Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Kya kami hai mujh mein?
Old
  (#1)
Rutu
Mas00m Shayar
Rutu will become famous soon enough
 
Rutu's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 129
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: NYC,USA
Rep Power: 20
Sad Kya kami hai mujh mein? - 7th June 2002, 08:33 PM

Kya kami hai mujh mein,
Ye aaj tak mai samajh nahi payi.

Koi to baat hogi tere dil mein,
Jo kabhi mai jaan nahi payi.

Kya khubi hai tere chehre mein,
Jo mai use bhula nahi payi.

Koi to surat hogi teri nigahon mein,
Lekin aaj tak use dekh nahi payi.

Andaza nahi tujhe , kya hai is dil mein,
Tere pyar mein maine sirf tanhai payi.

Mana aasan nahi mujhe basana dil mein,
Tujhse mai koi zidd nahi kar payi.

Kya halat hui hai gham ke aalam mein,
Zindagi ka imtihaan mai jeet nahi payi.

Muddatein beeti yoonhi yaadon mein,
Kuch bhi mai apna bana na payi.

E khuda aur kya rakha hai mere naseeb mein,
Tera diya taufa mai rakh nahi payi.

Bula le mujhe ab tere aashiyane mein,
Is jahan se mai takra nahi payi...



Dhuan banake fiza mein uda diya mujhko.
Main jal raha tha .. kisi ne bujha diya mujhko ...
  Send a message via Yahoo to Rutu Send a message via AIM to Rutu  
Reply With Quote
waah
Old
  (#2)
tanhadil
Registered User
tanhadil is on a distinguished road
 
tanhadil's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 106
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Canada
Rep Power: 20
waah - 8th June 2002, 12:24 PM

Rutu...bahot hi accha likha hai.....

inshallah tuje har khushi mile....
meri dua tere saath hai....

k'hafiz.


Yeh Gham Nahi ke Andhere Se Sulah Ki Maine

Malal Yeh Hai Ke ab Subh Ki Talb Bhi Nahi
  Send a message via Yahoo to tanhadil  
Reply With Quote
rutuji
Old
  (#3)
shayri12345
Registered User
shayri12345 is a jewel in the roughshayri12345 is a jewel in the roughshayri12345 is a jewel in the rough
 
Offline
Posts: 2,408
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: New York
Rep Power: 25
rutuji - 8th June 2002, 11:09 PM

dear rutuji
u wrote real welll..

aapke kuch kami nahi hai.......shayad vo hi aapko smajh na paaye

Luv Priya..>>


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
budmaas
Budmaas Shayar
budmaas is on a distinguished road
 
budmaas's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 29
Join Date: Oct 2001
Location: Out
Rep Power: 0
9th June 2002, 06:11 PM

Chhor de usko jo tujhe samajh nahee payaa
Aa nikal ghar se baahar mai tere saath aa yy




:)_LipaTaa jo bosaa leke to bole ki dekhiye
ye dusarii Khataa hai O pahlaa qusoor thaa....!!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
sacvan
Registered User
sacvan is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 7
Join Date: Jun 2002
Location: dubai
Rep Power: 0
30th June 2002, 04:23 PM

Well said Rutu....

A great display of emotions with the help of words...
all i can say is...
aap mai koi kami nahi hai
just b patient and ull get what u want...
dont loose hopes....


sacvan

Never love a love that hurts....
Never hurt a love that loves....
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
sweet_nashaa
Registered User
sweet_nashaa is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 135
Join Date: Dec 2001
Location: Australia, Sydney.
Rep Power: 20
30th June 2002, 05:58 PM

bohoth hi acha likha hain...really liked it. keep it up!


