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7th July 2014, 11:45 AM
hasti-e-dil me.n go najeeb-e-fazl* mai.n hua
aalim kii mehfilo.n me.n ruu-e-hazl* mai.n hua daanaa.o.n ke jahaan me.n adnaa banaa rahaa aaqil na ho sakaa fareb-e-aql* mai.n hua ummiid nasiim pe itnii ki sehraa.o.n me.n rahaa tishna hi iis tarah daruun-e-naKHl* mai.n hua ulfat agar imaan tha to kya rahii kamii unke jigar se aaj jo be-dakhl mai.n hua daar-us-suruur* ka daar-o-rasan ham-jaliis hua phir bhii kadaa-e-yaar me.n be-shakl mai.n hua tarz-e-nigaah-e-chashm-e-fusoo.n* unke aise the thii tegh haath me.n mere par qatl mai.n hua karne gayaa, ‘Safeer’-e-amal* ban ke achchhe kaam malzoom-e-bewafaaii* ruz-e-adl* mai.n hua ( najeeb-e-fazl = praiseworthy of excellence, virtue, wisdom ruu-e-hazl = face of nonsense fareb-e-aql = deception of reason, rationality daruun-e-naKHl = inside oasis daar-us-suruur = house of intoxication tarz-e-nigaah-e-chashme-fusoo.n = manner of enchanting eyes safeer-e-amal = ambassador of action malzoom-e-bewafaaii = accused (culprit) of inconstancy ruz-e-adl = day of justice ) हस्ती-ए-दिल में गो नजीब-ए-फ़ज़्ल मैं हुआ आलिम की महफ़िलों में रू-ए-हज़्ल मैं हुआ दानाओं के जहान में अदना बना रहा आक़िल न हो सका फरेब-ए-अक़्ल मैं हुआ उम्मीद नसीम पे इतनी कि सेहराओं में रहा तिश्ना ही इस तरह दारुन-ए-नख़्ल मैं हुआ उल्फ़त अगर ईमान था तो क्या रही कमी उनके जिगर से आज जो बेदख़्ल मैं हुआ दार-उस-सुरूर का दार-ओ-रसन हम-जलीस हुआ फिर भी कदा-ए-यार में बे-शक्ल मैं हुआ तर्ज़-ए-निगाह-ए-चश्म-ए-फ़ुसूँ उनके ऐसे थे थी तेग़ हाथ में मेरे पर क़त्ल मैं हुआ करने गया, ‘सफिर’-ए-अमल बन के अच्छे काम मलज़ूम-ए-बेवफाई रूज़-ए-अद्ल मैं हुआ ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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7th July 2014, 12:14 PM
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waahhhh kyaa kahne janaab.... bahot ummdah peshkash ulfat agar imaan tha to kya rahii kamii unke jigar se aaj jo be-dakhl mai.n hua ye sher to bas qayaaamat ka thaa... purasar bahot aalaa.... shaad... |
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7th July 2014, 12:23 PM
Waah waah waah Aadeil sahab !!! Ek takhayyul ka toofaan ho jaise, ek ehsaasaat ka girdaab, ek alfaaz ka sar sabz jazeeraa !!! Kis kis baat par daad di jaaye? Kis kis kaarnaame par mubarakbaad ? Bas lajawaab kar diya aap ne !! Is ghazal ka maqaam bahaut hi buland hai Aadeil sahab !!! Aap ko anginat duaein !!
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7th July 2014, 12:31 PM
waah waah aadeil ji...bahot khub.........................Daad Kabul Kijiye.......................!!!
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7th July 2014, 12:58 PM
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 yun hi hausla bhadhaate rahiye ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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7th July 2014, 01:33 PM
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aap dono ka behad shukr guzaar hoo.n jo aap logo.n ne meri iis adnaa si koshish ko itnaa navaazaa... aapki yeh muhabbat hi hamaari himaayat rahii... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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7th July 2014, 11:57 PM
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wah wah...bohat khoob Aadil sahab. .. sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain Yuhi likhte rahiye Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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8th July 2014, 09:03 AM
Umda ghazal huyi.....aadeil sahib....daad qabool farmaaiye
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8th July 2014, 02:30 PM
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bahot bahot shukriya aapka ........Quote:
aapka behad shukr guzar hoo.n aapko hamaari yeh chhotisi koshish pasand aaye... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th July 2014, 10:51 AM
ulfat agar imaan tha to kya rahii kamii
unke jigar se aaj jo be-dakhl mai.n hua wahh... boht khoob.... aise hi likhtay rahiye, DuaooN k saath, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th July 2014, 12:38 PM
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aapka behad shukguzaar hoo.n, aapko hamaarii yeh adnaa si koshish pasand aayee ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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14th July 2014, 04:11 PM
Bhut umdaa ghazal hui hai Aadil sahab shaandaar paiskash ke liyN daad behado behisaab qubool farmaaiye
aslam Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum |
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