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Ek NaaDaaNi Hai...! -
2nd August 2007, 02:08 AM
Talashte kya ho mujhme.. main khud to khud maiN kho gaya huN… Jaagti aaNkhoN mai khwaaB liye, chalte chalet ab so gaya huN,.. kehte the zindgi ki tasweer mujhe, apne hathoN main bana lakeer mujhe… hasne ki khwahish liye.. hanste hue ro gaya huN.. sach ky se kya maiN ho gaya huN.. maiN Khud hi khud maiN kho gaya huN…. !
æææææææææææææææææææææææææ SaaNse hi bachi bas mere hone ki nishani hai… AankhoN se beh rahi aaj, phir koi kahaani hai… Bheege hue patto par fisalti sarakti si jaa rahi.. Pal pal khathm hoti hui mit-ti si zindgaani hai… Seene pe bikhre hai jo armaan toote se yahaN … baaton ka hunar hai kuch yaadoN ka paani hai… Le aati hai kareeb use baar baar tanhai mere.. Muskura mai kehta huN,ye baateN purani hai… Uda deta huN lafzoN ko is qaid aasman maiN… Ki Sisakti hui raateN aur madhosh jawaani hai… Roya hoga bohat wo bhi, Mita ke ‘saccha_pyar’… Dil-e-nakaam ka guroor hai, ya ek nadaani hai.. Haan Bin tere jiya kab,Zinda ye laash uthani hai… Sach.!SaaNse hi bachi, mere hone ki nishani hai… AankhoN se beh rahi aaj, phir koi kahaani hai… æææææææææææææææææææææææææ Kunaal (02-08-2007) Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
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2nd August 2007, 10:39 AM
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Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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2nd August 2007, 11:25 AM
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Bahut khoob Kunaal sahab... Bahut Unda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.....bas aise hi likhte rahiye... Jawed.. |
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shayri is my life
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2nd August 2007, 07:13 PM
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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Mai shayar to nahi
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2nd August 2007, 09:51 PM
Le aati hai kareeb use baar baar tanhai mere..
Muskura mai kehta huN,ye baateN purani hai… Roya hoga bohat wo bhi, Mita ke ‘saccha_pyar’… Dil-e-nakaam ka guroor hai, ya ek nadaani hai.. adaab kunal ji.,..kaize hain aap?bahut dino baad aapko padha,hamezha ki tarah vahi jaadu chala jaane vaala andaaz..bahut acha laga padhker.uper ke yeh do azhaar to behad pazand aaye. yunhin likhte rahen gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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Yaadon ka!
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3rd August 2007, 02:28 PM
Kya hain yeh sab????
 kaunsa ab dukh ka pahad tut gaya hain tumhare upar???jo aisi tehreer pesh ki.........IN sab ke alawa aur bhi kuch likhna aata hain tumhe................Darr gaye na.....hahahhaa .... are was just kidding.........bahut din se tumko daata nahin hain na..isisliye....chalo ab ek nazar tumhari ghazal ki aur bhi kar lete hain.... SaaNse hi bachi bas mere hone ki nishani hai… AankhoN se beh rahi aaj, phir koi kahaani hai… very nice.. Bheege hue patto par fisalti sarakti si jaa rahi.. Pal pal khathm hoti hui mit-ti si zindgaani hai… fir marne marne ki baatSeene pe bikhre hai jo armaan toote se yahaN … baaton ka hunar hai kuch yaadoN ka paani hai…wah!! Le aati hai kareeb use baar baar tanhai mere.. Muskura mai kehta huN,ye baateN purani hai…Wah wah wah! Uda deta huN lafzoN ko is qaid aasman maiN… Ki Sisakti hui raateN aur madhosh jawaani hai… Roya hoga bohat wo bhi, Mita ke ‘saccha_pyar’… Dil-e-nakaam ka guroor hai, ya ek nadaani hai..rite.yahin hota hain!.. Haan Bin tere jiya kab,Zinda ye laash uthani hai… Sach.!SaaNse hi bachi, mere hone ki nishani hai…I hate the word laash ! Aise hi likhte rehna..................meri tarfse dil se daad kubool karna..... tumahri dost.... mausam  Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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3rd August 2007, 08:28 PM
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Le aati hai kareeb use baar baar tanhai mere.. Muskura mai kehta huN,ye baateN purani hai… Roya hoga bohat wo bhi, Mita ke ‘saccha_pyar’… Dil-e-nakaam ka guroor hai, ya ek nadaani hai.. kunal ji kia kahoon is dard bhare kalam per bas itna kahoongi ke aap apne ahsasaat ko shayri main bohat khoobi se bayanker sakte hain yunhi likhte rahiye kunal ji apna khayal rakhiyega apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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4th August 2007, 12:20 PM
Kunal....bahut accha likhtey ho aap, aapko jab bhi pada hai...dil ko accha laga hai. aapki gazal behad khoobsurat hai...par dard bahut jayada hai....har sher accha banna hai...ek umda gazal ke liye dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye.
god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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7th August 2007, 01:25 AM
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Kasif bhai ... aap yuN sath dete hai .. ki lagta hi nahi ki humne apni baat sunayi ho .. aisa lagta hai koi hume hume sama ke padh kar chala gaya ho aise hi sath rahiye Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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7th August 2007, 04:21 AM
namaskar kunal ji,
bahut hi ache ehsaas pesh kiye hain apne. dil ko chune wale. aapki kalam humein bahut achi lagi. yuhin likte rahein. aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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8th August 2007, 09:42 AM
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Hello Kunal Ji, aapne bahot hi khoob likha hai. aap ki gazal mai itana dard itani taqleef dekh kar laga jaise pyaar aur jasbaaton ka shaayad har kisi ko yahi anjaam milata hai. Lagta hai ki jaise Bhagwaan ji ne chaahane waalo ko gum hi gum dene ki jaise koi Prathaa chalaai hai ... well aapaki rachana hume bahot pasand aai ...Aapko har khushi mile Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe. Aapki Dost: Gudia Jay Ambe. Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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8th August 2007, 11:32 AM
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Le aati hai kareeb use baar baar tanhai mere.. Muskura mai kehta huN,ye baateN purani hai… aap isee tarah likhte rahe. take care SHAAN Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. ........Shaan...... |
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12th August 2007, 12:05 AM
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Aap aaye bas yahi bohat hai Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th October 2009, 04:40 AM
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badi dair ke baad aapki izzat afzaai ka jawaab kar raha hun .. mujhe to bas aaj kal aapka intzaar hai ki aap aakhir hai kahan... main jald hi aapko yahan dekhna chahta huN.. Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th October 2009, 04:47 AM
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aapk nazar ka asar hai ye ,, ki khaak alfazoN main jaadu nazar aata hai aapko...bohat khushi hui apko yahn dekh ke; Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th October 2009, 05:44 AM
Haan Bin tere jiya kab,Zinda ye laash uthani hai…
Sach.!SaaNse hi bachi, mere hone ki nishani hai… ] bahut achy kunaal bhayee ... aur sifar takhullas bhi bahut pasand aaya keep writing |
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