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24th April 2009, 03:40 PM
Mahfil ko Diya ka salaam,
aaj ek nazam pesh kar rahi hun ... umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi ..................  Zindagi ka safar hai bas chalte jana hai udasiyon ke lamho mein bhi muskurana hai gham-e-hayat ne majboor kar diya hai hume apne wajood samet kar ab sambhal jana hai kis ka intezaar kare hum shaam ke baad... saanj dhale to suraj ko bhi dhal jana hai jiski ki thi justaju, na payaa meine use ab kis ki arzoo mein youn jalte jana hai Qismat ke lakeer ko bhala badlayega koun chand khusi ke saath ab gham bhi pana hai is kashmakas mein muje housla dena khudaa ek anjaan safar mein bahot dur jana hai aap ki raey ki muntazir... -Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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24th April 2009, 03:51 PM
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keep writing dear Regards Praneeta _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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24th April 2009, 05:28 PM
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Diya ji, Bahoot ache jazbaat pesh kiye hai aapne..kuch ash'aar to samjho dil ko chuu gaye... jiski ki thi justaju, na payaa maine use ab kis ki arzoo mein youn jalte jana hai? waah kya baat hai...god bless u Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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24th April 2009, 06:32 PM
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Diya aap ki ye post padhkar kafi achha laga or ise padhkar ek behed hi khubsurat geet yad aa gaya....... Geet Gata Ho.n Gun-Gunata Ho.n Mai, Maine Ha.nshne Ka Wada Kiya Tha Kabhi Is Liye Har Ghari Muskurata Ho.n Mai..................... |
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25th April 2009, 11:48 AM
Qismat ke lakeer ko bhala badlayega koun
chand khusi ke saath ab gham bhi pana hai is kashmakas mein muje housla dena khudaa ek anjaan safar mein bahot dur jana hai bohat acche ehsaas hain diya,.....yuhi likhti raho.. zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th April 2009, 10:13 PM
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Dear Diya............tumhari nazm pehli baar sdc par padi hai....accha likha hai.....keep it up tum es se bhi jayada accha likh sakti ho....aur mujhe usi ka intzaar hai pyar aur duao.n ke saath diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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29th April 2009, 03:44 PM
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saath humesha detey rahna Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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29th April 2009, 03:45 PM
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apna khayal rakhna Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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29th April 2009, 07:06 PM
koshish Qabil e kadR hai ! daad ke saath ! |
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29th April 2009, 07:09 PM
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Diya.... Itna late reply dene par maufi chahti hoon..... jis andaaz se tumne is nazm mei.N apne ehesaaso.N ko piroya hai qabil-e-taarif hai..... Yunhi likhti raho.............. hamesha muskurati raho........... aur dard ke thread se dur raho............  Tumhari Ghazal Dii  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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29th April 2009, 09:36 PM
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likhte rahiye humesha app ek din achi shayera jaroor ban jayegi humesha khush rahiye dua sada apke sath hai dinesh. AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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30th April 2009, 08:06 AM
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mere najariye se tum isse kahin or jyada acha likh sahti ho... but its just a beginning... tumse or bhi achi nazm padhne ko milengi ummeed karta hun.. god bless u.... take care... vicky |
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12th January 2010, 04:39 AM
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Pradhyuman jee, aapko humari nazm achhi lagi hume khusi hui yun hi mahfil meiN saath banaye rakhiyega khus rahiye Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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12th January 2010, 04:41 AM
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thanx 4 sharing hume bhi aapki pasand achhi lagi mahfil mein aate rahiye Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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12th January 2010, 04:42 AM
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sukriyah zainy jee DuaoN mein yaad rakhiyega Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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12th January 2010, 04:47 AM
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Pyaari Di, mujhe nuzm kahna to aati nahi bas yun hi koshish ki thi ....aapko achhi lagi mujhe bahut khusi hui main koshish karoongi isse bhi achhi nazm likhun aapki pyaar aur Duaa humesha sath rahe bas ehi khwahish hai with lots of love aapki Roshni Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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12th January 2010, 07:48 AM
Dear Diya,
hmmmm .. its simply awesome .... I have no words for ur very first Nazm... koshish behaat pasand aayii....likhtii rahoo aur khush rahooo... with lots of love tumharii mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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27th January 2010, 07:58 PM
Nazm achchi hain Diya jee...............
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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24th April 2015, 02:51 PM
Diya
Qismat ke lakeer ko bhala badlayega koun chand khusi ke saath ab gham bhi pana hai is kashmakas mein muje housla dena khudaa ek anjaan safar mein bahot dur jana hai tum to sach meiN kahin door hi chali gye ho, bahut miss karte hai tumhe, agar mera yeh message pado to aik baar muujse baat jaroor karna. pyar aur duaoN ke saath tumhari dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th April 2015, 02:51 PM
Diya
Qismat ke lakeer ko bhala badlayega koun chand khusi ke saath ab gham bhi pana hai is kashmakas mein muje housla dena khudaa ek anjaan safar mein bahot dur jana hai tum to sach meiN kahin door hi chali gye ho, bahut miss karte hai tumhe, agar mera yeh message pado to aik baar mujse baat jaroor karna. pyar aur duaoN ke saath tumhari dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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