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Arrow "klhwahish" adhuri thi aur adhuri reh gayi...... - 11th November 2006, 12:21 AM

aj maine bahot din bad kuch likha hai i hope ke ap sab ko acha lagega


ek pal ke liye itne karib thi main unke,
na jane kyu main unse bichadti gayi

jo shaks zindagi ban gaya tha meri,
kyu main unse hi door pal pal jati rahi

pyar mera nek hai aur saccha bhi,
dard bhari yad mere zakhm badhati gayi

kismat nahi thi shayad unko pane ki,
pyar ke liye main umr bhar tarasti rahi

ye anjam hai mera aur mere pyaar ka,
"klhwahish" adhuri thi aur adhuri reh gayi


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11th November 2006, 11:54 AM

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aj maine bahot din bad kuch likha hai i hope ke ap sab ko acha lagega


ek pal ke liye itne karib thi main unke,
na jane kyu main unse bichadti gayi

jo shaks zindagi ban gaya tha meri,
kyu main unse hi door pal pal jati rahi

pyar mera nek hai aur saccha bhi,
dard bhari yad mere zakhm badhati gayi

kismat nahi thi shayad unko pane ki,
pyar ke liye main umr bhar tarasti rahi

ye anjam hai mera aur mere pyaar ka,
"klhwahish" adhuri thi aur adhuri reh gayi

khwahish ji achhi kosish ki hai aapne dard ko achhe asaar ke sath aapne bayan kiya hai

bas yuhi likhte rahiye aap hamesha

khus rahiye
apna khayal rakhiye

aapka dost
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13th November 2006, 12:58 PM

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aj maine bahot din bad kuch likha hai i hope ke ap sab ko acha lagega


ek pal ke liye itne karib thi main unke,
na jane kyu main unse bichadti gayi

jo shaks zindagi ban gaya tha meri,
kyu main unse hi door pal pal jati rahi

pyar mera nek hai aur saccha bhi,
dard bhari yad mere zakhm badhati gayi

kismat nahi thi shayad unko pane ki,
pyar ke liye main umr bhar tarasti rahi

ye anjam hai mera aur mere pyaar ka,
"klhwahish" adhuri thi aur adhuri reh gayi
dost bahut accha likha hai aapne, ahsaas bahut badiya hai.n har sher dil par dastak de gaya. sabhi sher pasand aaye. yu hi likhtey rahiye.

aapki dost


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ek pal ke liye itne karib thi main unke,
na jane kyu main unse bichadti gayi

jo shaks zindagi ban gaya tha meri,
kyu main unse hi door pal pal jati rahi

pyar mera nek hai aur saccha bhi,
dard bhari yad mere zakhm badhati gayi

kismat nahi thi shayad unko pane ki,
pyar ke liye main umr bhar tarasti rahi

ye anjam hai mera aur mere pyaar ka,
"klhwahish" adhuri thi aur adhuri reh gayi
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aj maine bahot din bad kuch likha hai i hope ke ap sab ko acha lagega


ek pal ke liye itne karib thi main unke,
na jane kyu main unse bichadti gayi

jo shaks zindagi ban gaya tha meri,
kyu main unse hi door pal pal jati rahi

pyar mera nek hai aur saccha bhi,
dard bhari yad mere zakhm badhati gayi

kismat nahi thi shayad unko pane ki,
pyar ke liye main umr bhar tarasti rahi

ye anjam hai mera aur mere pyaar ka,
"klhwahish" adhuri thi aur adhuri reh gayi
Bahut khoob..khwahish ji....
bahut achchi tarah se aapne dil ke haal ko bayaan kiya hai apne is kalaam mein...
aise hi likhte rahiye...

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aj maine bahot din bad kuch likha hai i hope ke ap sab ko acha lagega


ek pal ke liye itne karib thi main unke,
na jane kyu main unse bichadti gayi

jo shaks zindagi ban gaya tha meri,
kyu main unse hi door pal pal jati rahi

pyar mera nek hai aur saccha bhi,
dard bhari yad mere zakhm badhati gayi

kismat nahi thi shayad unko pane ki,
pyar ke liye main umr bhar tarasti rahi

ye anjam hai mera aur mere pyaar ka,
"klhwahish" adhuri thi aur adhuri reh gayi


hey KHWAHISH,
bahut khub..........bahut sadgi se dil ke dard ko bayan kiya hai ............keep it up............take care......
aap ki dost,
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