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Cool naye saal mein...asha ka deep sabke jeevan mein jal jaaye - 2nd January 2004, 03:12 PM

hallo dosto
mein is qalaam ko yahn ek jagah post kar chuki hun lekin kisi ne mujhe kah ki ise alag se post karun to aaj mein ise alag se post kar rahi hun.

aap sabhi ko meri tarf se nye saal ki hardik badhai.

naa jaane kun sa phool kab khil jaaye
jakham se bhi kabhi koi jakham sil jaaye

naye suraj ki roshni tamaam tumko mile
har asha ka deep sabke jeevan mein jal jaaye

pyaar mein hai woh asar kahte hai sab ye
marte se jee utega koi pyaar agar mil jaaye

tum saath nahi ho magar hum jee rahe phir bhi
kya jaane kab sare rah tera saath mil jaaye

paani nahi mila to hum askquoin se seech de
shayad is darakhat pe bhi koi phool khil jaye



sakhi with best wishes for a bright and colorfull new yr.


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Re: naye saal mein...asha ka deep sabke jeevan mein jal jaaye - 2nd January 2004, 03:48 PM

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hallo dosto
mein is qalaam ko yahn ek jagah post kar chuki hun lekin kisi ne mujhe kah ki ise alag se post karun to aaj mein ise alag se post kar rahi hun.

aap sabhi ko meri tarf se nye saal ki hardik badhai.

naa jaane kun sa phool kab khil jaaye
jakham se bhi kabhi koi jakham sil jaaye

naye suraj ki roshni tamaam tumko mile
har asha ka deep sabke jeevan mein jal jaaye

pyaar mein hai woh asar kahte hai sab ye
marte se jee utega koi pyaar agar mil jaaye

tum saath nahi ho magar hum jee rahe phir bhi
kya jaane kab sare rah tera saath mil jaaye

paani nahi mila to hum askquoin se seech de
shayad is darakhat pe bhi koi phool khil jaye



sakhi with best wishes for a bright and colorfull new yr.
sakhiii,
bahot hi sadgi se or saralta se dil maie ootar gayi tumhari rachna...... lajawaab likha ahi...
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2nd January 2004, 11:38 PM

sakhi

bohat khoob likha hai sakhi aap ne.
mein bohat muttassir hua aap ki is ghazal se.
shabaash. bohat umda alfaaz istemaal kiye hain.

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3rd January 2004, 04:35 AM

Sakhi Shukr hai tum aa gayin...kitna miss kar rahi thee tumhein...settle ho gayin kya...maine papa Arvind ke haath tumhein kuch bheja tha...mil gaya ki nahin? lol...

Well, jisne bhi tumhein yahan post karne ke liye bola, bahut achha bola...

naa jaane kun sa phool kab khil jaaye
jakham se bhi kabhi koi jakham sil jaaye

naye suraj ki roshni tamaam tumko mile
har asha ka deep sabke jeevan mein jal jaaye

pyaar mein hai woh asar kahte hai sab ye
marte se jee utega koi pyaar agar mil jaaye

tum saath nahi ho magar hum jee rahe phir bhi
kya jaane kab sare rah tera saath mil jaaye

paani nahi mila to hum askquoin se seech de
shayad is darakhat pe bhi koi phool khil jaye

Yeh meri choti see gudiya saral se shabdon mein kitne gehre bhaav prakat kar deti hai...atii sundar! khush raho...

tumhari aapa


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sakhi - 3rd January 2004, 06:16 PM

hi sakhi ji

naya saaal mubarak ho
somelines for you

khushiya hi milein is naye saal mein apni yahi dua hai
humne apna kaam kar diya hai ab aagey hafiz khudha hai....

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4th January 2004, 04:38 AM

aslaamaaleikuum namaste and sat sri akal

sakhi jee
happy new year to you and wish all your wishes come true

kiya kahee aap shee sabd he nahee milteh hain

apnee dua mein humhe bhi yaad rakhnaa bye


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hi - 5th January 2004, 12:01 AM

hi sakhi...
how r u?
naam bohat acha hay..pahi bar bhi kaho to aisa lagta hay
jaise jane kab se manos hain is nam se...good choice...
or shayad is bar naye sal per kuch zyada wishes nahi..kar paye log...magar aap ki yeh dua..yeh asha...bohat piyari hay..jis main aap k nam ki tarah sadgi shamil hay..
dua karain gain k aap ki har asha pori ho jaye ...
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Re: naye saal mein...asha ka deep sabke jeevan mein jal jaaye - 10th January 2004, 10:09 AM

naa jaane kun sa phool kab khil jaaye
jakham se bhi kabhi koi jakham sil jaaye

naye suraj ki roshni tamaam tumko mile
har asha ka deep sabke jeevan mein jal jaaye

