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Kimat Meri Banai ABhi -
28th November 2005, 10:53 AM
Hajir HUn Apni Agali Kosish ke Saath aapse Jaane Ki Kaisi Rahi Ye Kosish............gaur kijiye......
Tere Dil Ko Chuke Hawa Jo Gujre Kabhi Samaj Lena Humko Yaad Teri Aayi Abhi Humne Socha Kaise Tumko Pata Chale Boli Hawa Main Dilake Ehsaas Aai ABhi Saath Tere CHalti Rahegi Yun Ye Fiza Jaise Meri Dhadkan Dil Main Samai ABhi Dekhke Diwaane TUmko HUm Ho Gaye Nazaron Pe Meri Aawargi Hai Chai Abhi Lag Raha Hun Khush Main Aaj Kyun Itna Lagta Hai Usne Kimat Meri Banai ABhi |
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28th November 2005, 02:42 PM
Bahut khoob !
Aapne jo pesh-e khidmat shayri chand kar di hai Kya kahun aapne to meri bolti band kar di hai ! Keep writing. -Sanjay Karndhar. |
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28th November 2005, 09:26 PM
dear sandhaya.....i donno if i shud call u meenakshi or sandhaya??
bahaut hi accha likkha hai tumne hamesha ki tarah....take care and keep writing...bye  Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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29th November 2005, 11:50 AM
nice veryyyyyyyyyyyy nice
maine apni friend ko sunayi wo to clean bold ho gayi  ~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~ 
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very nice keep it up |
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very nice keep it up -
3rd December 2005, 11:40 PM
hi sandhya
bahuthi khoob lika hai aapne hamesha ki tarah itna acha liklethi aap jasi se ek machli ko dek kar lagthi hai aisa ki kaise tahar lethi hai vo panni mey jaise ki huse kisi ki madat nahyi chahihey tahaernekeliye aise hi bilkul khub likthey hai hai itni asanisey itni achey bahut5hi acha lagthi hai aap ki shayiri sunkar just keep it up n do writing like this. hope n I wish you all the best for ur future aisey hi bhaut achey ahe kavita suney keliye milegi aap ki taraf se regards Rajagopalan .P |
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Re: Kimat Meri Banai ABhi -
9th December 2005, 10:05 PM
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Sandhaya Aap ka har sher k lafaz dil ko chhu jaate hai Aur padhkar pata nahi kya ho jaata hai hamein Sach mein bohat hi umda likhati hai aap Diggaj Dave kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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10th December 2005, 11:05 AM
Sukhariya Sanjay Ji..........meri Iss Kosish Ko Safal banae Ke Liye...........aur ye tuh doston ka pyaar hai verna main apki bolti band karne ke kabil kahan hun.....
Dear Farhana First Of All mera naam Meenakshi Hai .......lekin Sandhaya Naam Meri Sabse Achi DOst Ka Hai Aap jiss naam se chahe mujhe bhula sakti hai........and thanks for liking .......aati rahiyega...... Abhishek Ji Kya Kahun Main..............aapko aur aapki dost ne iss najm ko saraha ,,,,,main sukhar gujar hun.......aise hi apne bahumuleya compliments dete rahiyega....... Hello Raja Ji.........aapko meri shayri achi lagti hai ye sunke main bahut khush hun...........aapne apne vichar kahe acha laga padhke........aate rahiyega.... hello diggaj ji........ abh aapse kya kahun main............thanks yaar.......aur nice lines dear..........keep reading..... Main Likhti Rahungi Tab Tak Yaaro Jab Tak Saath Mera Doge Tum Sab |
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