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Love kya hua - 12th February 2016, 06:43 PM
Chupti nahi chupaye bekarari to kya hua
Buzhti nahi humse ye chingari to kya hua

Bade ji - jaan se kiN tumko bhoolne ki koshisheN
Hai aarzoo ek sirf tumhari to kya hua

Simat gai duniya meri saari hi tere ird gird
Tune bhula bhi di bachpan ki yaari to kya hua

Paani ho chuka lahoo ye tere intazaar me
My bahti hai ragooN me jo hamari to kya hua

Chubh jane de mere khwaab zamane ki aankh me
Ho jaayeN farmaaN katl ke jaari to kya hua

BeintehaaN sukuN ka hai wada lag ja gale
Ho jay dushman kaynaat saari to kya hua

Ruswaa "bhushan" na aayega teri chaukhat pe baar baar
Ho bhale tu jaaN se bhi pyaari to kya hua

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12th February 2016, 07:46 PM
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Chupti nahi chupaye bekarari to kya hua
Buzhti nahi humse ye chingari to kya hua

Bade ji - jaan se kiN tumko bhoolne ki koshisheN
Hai aarzoo ek sirf tumhari to kya hua

Simat gai duniya meri saari hi tere ird gird
Tune bhula bhi di bachpan ki yaari to kya hua

Bada aasaaN hai kuch lamhe sahi ye gum bhula dena
Bhale kah diya kisi ne sharaabi to kya hua

Chubh jane de mere khwaab zamane ki aankh me
Ho jaayeN farmaaN katl ke jaari to kya hua

BeintehaaN sukuN ka hai wada lag ja gale
Ho jay dushman kaynaat saari to kya hua

Ruswaa "bhushan" na aayega teri chaukhat pe baar baar
Ho bhale tu jaaN se bhi pyaari to kya hua

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Bhushan Ji - Behad khoob khayaal bahut naya hai mazaa aaya padhkar aapse guzaarish hai ki aap ek baar 4th sher ko kaafiye ki nazar se dubaara dekh lein...

aap bahut waqt laga dete hai yaha aate aate aur hum talabgaar hi rehte hai aapki kalam ke...yeh duriyaan thodi kam kijiye janaab aate rahiYeGaa


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12th February 2016, 08:02 PM
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Chupti nahi chupaye bekarari to kya hua
Buzhti nahi humse ye chingari to kya hua

Bade ji - jaan se kiN tumko bhoolne ki koshisheN
Hai aarzoo ek sirf tumhari to kya hua

Simat gai duniya meri saari hi tere ird gird
Tune bhula bhi di bachpan ki yaari to kya hua

Bada aasaaN hai kuch lamhe sahi ye gum bhula dena
Bhale kah diya kisi ne sharaabi to kya hua

Chubh jane de mere khwaab zamane ki aankh me
Ho jaayeN farmaaN katl ke jaari to kya hua

BeintehaaN sukuN ka hai wada lag ja gale
Ho jay dushman kaynaat saari to kya hua

Ruswaa "bhushan" na aayega teri chaukhat pe baar baar
Ho bhale tu jaaN se bhi pyaari to kya hua

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Waaah....kya baat hai....bahut khoob...

Bahut achcha kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne bhushan ji.....

Mast ji ki baat pe zaroor gaur kijiyega...

Aate rahiye...aur aise hee likhte rahiye...

Takecare madhu.


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Bhushan Ji - Behad khoob khayaal bahut naya hai mazaa aaya padhkar aapse guzaarish hai ki aap ek baar 4th sher ko kaafiye ki nazar se dubaara dekh lein...

aap bahut waqt laga dete hai yaha aate aate aur hum talabgaar hi rehte hai aapki kalam ke...yeh duriyaan thodi kam kijiye janaab aate rahiYeGaa

Mast ji Namaste......bohot bohot shukriya housala afzahi k liye.......aapne bohot accha kiya kafiye ka zikr ched kar....muzhe khayal hi nahi raha......please kya aap ise edit kar sakte hain...new line should be
Paani ho chuka lahoo ye tere intazaar me
My bahti hai ragooN me jo hamari to kya hua


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Waaah....kya baat hai....bahut khoob...

Bahut achcha kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne bhushan ji.....

Mast ji ki baat pe zaroor gaur kijiyega...

Aate rahiye...aur aise hee likhte rahiye...

Takecare madhu.
Madhu ji namaste,

Bohot bohot shukriya aapki hausala afzai ka....mast ji ki baat bohot durust hai....edit k liye unhi se request ki hai....i think once somebody comments on ur post only moderaters can edit them...

Aate rahiyega....bohot bohot shukriya

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13th February 2016, 11:45 AM
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Madhu ji namaste,

Bohot bohot shukriya aapki hausala afzai ka....mast ji ki baat bohot durust hai....edit k liye unhi se request ki hai....i think once somebody comments on ur post only moderaters can edit them...

Aate rahiyega....bohot bohot shukriya

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Namaskaar bhushan ji...

Sher edit kar diya hai maine...ek baar dekh lijiyega....

Aate rahiyega...

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tuune bhula di bachpan ki yaari to kya....

waahhh bhushan saahab... kyaa khoob likha hai

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Chupti nahi chupaye bekarari to kya hua
Buzhti nahi humse ye chingari to kya hua

Bade ji - jaan se kiN tumko bhoolne ki koshisheN
Hai aarzoo ek sirf tumhari to kya hua

Simat gai duniya meri saari hi tere ird gird
Tune bhula bhi di bachpan ki yaari to kya hua

Paani ho chuka lahoo ye tere intazaar me
My bahti hai ragooN me jo hamari to kya hua

Chubh jane de mere khwaab zamane ki aankh me
Ho jaayeN farmaaN katl ke jaari to kya hua

BeintehaaN sukuN ka hai wada lag ja gale
Ho jay dushman kaynaat saari to kya hua

Ruswaa "bhushan" na aayega teri chaukhat pe baar baar
Ho bhale tu jaaN se bhi pyaari to kya hua

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tuune bhula di bachpan ki yaari to kya....

waahhh bhushan saahab... kyaa khoob likha hai

Shaad bhai namaste,

Bohot bohot shukriya.....inaayat banaye rakhiyega

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kuch nahi hua bhai sahiib....bas himmat mat harna...lge rhiye...jaroor pukaar suni jayegi....bahut accha lga aapko padna
Dii namaste,

Bohot bohot shukriya...........bohot achhe lage apke comments....yoon hi inaayat banaye rakhiyega....

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