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27th November 2006, 06:27 PM
"DOSTO IS KO LAL SYAHE NA SAMJNA' YA "JIGER-E-HKOON " HAI " FAKIRA KA
AAJ TAK AAP LOGO NA HAR MUKAM KA SHAR, BAZAM, YA . NAGMAA PARAA HOGAA MAGAR PEHKI BAR MAI JAFFA KA UPPER LIKH RAHA HO " KYO KI IS DUNIYA MAI HAR KISI KO GUM NA MARA HAI, MAGAR YA BAADNASIB "JAFFA" SA GHAYAL HUA HAI.. YA KOI DASTAN.N KOI .....BAZAM NAHI, GHAZAL NAHI. NA KOI SHAR HAI..... YA " FAKIRA" KI MOHBAAT KA IMTEHAIN HAI........ YU DEKHNA HAMARA ,TUMHA, OR TUMHARA PALKAA JUKHAA KAR , SARMAAA JANNAA....... LIKH KA NAAM TUMHARA , SAMUNDAR KI JAMI PAR... USAA DEKH KAR TUM ..ITRAA KAA, TUMHARA SAAF KAR JANAA..... PHIR DEKHTA HUA , HUMA TARPTA HUA... TUMHARA GULAB JAISA MUSKURA JAANNA... PHIR JAISA JHUKTI HAI GHATTA , UN LEHROO.N PER . TUMHARAA MACHAAL KAR MERI BAHOO. MAI JANAA..... KARNA SHRARAAT QATIL NAINOO.N SA , OR HUMARA GHAYAL HO JAANNA... THI DONO KA MAAN MAI "EK-HI-TAMANNA" EK DUSRA KA SAATH JANAM -JANAM BHAR NEBHANA.... NA MANJOOR HUA US " KHUDA" KO HUMARA YO MIL PAANA.... US KHUDA KA HUM DONO KO ALAG KAR JANAA. PHIR TUMHARA " SITAROOO.N MAI ASHIYA OR MERA " FAKIRA " BAN JAANAAA..... MERA " FAKIRA " BAN JANNA .... FAKIRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. USKA DARD OR SHERO. KI JUBANI..... KUCH NHI IS DUNIYA MAI " DOSTI KA SIVA NHI KOI DOST IS DUNIYA MAI MAUT KA SIVA 
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27th November 2006, 10:25 PM
mere dost fakira ji adaab aur namskaar
kya baat hai mere dost bahot hi khub likhi hai dastaan aapne sach em padhta hi raha main , ehsas bahot hi achhi tarah se aapne bayan kiya hai mere dost bahot hi achhi shuruat hai aapki dil se nikli daad kubul kijiyenga aur aise hi apne ehsas ko bayan kijiyenga mere dost khus rahiye apna khayal rakhiye aapka dost dhaval |
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28th November 2006, 10:49 AM
hi dhaval so sweet of u dear ,
sahi kaha aap na ya dil se likhi uhi dastan hai mera dost , agar dubhara parro to . meri har 2 line ka baad apni palkoo.ko band karna or us line lo image banakar dekhna .. pir likh na kaise lagi hamri ya dastaa -e- ishq USKA DARD OR SHERO. KI JUBANI..... KUCH NHI IS DUNIYA MAI " DOSTI KA SIVA NHI KOI DOST IS DUNIYA MAI MAUT KA SIVA
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28th November 2006, 11:00 AM
mere dost fakira ji adaab aur namskaar
ha mere dost sahi kaha aapne aur main samjh bhi sakta hu aapke ehsas ko kyu ki ye ehsas hi hai jisse hum kuch likh sakte hai aapne bahot dil se likha hai bas aise hi dil se hamesa likhte rahiyenga khus raho mere dost apna khayal rakhna aapka dost dhaval |
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