Amrita


~Ulfat Ki Maari~
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
muzaffar
Registered User
muzaffar is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 5
Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: delhi
Rep Power: 0
1st July 2002, 06:31 PM

hi rutu ji,

kya khoob likha hai aapne. bahut umda. aapke ye sher padh karke hamari yaadein taaza hogayin. aapko main bas itna hi bolna chahoonga ki aap main koi kami nahi. wah pagal hai jo aapke pyar ko samajh nahi paaya. humne aajtak ki duniya main yahi sikha hai ki pyar sab ko nahi milta hai. aur itna yaad rakhiyega ki pyaar dene ka naam hai. hamari uper wale se yahi dua hai ki aap humesha khush rahein.

kaun kahta hai ki main pyar karne ke layak nahi
mery kadr unse poocho jinhe hum hasil nahi.

bye.
  Send a message via Yahoo to muzaffar Send a message via AIM to muzaffar  
Reply With Quote
apke sher pe apna ek sher araz karta hoon
Old
  (#8)
barrun_jawed
adna sa sukhanwar
barrun_jawed will become famous soon enough
 
Offline
Posts: 22
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: kanpur india
Rep Power: 0
apke sher pe apna ek sher araz karta hoon - 4th July 2002, 10:17 PM

ji waise to bahot hi achaa likha hai lekin is ghazal se mujhe apne likha ek sher yaad aa gaya jo aap log ke samne laane ki himmat kar raha hoon

tune mujhe chaha umar-e-nadaan se
maine na samjha yeh meri naadani thi
samjha bhi to us mod pe aake
jab khatm-e-zindagani thi

waise to bade bade sukhanwar hain is site par jinke kalaam mane pade un sab ko baarun ka salaam .

allah aap sab ko aur achaa likhne ki taufeeq ataa farmaye.

baarun.



ishq ne humko shayar bana diya, warna aadmi humbhi the kaam ke

Last edited by barrun_jawed; 5th July 2002 at 06:56 PM..
 Send a message via ICQ to barrun_jawed Send a message via Yahoo to barrun_jawed  
Reply With Quote
Kya kehna
Old
  (#9)
rami
Registered User
rami is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 64
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: hyderabad
Rep Power: 20
Kya kehna - 5th July 2002, 10:25 AM

Namashkaar Rutu ji,

well said and keep it up.

i hope u will write like this only and itna dard kahan se aaya.

Rami


Rami,
Ek Benaam shayar
  Send a message via AIM to rami  
Reply With Quote
thanx to alllll
Old
  (#10)
Rutu
Mas00m Shayar
Rutu will become famous soon enough
 
Rutu's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 129
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: NYC,USA
Rep Power: 20
thanx to alllll - 5th July 2002, 08:24 PM

hi everyone! .... aap sabka bahot shukriya ki aapne meri shayri ki itni tareef ki , waise to mai is kabeel nahi hoon ... mai to sirf ek din baithi apne dil ki baat ek kagaz pe kalam leke likh rahi thi aur phir socha to yahan post kardi .... nahi pata tha ki itne sare shaks pasand karenge. allah ka shukriya. aur aap ka bhi.

jee baarun aapka sher bhi bahot acha hai ... aur rami jee , ye dard to kuch bhi nahi hai. maine ab ye jana ki aise bahot sare log hai jinhe mujhe se bhi bada sadma uthana padta hai lekin phir wo jeete hai aur mai marne ki baat kar baithi.

lekin agar aap sab ka yoonhi sath mila to mai shayad is-se bhi umda shayri likh paungi ... ijazat chahti hoon

khuda hafiz
bye
Rutu


Dhuan banake fiza mein uda diya mujhko.
Main jal raha tha .. kisi ne bujha diya mujhko ...
  Send a message via Yahoo to Rutu Send a message via AIM to Rutu  
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Zindagi Mein Tumhari Kami Reh Gayi khaksaar Shayri-e-Dard 3 2nd January 2008 11:23 AM
Dard_E_Dil Mein Kami............... Eyes Ghazal Section 0 4th April 2006 05:06 PM
mujh me kya kami hai dard_thesorrow Shayri-e-Dard 0 19th September 2004 03:10 PM
husn walon mein mohabbat ki kami hoti hai allahabadrptds Shayri-e-Ishq 12 19th December 2002 12:51 PM
kami The Tajmehal mein khokharzz Shayri-e-Sharaab 0 12th July 2002 03:40 AM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com