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. - 9th July 2005, 10:36 PM

nafrat hain hame insaan ke is roop se,jab woh rishton ko todne ke liye bahano ko dhoondta hai,,,nafrat hain hame


aitbaar ab to kisi bhi cheez ka
na raha hame...............
pyar kab tha zindagi se
ab to maut ka intzaar bhi na raha hame..............

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Thumbs up too good - 9th July 2005, 11:03 PM

hi ruchika.....i really loved ur lines very very well said....

even i dislike those persons who doesnt know wat relationships

are all about......


be!maan mohabbat.....!!!

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10th July 2005, 11:22 AM

very well said ruchika ji mujhe bhi aise logon se shakth nafrat hai.aise hi likhte rahiye.



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10th July 2005, 01:58 PM

kehte sab yehi hain
par yaad kijieyaga o bhi ise padhe,aapne agar kabhi kisi ka dil dukhaya ho to jaa kar sorry maang lena,ho sakta hai woh insaan aapke intezaar main hi kab se jiye jaa raha ho

bas,woh na padhe ise jiske liye yeh likhi gayi hai
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10th July 2005, 02:04 PM

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kehte sab yehi hain
par yaad kijieyaga o bhi ise padhe,aapne agar kabhi kisi ka dil dukhaya ho to jaa kar sorry maang lena,ho sakta hai woh insaan aapke intezaar main hi kab se jiye jaa raha ho

bas,woh na padhe ise jiske liye yeh likhi gayi hai
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Par jab aap muafi mangte hue apne ghutne tek do .. aur samne wala tas se mas na ho to kya kareN .. kehte hai pyar saccha ho to lautta hai .. par agar wo saccha ho aur na lautna chahe to kya .. ruchika ji jise aapke paas aana hai na .. usko kisi se sorry kehne ki jaroorat nahi .. agar pyar saccha hai to .. kyuNki pyar maiN ye wors use nahi ho sakte .. aur jo aisa karwaye yse pyar nahi keh sakte ... kyuNki agar aisa karne ke bawjood bhi wo na mane to kya kareN... jabki woh janta hai ki samne wale ki jindgi dhalti ja rahi hai har naa ke sath .

agar bura lage to muaf kijiyega

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10th July 2005, 09:39 PM

hum kis layak hain jo aapki baton ka bura manenge
apne hi aise kaam karte hain,ki apne zinda hone par bhi shak hota hai,vaise jo bhi aapne kaha,sach hai ya jhooth hum to nahin jante,kyunki abhi khud hi nahin samajh paa rahe ki hum sanse le rahe hain to iska matlab hum zinda hain,lekin hum dil se marr chuke hain,aur jo bhi pyar raha hoga,khuda use khush rakhe taki aap bhi hamesha khush rahen


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12th July 2005, 01:37 AM

Hey Ruchika bahut accha likkha hai aap ne.........

Par kya yeh theek hai ya nahi yeh mein nahi jaanti par parh ke dil ko dukh to bahut huya.... kyon ki dil ke ehsaas wohi jaanta hai jisne yeh sab mehsoos kiya ho.... Waise ek sawaal hai, agar aisa waqt aaye jahan pyar ko khush karne ke liye pyar se hi bewafaai karni pade to tumhara kya opinion hai? It's always hard to know what's in human's mind.... you never know who is right and who is wrong........... am I right?... the life is a big confussion......I am confuse are you?
   
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12th July 2005, 07:14 PM

hmm.parul all i can say u is just one thing
koi bhi relationship chahe pyar ka ho,dosti ka ho,ya jo bhi ho
woh do logon ke beech hota hai ,isliye usme decisions sirf aik ko lene ka koi haq nahin ,agar haq hai to jis se relation hai use samjha kar decision lo,aur agar woh tumhe samajhta hai ,to tumhari baton ko bhi samjhega,aur pyar ko bhi

par par par,pyar main kabhi bhi kisi bhi tarike ki majbooriyan nahin hoti,samjhi jati hain,par hoti nahin,nahin to pyar nahin hota
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kisi baat ka bura laga ho to maaf kijiyega...abhi kaafi kam umr hai hamari


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12th July 2005, 08:37 PM

Ruchika,

hey Mujhe kyun bura lagega tumhari baaton kaa, jahan mein confuse thi waha tumhara opinion hi to manga tha... par koi baat nahi... I will get my answer..... and sorry to say that but I am not agree with the sentence you said "pyar main kabhi bhi kisi bhi tarike ki majbooriyan nahin hoti,samjhi jati hain,par hoti nahin".... you are writing soo good.... I can appricate your work! keep writing and have fun... enjoy life and take care of yourself.........
   
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