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Teri Akhiyon ke Naam... -
28th February 2004, 09:36 AM
Teri Akhiyon ke Naam...
'je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!' ---Sharaabi
Chain jiya ka le gayin teri akhiyaan
Mujhe mujhse chura le gayin teri akhiyaan
Khanjar ki si dhaar teri akhiyaan
Paar jiyaa ke gayin teri akhiyaan
Jigar pe teer chala ke teri akhiyaan
Madhosh mujhe kar gayin teri akhiyaan
Mitaa ke barson kee doori teri akhiyaan
Aaj tayye kar faasle gayin teri akhiyaan
Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan
--paras
Aaj bus kuch khushgawaar kehne ko dil chaah raha thaa...tau Sharaabi Sahib kee likhin do panktiyaan mil gayin...gar Punjabi mein likhti tau kayi Doston kii samajh mein hamaari Gulaabi Punjabi na aati...Ummiid hai Paras ka yeh halka phulka sa andaaz aap sabko pasand aayegaa...
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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28th February 2004, 08:13 PM
Dear Paras, beautiful, yunhi likhte rahiyega. I will try to come back later & reply. You already know why. Khush rahiye yehi Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you.
Keep smilling.......plz.@};-
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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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28th February 2004, 08:59 PM
Paras ji bahut aacha likha aapne Nusrat Ji ki Qawaali se inspire hokar
je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!
bahut deep qawaali hai kabhi suniyega meri favorite bhi hai.......
aur us par aapka likha hua bas sone par suhaaga kahiye
bahut saral aur aache tareeke se aapne aankhon ki tareef ki aur paras ji punjabi mein likhti to bahut mazaa aata....
Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan
Bahut Khoob.....
Likhte rahiyega Paras ji
duaaon ke saath
-mast
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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28th February 2004, 09:06 PM
paras
A re hamari behan ka khushqawar mood dekh ker ham bhi masroor huey.
khoob likha hai paras tum ne.
hamari to yeh hi khuahish hai ke tum isi tarah hansta muskurata kalam likho,
Yun samjho ke bhai apni behnon ko aise hi hansta muskurata dekhna chahte hain.
shabash and keep it up, ham hain naan yahan her her pal tumhari kaamiyaabi aur kaamraani ki duaayon ke liye.
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29th February 2004, 11:23 AM
Paras Ji..
Mitaa ke barson kee doori teri akhiyaan
Aaj tayye kar faasle gayin teri akhiyaan
Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan
Achha farmaya hai. Achha laga padhkar. Aap ka yah andaz bhi achha tha.
Tc, bye
Mayank
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1st March 2004, 07:29 PM
Shimul,
Tum bhi na...arre aayin theen tau daad bhi de hee detin...mujhe bus tumhara intezzar thaa aur kisi ka nahin...lol...tumbhi bilkul_ _ _ _ _ ho...
paras
Mast jee,
Shukriya aapka ki aapne bata diya ki yeh Nusrat Sahib kee Qawaali hai...jee zaroor sunoongi...
Ok main koshish karoongi Punjabi mein likhne kee...phir aapko pehle dikha kar post karoongi...pakka...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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1st March 2004, 07:32 PM
Mushi Bhayyia,
Main khush hoon ki aap khush hain...ki maine khush khush kalaam likha hai...
bhayyia...koshish zaroor karoongi ki kabhi kabhi hanstaa muskuraata kalaam likh daaloon...sirf apne Bhayyia ke chehre pe muskurahat dekhne ke liye...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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1st March 2004, 07:36 PM
Anjana Rahi Sahib,
Shukriya janaab, aapko yeh kalaam aur hamara yeh andaaz bhi pasand aaya...malum nahin kyon kabhi socha nahin ki dard se nikalkar likhna chahiye...kabhi kabhaar...aage bhi aate rahieygaa...duaaon ke saath
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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Re: Teri Akhiyon ke Naam... -
1st March 2004, 09:43 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by Parastaar
Teri Akhiyon ke Naam...
'je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!' ---Sharaabi
Chain jiya ka le gayin teri akhiyaan
Mujhe mujhse chura le gayin teri akhiyaan
Khanjar ki si dhaar teri akhiyaan
Paar jiyaa ke gayin teri akhiyaan
Jigar pe teer chala ke teri akhiyaan
Madhosh mujhe kar gayin teri akhiyaan
Mitaa ke barson kee doori teri akhiyaan
Aaj tayye kar faasle gayin teri akhiyaan
Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan
--paras
Aaj bus kuch khushgawaar kehne ko dil chaah raha thaa...tau Sharaabi Sahib kee likhin do panktiyaan mil gayin...gar Punjabi mein likhti tau kayi Doston kii samajh mein hamaari Gulaabi Punjabi na aati...Ummiid hai Paras ka yeh halka phulka sa andaaz aap sabko pasand aayegaa...
