usney sir jhukaya tha us din jab mere saamne,

shayri12345 · **usney sir jhukaya tha us din jab mere saamne, -** 30th October 2002, 06:26 AM

dosto ek khyaal aapke saath share kar rahi hu.

usney sir jhukaya tha us din jab mere saamne,
me samajh na saki uske andaaz e beyyaan ko?

paas jab vo rehta tha bahharey har taraf thi,
par jaanti na thi vo layega saath apney khija ko?

us samander ko dekh kar uski aankho mein ,
kyu me phir sambhal na paayi apney aap ko?

dekha tha uski jinda dili ko humney bhi,
shayad na dekha tha humney uski sangdili ko?

tha usey bhi humsey pyar, ya pal do pal ka mera sapna?
bigri zindagi is tarha me kabhi samajh na saki is ko?

ek pal ke liye usey dur jab jaate dekha,
thaaamna mushkil ho gaya tha yaar is dil ko!!!!!

mayus is kader kabhi apney aapko na paayaa maine,
ab samunder bhi kam lagta hai in aankho ko?

ab unhe paanna hai ik namumkin khwaish shayad,
kaash me badal sakti apni kismat ko!!!!!!!!!!!! @~~~

Priya>>

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ZaraSuniye · 30th October 2002, 06:33 AM

luvpriya jee:

jaane kyuuN aisa hota hai ke ishq main naakaamyaabi zyada paayee jaati hai. aapki shayari mein bhii kuch aisi hi jhalkiyaan hai is liye hum khuda se duaa karenge ke aapne jo khoya hai vo aapko mil jaaye aur gar yeh mumkin nahi to aapko us se bhii bahut zyada mile ke kuch khone ka ehsaas na rahe..

duaayoN ke saath
- Zara Suniye ("Deepa")

shayri12345 · **dear deepa -** 31st October 2002, 06:09 AM

dearest deepa ji,
hamare liye dua karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya, duniya bhi kitni ajeeb hai kyyu ki, jab bhi insaan shochta hai ki duniya me ache log nahi hai, aap jaisa koyi aake us insaan ke khyaal ko badal deta hai

i wish the same n always more for u deepa, i luv ur shayri too,

best wishes
Priya>>

ZaraSuniye · 31st October 2002, 08:22 AM

priya jee:
salaam

aapne hamaare baare mein itni achchi baatein kahi.....uska bahut bahut shukriyaa.....

vaise hum bhii koi itne achche nahi...bas khud in raahoN se guzar chuke hai is liye jab koi aisa milta hai jo ussi kashti sawaar hai to hoslaa dene ka jazbaa ubhar aata hai.

shayri aur hame pasand karne ka shukriyaa

aap se mil kar bahut khushi huii

duaayon ke saath
- Zara Suniye ("Deepa")

shayri12345 · **deepaji -** 31st October 2002, 08:14 PM

dear deepa ji. ej baar phir se aapa reply padh kar nbehad khushi huyi, ji shayad hum sab hi kuch aisi makammo se gujarchuke hai ki,,, khair, zindagi shayad kisi ek shaks ke saath khtaaam to nahi hoti par, kayi baar ummedaon khtam ho jaati hai,
apke liye dher sari duaye hamari taraf se,
aapke kallamo ko chahne wali aapki Priya