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yeh kadamb ka ped agar maa hota yamuna teerey - 2nd September 2010, 04:30 AM
main waise to kabhi kisi aur ki likhi kavita/gazal/geet apni thread par share nahi karta parantu Krishna Janmotsav ke mauke par aaj main apne ko rok nahi paya aur rah rah kar bas Subhadra Kumari Chauhan ji ki ek kavita yaad aa rahi hai jo bachpan mein kabhi padha karte the aaj ek baar phir gungunane ka dil hai........


yeh kadamb ka ped agar maa hota yamuna teerey
main bhi us par baith kanhaiyya banta dheerey-dheerey


le deti yadi mujhe bansuri tum do paisey wali
kisi tarah neechey ho jati yeh kadamb kee dali


tumhey nahi kuchh kehta par main chupke chupke aata
us neechee dali se amma unchey par chhad jata


wahin baith fir badey mazey se mein bansuri bajata
amma amma keh bansi ke swar mein tumhey bulata


sun meri bansi ko maa tum itni kush ho jati
mujhey dekhney ko tum bahar kaam chhod kar aati


tumko aati dekh bansuri rakh mein chup ho jata
pattoN mein chhip kar fir dheerey se bansuri bajata


bahut bulaney par bhi maa jab nahi utar kar aata
maa, tab maa ka hridya tumhara bahut vikal ho jata



tum aanchal phela kar amma wahin ped ke neechey
ishwar se kuch binti karti baithee aankhey meechey


tumhey dhyan mein lagi dekh mein dheerey dheerey aata
aur tumharey phailey aanchal ke neechey chhip jata


tum ghabra kar aankh kholti par maa khush ho jati
jab apney munney raja ko godi mein hee pati



Shubhadra Kumari Chauhan (1904-1948)

Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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2nd September 2010, 09:52 AM
tumhey nahi kuchh kehta par main chupke chupke aata
us neechee dali se amma unchey par chhad jata


wahin baith fir badey mazey se mein bansuri bajata
amma amma keh bansi ke swar mein tumhey bulata


sun meri bansi ko maa tum itni kush ho jati
mujhey dekhney ko tum bahar kaam chhod kar aati

rula dia yaar ! maa ki yaad aa gai.............. nice creation , mere bachpan ki manpasand kavita........

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2nd September 2010, 10:49 AM
Thanx for sharing Secret ji.......................

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Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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3rd September 2010, 08:05 AM
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rula dia yaar ! maa ki yaad aa gai.............. nice creation , mere bachpan ki manpasand kavita........
Mata-Pita ki yaadein hoti hi khuch khas hain ke acche acchoN ko rula deti hain mujhse puchiye kya mehsus kar raha hoon akela rah kar is viran se ghar mein....

sach kaha apne ye mere bhi bachpan ki manpasand kavita hai
wo isliye kyun ki meri Class mein ek khubsurat si ladki thi jo aksar mujhe ye kavita padhkar sunaya karti thi..
Pata nahi kahan hogi wo..
jahan bhi hogi Ishwar usse aur uske pariwar ko sari khushiyan de..

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3rd September 2010, 12:50 PM
maar daala aap jee ne mujhe .. kitni achhi likhte ho

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3rd September 2010, 05:39 PM
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Thanx for sharing Secret ji.........
aapka is kavita ko pasand karne ke liye shukriya Kavita ji.....

aapka.

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maar daala aap jee ne mujhe .. kitni achhi likhte ho
Pyari Jal Pari ji, ye maine nahi Subhadra Kumari Chauhan ji ne likhi hai...

waise aabhari hoon apka ke aap jal se nikal kar meri thread tak chali aayiN na jane kaise

ab raasta dekh hi liya hai to aati rahiyega.....

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So nice of you for sharing this wonderful post. May God bless you........

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