pyaar mein hai woh asar kahte hai sab ye
marte se jee utega koi pyaar agar mil jaaye

tum saath nahi ho magar hum jee rahe phir bhi
kya jaane kab sare rah tera saath mil jaaye

paani nahi mila to hum askquoin se seech de
shayad is darakhat pe bhi koi phool khil jaye

hi sakhu
kaisi ho tum???naya saal tumko bhi bahoot bahoot mubaraq ho...muafi chata hoon itne dinon ke baad tumhare page par aa raha hoon...kuch hi din pehle job join ki hai na...umeed karta hoon tum achi hogi aur khush hogi....
halaaki aapki yeh rachna mein pehle padh chuka hoon,,magar aaj phir is rachna par apne vichaar rakhne se khud ko nahin rok saka,,,itni behtreen jo likhi hai aapne....aur dekho sabne pehle hi kitni tareef kar di hai...mushi bhai,,banhjara bhai ,deewana bhai,meena didi aur paras ji ka ek saath ek hi page par aana apne aap mein is baat ka ishaara hai ki bahoot khoob likha hai tumne...
yun to sari hi gazal sundarta ka aaina hai magar jo panktiyan m ujhe andar tak choo gayi wo yeh hai....

naa jaane kun sa phool kab khil jaaye
jakham se bhi kabhi koi jakham sil jaaye

tum saath nahi ho magar hum jee rahe phir bhi
kya jaane kab sare rah tera saath mil jaaye

paani nahi mila to hum askquoin se seech de
shayad is darakhat pe bhi koi phool khil jaye

sada aise hi likhte rahiye aur hamesha khush rahiye...naye saal ka har aanewala din tumhare jeevan mein dheron khushiysn laaye bas yehi dua hai meri...
take care
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Hi - 15th January 2004, 05:42 PM

Sakhiii.......hmmmmm..waah kyaa baaT hai..behatariiiN...sach mai bohot achha laga tumhari shayri padha karr....bass yuu hi likhte rahoo aur khush rahoo...UmmiD hai tum dimaG laga karr padhaii kar rahi hogii...DIL ko ek kooNe mai rakhnna haaN..kuch waqT k liye..wo hii sarii musibaT kii jaR hai...

waise tau purii kavita hii sunndaR hai parr ye sher kuch khaaS asaR rakhta hai......

paani nahi mila to hum askquoin se seech de
shayad is darakhat pe bhi koi phool khil jaye......

Chaloo Sanju se Thodii sii tarif kabuL karoo....waqT mile tau online hona....thodii sii tang khich nii hai ap kii..LOL...byeee take care....bass Sanju !


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22nd January 2004, 01:44 PM

meena di kaisi ho aap??
sakhi ke page par aai thanx apka.
apne yahan aake ise pasand kiya ye to apke liye hi hai di.i miss u di.
sakhi with lov
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bhai ji
apne meri gazl ko tarif ke kabil samjha isse vbadi tarif kya hogi thanx 4 coming.
sakhi

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aapaaaaaa pyaari merio
mitti apke liye der sari sakhi ki tarf se
aapa bhut yaad aati ho aap .apke baare mein bhut sochti hun but majboori hai isliye door hun.but dil mein jara dekho shayad ,mil jaun hai na????
thanx for tarifffff

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aapne yahn aake pada thanx a lot.

khushiya hi milein is naye saal mein apni yahi dua hai
humne apna kaam kar diya hai ab aagey hafiz khudha hai....

sher acha laga aur apki dua kubul hai hamein
thanx
sakhi


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22nd January 2004, 02:00 PM

sorry dosto mein itne dino baad apke reply de rahi hun.

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deewana ji
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ji jarur ham dua mein apko yaad rakhenge
aapne yahn aake hi hamein hoshla de diya hai.to shabdo ki jarurat nahi hai janab apke yahn aana hi hamaare liye bhut hai.thanx for coming.
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shukriya naam pasand karne ke liye.
aap yahn aaye mere liye bhut badi baat hai ye.

apki duaoke liye shukriya meri tamnaa hai apki bhi sari ashayein is saal mein puri ho aap khush rahein.
sakhi with wishes
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apne meri gazal ko samjha aur saraha mere liye bhut achi baat hai.apne sahi kah ki saare log yahn aaye are ate kaise nahi sakhi ne dostoibn ko hi ye apni duaye aur shubkamnaye di hai na.apko bhi har woh khushi mile jo aap chahte ho yahi sakhi ki dua hai.
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sanjoooooooo dost

kaise ho
chalo khuda ka shukr hai aap yahn aaye aur pasand kiya sakhi ka qalaam.
dil ek kone mein hi hai kyun exam bhi aarehe hai na to dimaag ka istemaal chal raha hai aajkal


apki tarif kubul hai .thanx a lot

sakhiiiii with wishs


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