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Thumbs down Gareeb - 22nd August 2004, 09:29 PM

paise ke peeche bhagte bhagte ve
apno ko peeche chod aaye the
mil to gaya tha unhe sab kuch
par kabie santusht nahin ho paaye the

kho gaye the duniya kee chamak mein
so gaye the rupayon kee khanak mein
payee thi unhone bas joothi shaan
ye paaakar hi samajhte the vo mahan

jameer aatma ko bech daala tha
saara dhan isliye kaala tha
paise se sab kuch kharid sakte hain
aisa bacchon ke dimaag mein daala tha

insaan hokar bhi ve insaan naa the
hamne to dekhe kabhie aise hevaan naa the
paise se kharid lenge pyaar ko
itne bhi vo balwaan naa the

sab kuch hokar bhi ve gareeb the
koi apne naa tha aise naseeb the
apne bhi unse door rehte the kyonki
upar se hi bas vi shareef the



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hi - 24th August 2004, 05:46 PM

Arvind ji,

aapki creation bahut pyari hai. bahut achchhi lagi..
ek nayi soch rakhane vaale vyakti hain aap..
bahut badhiya aapne likha hai..
bas title thoda hat ke hai..per thik hai..

likhate rahiye,


Akant...


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24th August 2004, 09:46 PM

Dear Arvindji,

i have gone through same situation. people have left mi bcoz i am poor. aap ne sahi likha hai. keep it up. hope mere ex-and kids find peace by making more money, i pray for them.
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