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neend kyo nahi aati? - 5th July 2001, 03:49 PM

Aadab,

Kuch sher arz hain:

1)Koi raasta nazar nahi aata, koi umeed nazar nahi aati!
Mout(death) to ek din muhaiyam (definite) eh, phir neend kyon nahi aati!!

2) Sab kuch kar daala bewafa ke liye,
Akhir keh hi gaya khuda afiz sada ke liye.

3) Na tujhe se hain, na khuda se bair,
Dil hi udaas hain, baaki sab khair.

4) Na tujhe chod sake na khuda ko,
Na tune apnaya, na khuda ne.

5) Dil mein tu, yaado mein tu, ankhon mein tu,
Nahi hein gar kahi to naseeb mein na tu.

6) Zindagi kya hain hawa ka jonkha hain,
ayaa or chala gaya,
gam is baat ka hain,
dil mein ek tamanna reh gayi.

Please do write me how are these shers........ I will really really appreciate. Your comments will help me to improve.

shukriya,
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Beautiful sentiment in those few words. - 5th July 2001, 04:41 PM

Hi Naaz,

Your sher's are really very good. Keep them comming.


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30th April 2004, 07:52 PM

Salam,
Bohot khub...yunhi likhte rahiyega. Daad qabul farmaiyega. Bohot achha laga padte hue...waise specially no: 3 & 4. sabhi sher hi bohot achha likhha hai*no:1 was really good to made me smile.
Khush rahiye yeh Duwaon ke sath izazat chahungi. Take care. God bless you. Allah Hafiz.

Keep smilling.......


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1st May 2004, 01:18 PM

Hi!

I like the last one.... Bas dil me ik tamanna reh gayi...... Do kepe up the good work.. Take Care...


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Smile 1st May 2004, 04:56 PM

hi naaz!

walla , ur shair was very very good... keep writing
i had one shair for u ,hope u like this.. i think this will match ur shair....

" aaye zindagi mujhe tujhse koyi tamanna kab hain
ab toh is aas pe jita hoon ke mujhe marna kab hain"

bye for now
phir likhoonga
till than take care

*** muzam


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2nd May 2004, 06:52 PM

Yaaron Dont post such dil chooo lene wali shayri..
purane zhakham phir se bhar aatey hai...
Jitna bhool jane ko dil chahta hai,
Utne hi kareeb woh aa jati hai....


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Re: neend kyo nahi aati? - 2nd May 2004, 07:31 PM

asalamalaikum naazji......
how r u
aap bahut hi umda likhti hai..... aacha laga padh kar
keep it upn allah bless u.....
allah hafiz n take care
   
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