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paras dost,
waah kya baat hai........dad kubul karna..
par maie rahungi apni raah par.....
aankhe jab dil ki jubaan ban jaati hai,
kai hasrato se bhari aah nazar aa jaati hai.
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1st March 2004, 09:48 PM
Wah Paras..
Aaj ye romani mood kaise!!
Aankhon ki gehraai hi to hai jo admi ko dooba daalti hai !! Tabhi to main kisi ki aankhon mein zyaada der nahin jhaankta..lol
Seriously..u have written well and different for a change..aur mujhe padna pada qki ye tumne likha hai,aur agar isse is liye na padta qki isme gam naam ki cheez nahin hai to tum naraaz hokar mujhe bahut gam de deti..haina..lol
Really very well writeen Paras..
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2nd March 2004, 02:18 AM
paras ji,
kyaa baat hai! merii aaNkheN waise hii itnii badnaam haiN, aap to kabhii rukte hii nahiiN!
khair, likhaa to aapne acha hai, is liye maiN shikaayat bhii nahiiN kar saktaa!
Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan
«-- waah, waah! bahot hii geheraaii meiN le gaye aap lafzoN ko..
aur haaN, woh gaana dil ko sun-ne pe har baar chuu jaataa hai! kabhi lagtaa hai kii jitne dard meiN nusrat saahab ne gaaya hai, shyad un pe bhii kuch aisii hii guzrii thii ;X
"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de
..assa nith da vachoDa naiiyoN sehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de"
daad qabuul farmaaiiye gaa,
aman
"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"
kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN..
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2nd March 2004, 02:04 PM
Arre Meena jee....
aap rahiye naa apni raah par...
aankhe jab dil ki jubaan ban jaati hai,
kai hasrato se bhari aah nazar aa jaati hai.
jo bhi ho likha kamaal ka hai aapne...
aapki paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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2nd March 2004, 02:07 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by ghayalparwana
Wah Paras..
Aaj ye romani mood kaise!!
Aankhon ki gehraai hi to hai jo admi ko dooba daalti hai !! Tabhi to main kisi ki aankhon mein zyaada der nahin jhaankta..lol
Seriously..u have written well and different for a change..aur mujhe padna pada qki ye tumne likha hai,aur agar isse is liye na padta qki isme gam naam ki cheez nahin hai to tum naraaz hokar mujhe bahut gam de deti..haina..lol
Really very well writeen Paras..
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Aap bhi na Bhayyia...
kamaal karte hain...kabhi kabhi tau yahan raasta bhoolaa jaata hai...aur sahi kaha aapne...yadi na padte tau maine dukhi kar dena thaa aapko...lol
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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Re: Teri Akhiyon ke Naam... -
2nd March 2004, 06:02 PM
Chain jiya ka le gayin teri akhiyaan
Mujhe mujhse chura le gayin teri akhiyaan
Khanjar ki si dhaar teri akhiyaan
Paar jiyaa ke gayin teri akhiyaan
Jigar pe teer chala ke teri akhiyaan
Madhosh mujhe kar gayin teri akhiyaan
Mitaa ke barson kee doori teri akhiyaan
Aaj tayye kar faasle gayin teri akhiyaan
Bhula ke 'Khuda' ka naam teri akhiyaan
'Kaafir' 'Paras' ko bana gayin teri akhiyaan
paras ji
kaisi hai aap??? bahoot khoobsurat kalaam likha hai aapne,,,ek baar fir muah se barbas "wah" nikal aaya hai....ankiyon ki jabaan ko kya khubi se aapne jabaan di hai...bahoot khoob.....hamari daad kubool kijiye....aur aise hi khubsurati se likhte rahiye...
take care
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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2nd March 2004, 09:45 PM
Oh Mi God! Sharaabi Sahib...
Did I write it for your eyes...? Lo aur main is dhokhe mein rahi ki "Aman kee khanjar see akhiyon ko Amar bana rahi hoon" lol...just kidding...ab aap din raat akhiyon ko yoon display pe rakheinge tau hamari kalam ko tau khumaar aana hee thaa...? kalam tau aakhir kalam hee hai na?...lol
ab aap hansna nahin...ok? mujhse ab Shahryaar ka likha yeh kalaam yahan kahe bina nahin raha jayegaa...lo aapki akhiyon ke naam...
in aa.Nkho.n kii mastii ke mastaane hazaaro.n hai.n
in aa.Nkho.n se vaabastaa afasaane hazaaro.n hai.n
ik tum hii nahii.n tanhaa ulafat me.n merii rusavaa
is shahar me.n tum jaise diivaane hazaaro.n hai.n
ik sirf ham hii may ko aa.Nkho.n se pilaate hai.n
kahane ko to duniyaa me.n maiKhaane hazaaro.n hai.n
is shamm-e-farozaa.N ko aa.Ndhii se Daraate ho
is shamm-e-farozaa.N ke paravaane hazaaro.n hai.n
kaha na sahi kisi ne...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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13th February 2008, 01:35 PM
bahut khoob parasji..........
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