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Rote hai teri yaad mein - 31st August 2004, 10:15 AM

Yeh ghazal hai Pankaj Udhas ka gaya hua:


Rote hai teri yaad mein
Iske siva hum kya karein
Kismat me tha hona juda
Tujhse gheela hum kya karein


Karke duan manga tujhe
Paakar magar khoya tujhe
Maange khuda se aur kya
Koyee duan hum kya karein

Kismat me tha…..


Jab tak teri tasveer thi
Pyara tha dil ka aaina
Jab tu nahin to dilrooba
Yeh aaina hum kya karein

Kismet me tha…..


Patthar nahin insaan hai hum
Kaise sahein yeh situm
Dil todnewale yeh dil
Toota hua hai hum kya karein

Kismet me tha….


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Love Re: Rote hai teri yaad mein - 2nd September 2004, 09:48 PM

Karke Duan manga tujhe
Paakar magar khoya tujhe
Maange Khuda se aur kya
Koyee Duan hum kya karein
Kismat mein hona tha juda
tujhse geela ham kya karein…..

Dear Gauri Jee, another beautiful gazal. One of my favourites. Dilki gehraion se shukriya kubool kijiyega. Younhi aapni pasand share karte rahiyega...Khush rahiye ye duwaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi. Do take care of yourself...God bless you.

Keep smilling.......


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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2nd September 2004, 11:09 PM

Hi gauri hw r u doin?bahut hee umada ghazal yaad dilayi aapne.
keep posting good one's
Take care
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2nd September 2004, 11:45 PM

buhat umda gouri ji

Baar Haa Dil Ko Sumjhaya Wo Teri Nahi

Per Kya Karain Hum Ko Yaqeen Aaya Nahi

Jis Ke Pichay Bhagta Raha Umr Bhar

Aek Humsafer Tha Tera Wo Saya Nahi

Dekh Meri Taqdeer Ke Zulm Yeh Bhi

Mazil Per Pounch Ker Bhi Tujhay Paya Nahi

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Bulbul Ne Phir Koi Geet Gaya Nahi

Jis Main Shamil Ho Ghum Ko Donay Wali Boond

Aesa Badal Kabhi Hum Per Chaya Nahi

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3rd September 2004, 03:44 AM

Shakilji,

Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai yeh.
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Thank you Shimulji aur 9849,

Hume jo bahut pasand ho wah hum yaha post karte hai- shayad kisi aur ko bhi pasand ho.


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5th September 2004, 09:49 PM

adab dosto,bahot pyari si ghazal hai
gauriji aapka shukraguzaar hu ki itni pyari ghazal ko mehfil ki nazr kiya thank u 4 this beautiful lines..........
isi tarah se iss mehfil ko nayab motiyo se sajate rahiyega.......

kya mohabbat ka mafhoom samjhenge woh,
sirf khud-garziyaan jinka imaan hai........
roz har-ek se dil lagaate hain woh,
ye usool-e-mohabbat se anjaan hain.....
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6th September 2004, 03:57 AM

Razji,

Shukriya aapka jo yeh ghazal aapko bhi pasand aayee.


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8th September 2004, 04:06 PM

hello gaurijeeee.............
pankaj udhas jee ki badi sunder rachna pesh ki hain apne ..............shukriyaa...

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9th September 2004, 03:47 AM

Mausamji,

Aapka wah "If life is "A", "love" is the whole alphabet." to hum kahenge:

Agar zindagi ki shuruat hai "K" (hindi ka K,KH,G etc) to pyar ka naam hai "karishma"


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9th September 2004, 11:01 AM

ha gauriji....
sachmein pyar ek karishma hi hain jo naseebwalon ki hi kismat main hota hain........

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10th September 2004, 10:03 PM

gouri mom ><

wah wah wah maa ye to badi nayab gajal hai
arre aap to wakai main meri maa ho...
mujhe bohat pasand aayi aapki pasand ...
ek ladki bhi dekh lo mere liye :P woh bhi
pasand aa jayegi mujhe .... apki pasand meri
pasand hahahaha

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11th September 2004, 12:38 PM

Jhootha kahin ka! Jab hum ladki pasand karenge to kahega ki "shaadi to mujhe karni hai ki aapko?"

Sach na?

Waise I am glad you like this ghazal. Ghazals me bahut taarifi hoti hai - especially the shayary part of it.

You take care, bete.


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