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Love Dil bhi to chalta hai teri dhadkan-e-yaad ke saath.. - 31st July 2004, 02:47 AM

Kyun beh jaaTi hun main har ehsaas ke saaTh?
Kyun chalTi hun uski kahi har baat ke saaTh?
Kyun Tham jaaTe hain kadam uski ik aawaaz ke saaTh?

Guzar gaya pyar bhara har lamha, us guzri raaT ke saaTh..
Na bacha kuch bhi ab To kahin mere paas..

Woh baaTein, woh yaadein har aas ke saaTh..
Dhadkan hai jaise meri kahin aas paas..

Lahu ban ke daudTa hai Tera naam har saans ke saaTh..
Dil bhi To chalTa hai Teri hi dhadken-e-yaad ke saaTh..

KaTega yeh safar bhi yunhi gamo ke saaTh..
Thaamenge ek doosre ka haaTh apne haaTh ke saaTh..

Kyun beh jaaTi hun main har ehsaas ke saaTh?
Kyun chalTi hun uski kahi har baat ke saaTh?
Kyun Tham jaaTe hain kadam uski ik aawaaz ke saaTh?

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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31st July 2004, 03:06 PM

Bilkul apne nirale alag se andaaz me phir ek sundar kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne, Priya.. Daad Kubool kijiyega... Very Nice Words once again....

So.. Do keep up the good work.. Tc


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1st August 2004, 12:41 AM

Niraale andaaz... sun kar acha laga.. lekin koi niraala nahi hai.. bas dil se jo mehsoos karti hun, use yahan likhne ki ek sachi koshish karti rehti hun...

Aapko pasand aaya, jaan kar bahut khushi huyi.. Shukriya!

Khush rahiye..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Good work indeed - 3rd August 2004, 01:18 PM

Priyaji
Bahut achcha kalam he aapka,tahe dil se daad kabul kijiye aur ese hi shabdo ko moti ki tarah piro ker mala rupi gazal me pesh kerte rahiye.


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3rd August 2004, 09:22 PM

Anjan ji,

Aapko mera likha pasand aaya, jaan kar bahut khushi hui..

Aapka id Anajan Rahi, mere ek dost ke id se bahut milta hia.. unka id.. Anajana Rahi hai...

Ek baar phir aapka bahut bahut shukriya!

Khush rahiye!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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4th August 2004, 01:58 PM

Chaahat ji..

KaTega yeh safar bhi yunhi gamo ke saaTh..
Thaamenge ek doosre ka haaTh apne haaTh ke saaTh..


Achchha khayaal hai.. umeed karta hooN ki aap ka yah intezaar jaldi pura hogaa.. aur aap ki chaahat ka haath aap ke saath hoga.. best wishes..

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Ok - 4th August 2004, 07:52 PM

Priyaji,
Chaliye hume bhi apna dost maan lijiye woh Bade Rahi he hum chote rahi,he to rahi?lmanzil shayad woh bhi dhund rahe he aur manzil hum bhi dhund rahe he.


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5th August 2004, 02:52 AM

Arre yahan to do do Rahi ho gaye.. lolz..

Mayank ji,

Aapki shubkaamnaao ke liye bahut bahut shukriya! Jaanti hun kabhi to safar khatam hoga, par is safar ke khatam hone tak main suffer kar chuki hongi.. lolz..

Aap yahan aaye, behad khushi hui..


Anjan ji,

Hm.. to aapko bhi dost to maan loongi.. lekin ek shart hai.. lolz.. aap pehle apna naam bataaiye.. anjan kyun bane hain???

Dost manzil to yahan, manzil shaayad khudh bhi dhoondti hai..
Milti kise hai, yeh to kismat ki baat hai..

Khush rahiye!

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Shukriya - 5th August 2004, 03:12 PM

Shukriya ki aapne ish kabil samjha wese ish nacheej ka naam he Manish, abh hum anjaan nahi rahe ?thik?


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12th August 2004, 07:23 PM

Hi Priya Ji

kya khoob likha hai,dil ki awaaz jaise aapne apne kalam se kaagaz pe utardi


Guzar gaya pyar bhara har lamha, us guzri raaT ke saaTh..
Na bacha kuch bhi ab To kahin mere paas..

Aise hi hota hai jab bichadna hota hai milne ke baad.

Woh baaTein, woh yaadein har aas ke saaTh..
Dhadkan hai jaise meri kahin aas paas..

Lahu ban ke daudTa hai Tera naam har saans ke saaTh..
Dil bhi To chalTa hai Teri hi dhadken-e-yaad ke saaTh..

jab pyaar ki gehrayi tak pahunchete hai apna kuch nahi sab unka hota hai

shayri.com aane kab bagiar aapka koi sher dekhe hum jaate nahi.

likhte rahiye.


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13th August 2004, 02:19 AM

Javid ji,

ek baar phir se mera honsla badhaane ka bahut bahut shukriya!

Khush rahiye...

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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