Woh Roz

[henna]

Hey guys let me know if this is any good because i want to present it to some one. Ustad type person hai so let me know if u think he will like it.


Many thanks for all support guys


Hum sirf thab pithe hai
Jab woh yaad ate hai
Koi Unse jakar Kehde
Woh roz yaad kyun ate hai

Ek gham ki dava karne
Main maikhane peene aya tha
Abh roz zakhmo ko sitha hoon
Woh roz naye de jate hai

Usne dekha nahi kabhi gour se mujhe
Eh saaki tujse ek arz hai
Mere janaze ko tum sajana khoob
Woh Roz Kaha Ate hai

Paimano me dafna diya jay
Akhri yeh khwahish thi magar
Zinda hoon me our abhi se hi
Woh roz mujhe jalate hai

[Parul]

Dear...

Dard chhalak raha hai har shabd se. bahut hi gehre khyaal pesh kiye hai aapne. Ustaad ko jaroor pasand aayega... bahut achha likha hai. mujhe to achha laga... may be some one else can help better... Yun hi likhte rehna aur khush rehna

take care!

[henna]

Thank u so much. Patha Hai Ustad asked me once how do u feel pain. I wanted to give this to him in reply

Thanks Parul Ji

[Valor]

Ek gham ki dava karne
Main maikhane peene aya tha
Abh roz zakhmo ko sitha hoon
Woh roz naye de jate hai

(Very painful....)


Usne dekha nahi kabhi gour se mujhe
Eh saaki tujse ek arz hai
Mere janaze ko tum sajana khoob
Woh Roz Kaha Ate hai

(Subhan Allah !!!)

Paimano me dafna diya jay
Akhri yeh khwahish thi magar
Zinda hoon me our abhi se hi
Woh roz mujhe jalate hai

(This is one line that i will remember all my life!!! So beautiful, touching and painful! I have no words for this line. Sure you are not the ustad???)

Please accept my humble compliments

[Taish]

henna ji bas bahut khoob maza aa gaya aapki ye rachna padh kar.bas yoon hi likhte rahiyega aap.


aapka........................

[henna]

Thanks