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Aankhain kitna kuch keh deti hai!! - 23rd April 2006, 05:20 AM

Kuch aise hi...



Aankhain hai Jhuki si
hai inhe aapke aane ka intzaar
Koyi bataye kaise sahe ye duri
Jaane kyu dilon me hai, is duniya ki bani deewar

Laga jo baithey hum dil apna
beeyan aur ab kar nahi saktey
Aankahin aaj sab kuch keh rahi hai kahani
khud samajh lo, honth aur hila nahi saktey

Aankhain bhari huyi uthi unhe dekhne ke liye
Roke hai mushkil se, ye bereham ashk
Chain asaani se aata nahi
Ye uljhan, ye bechaini hai kaisa karam

Aankhon se ik garam shola sa gira hai
jala de na daaman, darr dil me aakhe thama hai
Samajh lijiye ye lagi - dillagi nahi
Ajab ye deewangi hai - kuch ajab hi sama hai !!

Aankhain hai jhuki
hai inhe aapke aane ka intzaar......


with luv
Priya


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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Re: Aankhain kitna kuch keh deti hai!! - 23rd April 2006, 05:27 AM

Priya,

AWESOME!!!!

dil ki awaaz hai seedha dil pe dastak de gayi...
ankaha hi sahi magar dard mein daaman bhego gayi...

i liked what u wrote... its so true... and ur feelings could be felt thru ur writing,... i loved it..

i felt every word...

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23rd April 2006, 05:58 AM

wow......am speechless...this is juss wowie!


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Re: Aankhain kitna kuch keh deti hai!! - 23rd April 2006, 01:59 PM

hello priya

nice thought,u have beutifuly expressed it in form shayri.......
keep writting such shayris

hum the ankhon me sirf disease khozte hai becuse of my profession,but aapne to ankhon me kya kya khoz liya.......
bye and take care
passionate..........


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pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara
jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara
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23rd April 2006, 02:01 PM

Tumhare kalam ne phir se ek khoubsurat kalaam ko padhne
ka avasar diya...!

Loved it...Priya Betiya !

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Re: Aankhain kitna kuch keh deti hai!! - 29th April 2006, 10:47 AM

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Originally posted by LuvPriya
Kuch aise hi...



Aankhain hai Jhuki si
hai inhe aapke aane ka intzaar
Koyi bataye kaise sahe ye duri
Jaane kyu dilon me hai, is duniya ki bani deewar

Laga jo baithey hum dil apna
beeyan aur ab kar nahi saktey
Aankahin aaj sab kuch keh rahi hai kahani
khud samajh lo, honth aur hila nahi saktey

Aankhain bhari huyi uthi unhe dekhne ke liye
Roke hai mushkil se, ye bereham ashk
Chain asaani se aata nahi
Ye uljhan, ye bechaini hai kaisa karam

Aankhon se ik garam shola sa gira hai
jala de na daaman, darr dil me aakhe thama hai
Samajh lijiye ye lagi - dillagi nahi
Ajab ye deewangi hai - kuch ajab hi sama hai !!

Aankhain hai jhuki
hai inhe aapke aane ka intzaar......


with luv
Priya
Hi Priya ji,
ek bar phir aapki peshkas lajawab lagi. bohat acha lagta hei aapko padna. bas yuhi hi liktey rahiyga

aapki
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29th April 2006, 11:38 AM

Aankhain hai jhuki
hai inhe aapke aane ka intzaar......


Hello Priya

Beautiful poetry.........tumhari yeh kavita dekh mughey ek geet yaad aa gaya Ankhein bhi hoti hay Dil ki Zubaan.......very soft and beautiful poetry......

Take care
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29th April 2006, 11:55 AM

Laga jo baithey hum dil apna
beeyan aur ab kar nahi saktey
Aankahin aaj sab kuch keh rahi hai kahani
khud samajh lo, honth aur hila nahi saktey

Aankhain bhari huyi uthi unhe dekhne ke liye
Roke hai mushkil se, ye bereham ashk
Chain asaani se aata nahi
Ye uljhan, ye bechaini hai kaisa karam

bahut khub......

very beautiful.............

with best wishes

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