST FRIENDS

TODAY 15TH AUG 2005 HAS TO BE ANOTHER DAY FOR INTROSPECTION THEN CELIBRATIONS.

I BELIV INDIA STILL IS NOT HAPPY ENOUGH FOR CLIBRATIONS.
MOTHRS ARE STILL BEGGING, SISTERS R STILL HELPLESS, CHILDREN R STILL ORPHAN, HUMANITY IS STILL CRYING.

MOTHER INDIA IS STILL RAPED BY ITS OWN CHILDREN EVERY DAY.

I APOLOGISE FOR ALL I SAID. BUT ITS A FACT.


WARM REGARDS


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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