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Thumbs up Zakhm itne bhee gehre kabhi hua kare - 31st July 2009, 12:53 AM
Dosto aaj qaafee mahino baad is mehfiil me aana hua hai, aur qaafee vaqt bad maine phir kuchh likhane ki koshish ki hai, vaise yeh behr mai nahi hai magar ummid karta hoon ki aap sab dosto ko pasand aayegi.

Zakhm itne bhee gehre kabhi hua kare
kii khud-b-khud hee bharne ki dua kare

terii aankho me.n aisa kyaa hai jaalim
koi hamse bhee to raasta puuchha kare

tune basaayi hai yeh basti maalik mere
ham kaise tere na hone ki baddua kare

baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

tu bhi hai gham men aur mai bhee hoon
kyun na ham mil kar is ka saamana kare


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31st July 2009, 01:04 AM
baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

kya bat akhi...
sahi kaha sabse pahle khud ko dkeho phri ungli uthao
achi rachna hai

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31st July 2009, 01:25 AM
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Zakhm itne bhee gehre kabhi hua kare
kii khud-b-khud hee bharne ki dua kare

terii aankho me.n aisa kyaa hai jaalim
koi hamse bhee to raasta puuchha kare

tune basaayi hai yeh basti maalik mere
ham kaise tere na hone ki baddua kare

baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

tu bhi hai gham men aur mai bhee hoon
kyun na ham mil kar is ka saamana kare


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manu
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31st July 2009, 10:34 AM
baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

bahot hi khoob..behad umda aur jaisa Naresh ji ne kaha kuch seekh de jaati hai aapki yeh ghazal..khush rahiye..dil se daad kubool kijiye..

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31st July 2009, 02:42 PM
Acharyaa jii AadaaB.......

Aapki gazal bahut hi umda lagi kafi ahsaas dil ko chu gaye ... ...... bahut hi gehre aur sahiN nasihat wale ahsaas bayaN kiye hai aapne.... aapke kuch ek sher bahut hi khoob lage...

baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

tu bhi hai gham men aur mai bhee hoon
kyun na ham mil kar is ka saamana kare

wakai bahut khoob. aate rahiye...
Bazm mein ronak chayengii........

Khush rahiye,
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This is good one dost.
keep writing...
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31st July 2009, 10:54 PM
Dear Manish jee

Kaise hain aap? aaj aapko bahut dino baad padhna naseeb hua hain ...

Ghazal behaat pasand aayi ...kuch sher hain jo dil ko chu gaye hain


Zakhm itne bhee gehre kabhi hua kare
kii khud-b-khud hee bharne ki dua kare

baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

tu bhi hai gham men aur mai bhee hoon
kyun na ham mil kar is ka saamana kare

Umeed karte hain ab aap routine mein aate rahye ... aur yu hi mehfil ko sajaate rahye

take good care

aapki dost

mandeep


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Dosto aaj qaafee mahino baad is mehfiil me aana hua hai, aur qaafee vaqt bad maine phir kuchh likhane ki koshish ki hai, vaise yeh behr mai nahi hai magar ummid karta hoon ki aap sab dosto ko pasand aayegi.

Zakhm itne bhee gehre kabhi hua kare
kii khud-b-khud hee bharne ki dua kare

terii aankho me.n aisa kyaa hai jaalim
koi hamse bhee to raasta puuchha kare

tune basaayi hai yeh basti maalik mere
ham kaise tere na hone ki baddua kare

baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

tu bhi hai gham men aur mai bhee hoon
kyun na ham mil kar is ka saamana kare


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manu


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Dosto aaj qaafee mahino baad is mehfiil me aana hua hai, aur qaafee vaqt bad maine phir kuchh likhane ki koshish ki hai, vaise yeh behr mai nahi hai magar ummid karta hoon ki aap sab dosto ko pasand aayegi.

Zakhm itne bhee gehre kabhi hua kare
kii khud-b-khud hee bharne ki dua kare

terii aankho me.n aisa kyaa hai jaalim
koi hamse bhee to raasta puuchha kare

tune basaayi hai yeh basti maalik mere
ham kaise tere na hone ki baddua kare

baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

tu bhi hai gham men aur mai bhee hoon
kyun na ham mil kar is ka saamana kare


regards
manu


Bahut hi accha likha h aapne, ye sher bahut pasand aaya
Zakhm itne bhee gehre kabhi hua kare
kii khud-b-khud hee bharne ki dua kare
   
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2nd August 2009, 10:47 PM
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Dosto aaj qaafee mahino baad is mehfiil me aana hua hai, aur qaafee vaqt bad maine phir kuchh likhane ki koshish ki hai, vaise yeh behr mai nahi hai magar ummid karta hoon ki aap sab dosto ko pasand aayegi.

Zakhm itne bhee gehre kabhi hua kare
kii khud-b-khud hee bharne ki dua kare

terii aankho me.n aisa kyaa hai jaalim
koi hamse bhee to raasta puuchha kare

tune basaayi hai yeh basti maalik mere
ham kaise tere na hone ki baddua kare

baat ho auro ki to uthati hai ungaliya
kyun na khud ko hee pehle aaiina kare

tu bhi hai gham men aur mai bhee hoon
kyun na ham mil kar is ka saamana kare


regards
manu



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