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Ghazal : Din MeN Aaiinaa Ek Baar DekhTe HaiN ... ! -
5th November 2011, 05:08 AM
Din MeN Aaiinaa Ek Baar DekhTe HaiN KarKe Aankh Usme Chaar DekhTe HaiN ... Andheraa Bahut Hai Gali-Gali Shahar MeN Jugnoo UDhTe Hue Hazaar Dekhte HaiN ... Dhoop Ne Kar Liyaa Chaahe Rukh Jidhar Bhii Saayaa Deewaar Kaa Barqaraar DekhTe HaiN ... Jabki Maaloom Hai Kuch Hone Waalaa Nahi Kyo KarKe Muhabbat Be-Kaar DekhTe HaiN ... Ek Dariyaa Se Lautaa Hai Qaafilaa Dil Kaa Aa Kar Saahil Pe Uss Paar DekhTe HaiN ... Kar Ley Khushaamad Chaahe Kitnii "Naresh" Baad Khud MeN Dil Be-Qaraar DekhTe HaiN ...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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5th November 2011, 09:52 AM
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Dhoop Ne Kar Liyaa Chaahe Rukh Jidhar Bhii Saayaa Deewaar Kaa Barqaraar DekhTe HaiN Jabki Maaloom Hai Kuch Hone Waalaa Nahi Kyo KarKe Muhabbat Be-Kaar DekhTe HaiN ... liked this line very much |
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5th November 2011, 03:22 PM
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Saayaa Deewaar Kaa Barqaraar DekhTe HaiN ... Ek Dariyaa Se Lautaa Hai Qaafilaa Dil Kaa Aa Kar Saahil Pe Uss Paar DekhTe HaiN ... bahut sundar ... acche khayal ... badiya ghazal ... dil se daad ... radhe radhe ...  Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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5th November 2011, 04:47 PM
kya kehna naresh ji ... phir ek sateek, teekhee and chubhatee huwee tippannee ki hai apke kalaam mein. bahaut sundar. daad aur wah wah !
Din MeN Aaiinaa Ek Baar DekhTe HaiN KarKe Aankh Usme Chaar DekhTe HaiN ... Andheraa Bahut Hai Gali-Gali Shahar MeN Jugnoo UDhTe Hue Hazaar Dekhte HaiN ... Dhoop Ne Kar Liyaa Chaahe Rukh Jidhar Bhii Saayaa Deewaar Kaa Barqaraar DekhTe HaiN ... Jabki Maaloom Hai Kuch Hone Waalaa Nahi Kyo KarKe Muhabbat Be-Kaar DekhTe HaiN ... Ek Dariyaa Se Lautaa Hai Qaafilaa Dil Kaa Aa Kar Saahil Pe Uss Paar DekhTe HaiN ... Kar Ley Khushaamad Chaahe Kitnii "Naresh" [/QUOTE]Baad Khud MeN Dil Be-Qaraar DekhTe HaiN ... |
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5th November 2011, 07:33 PM
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Andheraa Bahut Hai Gali-Gali Shahar MeN Jugnoo UDhTe Hue Hazaar Dekhte HaiN ... किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं |
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5th November 2011, 08:22 PM
Andheraa Bahut Hai Gali-Gali Shahar MeN
Jugnoo UDhTe Hue Hazaar Dekhte HaiN ... acha hai Dhoop Ne Kar Liyaa Chaahe Rukh Jidhar Bhii Saayaa Deewaar Kaa Barqaraar DekhTe HaiN ... yeh to kamaal hai Jabki Maaloom Hai Kuch Hone Waalaa Nahi Kyo KarKe Muhabbat Be-Kaar DekhTe HaiN ... haha..yeh to aapko pata.. Ek Dariyaa Se Lautaa Hai Qaafilaa Dil Kaa Aa Kar Saahil Pe Uss Paar DekhTe HaiN ... yeh pehle nahi samjha..phir samjha..jis tarah samjha..us tarah acha hai.. achi ghazal rahi..matla maqta thoda kamzor laga mujhe..lekin aapke khyaal hamesha ki tarah saral aur ache hote hain..aur kuch ekaad to nayi cheez hoti hi hai..god bless aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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6th November 2011, 06:39 AM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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6th November 2011, 08:41 AM
sirf ek pehle sher ki doosri line ke alawa poori ghazal mukammal rahi... Khoob aur bahut khoob... Loved few of them like
Dhoop Ne Kar Liyaa Chaahe Rukh Jidhar Bhii Saayaa Deewaar Kaa Barqaraar DekhTe HaiN Ek Dariyaa Se Lautaa Hai Qaafilaa Dil Kaa Aa Kar Saahil Pe Uss Paar DekhTe HaiN ... Keep it up! ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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6th November 2011, 02:22 PM
Khayaal maiN gehraayi hai aur bayaani bhi acchi rahi, Naresh Ji...!
Din MeN Aaiinaa Ek Baar DekhTe HaiN KarKe Aankh Usme Chaar DekhTe HaiN ... AnkheiN chaar hona ek muhaawraa hai jiss ka arth hai : Eye to eye confrontation between two people...! To hamare khayaal se ankh chaar dekhna galat hai...! Matle ko iss tarha likhaa jaaye to aap ka kya khayaal hai...? Din maiN aainaa ek baar dekhte heiN AnkhoN maiN uski dildaar dekhte heiN Take good care of yourself , ok...? DuaaoN ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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6th November 2011, 03:48 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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6th November 2011, 04:41 PM
Andheraa Bahut Hai Gali-Gali Shahar MeN
Jugnoo UDhTe Hue Hazaar Dekhte HaiN ... naresh ji kaise haiN aap? ghazal bahut achhi hui hai...khaas taur pe ye uppar wala sher... daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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9th November 2011, 06:38 PM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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10th November 2011, 05:07 AM
Jabki Maaloom Hai Kuch Hone Waalaa Nahi
Kyo KarKe Muhabbat Be-Kaar DekhTe HaiN ... Ek Dariyaa Se Lautaa Hai Qaafilaa Dil Kaa Aa Kar Saahil Pe Uss Paar DekhTe HaiN ... beautiful lines Naresh ji Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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10th November 2011, 07:52 PM
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Zarraa Ji ... InaayetoN Hauslaa Afzaai Aur MohabbatoN Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH .... !!! YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th November 2011, 08:42 AM
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YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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Main shayar to nahin.....
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11th November 2011, 08:59 AM
bahut hee sunder ghazl........ sare aashar bahut acche lage.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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11th November 2011, 04:25 PM
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Jabki Maaloom Hai Kuch Hone Waalaa Nahi Kyo KarKe Muhabbat Be-Kaar DekhTe HaiN ... Ek Dariyaa Se Lautaa Hai Qaafilaa Dil Kaa Aa Kar Saahil Pe Uss Paar DekhTe HaiN ... Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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15th January 2014, 04:28 PM
Waaaaaaah Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Shahab Bahot Hi Badiyan..........Ye To Kehar Hi Dahaati Hai........................
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