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hum juda honge .. - 20th May 2003, 06:08 PM

samjhenge mere dil ko to apna bana lenge
ek din isi khyal me hum khud ko rula lenge
intjar ki ye rah to na khatam hoti hai
dar hai ki manjilo ka hum rasta bhula denge

apne parayoo me farak na sikh paye hum
pala ye vaham gair ko apna bana lenge
jis roj asar aayega meri mohabbat ka
us roj apne dil me vo mujhko jagah denge

itna bharosa tha ki hum mahfil se aa gaye
is aas me ki vo hume vapas bula lenge
har sham sochte hain badi sadgi se hum
roothe hai hum to kya .. vo humko mana lenge

rah E wafa me ek mod aa gaya ye bhi
hum imthan E sabar aur de na payenge
lagta hai meharban ab vo jab talak honge
is dil se jan aur jahan se hum juda honge ..

...................


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hi - 20th May 2003, 06:44 PM

hi kshitiz
how r u?
good work dear
bohat khoob likha hay aap ne
keep it up
khan banjara''''


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20th May 2003, 06:49 PM

shukriya banjara bhai
aapko pasand aaya mere liye ahi bahut hai
tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
aapka dost


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good - 20th May 2003, 10:19 PM

Wah khitiz ji,
Kya likhte hai aap.....bahut dil se likha hai aur ye lines to humein bahut hi pasand aa gay ihai...

itna bharosa tha ki hum mahfil se aa gaye
is aas me ki vo hume vapas bula lenge
har sham sochte hain badi sadgi se hum
roothe hai hum to kya .. vo humko mana lenge
aise hi likhte rahiye................
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Very nice. - 21st May 2003, 03:34 AM

Khitz aapne yeh bhi bahaut khoob likha hai. Jaante hai aap jo bhi sher likhte hain naa bas dil ki bajaye seedhe aatmaa ko chu jaate hain, aur yeh bhi chu gaya. Ek bata kahoon dil se kahti hoo sach aap bahaut bahaut accaha likhte hain. Ab to bas aapki nayi post ka besabri se intezaar rahta hai .

Take care of urself and be happy .
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21st May 2003, 12:50 PM

Wah Kshitiz!~

lagta hai meharban ab vo jab talak honge
is dil se jan aur jahan se hum juda honge ..


Wah!.. Wah!... Bohat achha likha hai Kshitiz Waise ye koi nayi baat to nahi hui, aap to humesha achha likhte ho.... Magar consistant ho, ye kabil e tareef hai

Aise hi bakhoobi likhte raho!


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Hi - 21st May 2003, 12:59 PM

waaah kya baat haiN...Khub likha apnne....

lagta hai meharban ab vo jab talak honge
is dil se jan aur jahan se hum juda honge ...

humare dil ki baat ap ke alfzoo main simat kar reha gayii haiN.....tariff ke sath...SwapnN
   
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21st May 2003, 06:26 PM

thx sanjana ji
tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aapko mera likha hua pasand aaya main bahut shukrgujar hu
thx again for writing me .


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21st May 2003, 06:37 PM

rimjhim ji
dekhiye achha likhna alag baat hoti hai magar use padhne ke liye achhi najar aur samjhne ke liye ek achha dil bhi hona chahiye humari juban par shuikriya ke alava aur kya aa sakta hai vaise itni tareef ke badle shukriya alfaj bahut chota ho jata hai fir bhi tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ........ ..
aap mera likha hua pasand karti hai ye meri khushnasibi hai ..
keep writing me ..


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21st May 2003, 06:42 PM

banno ji
shukriya ......... tareef farmane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aap khud bahut achha likhti hai aap jaisi gr8 shayar se tareef sunna bahut achha lagta hai

likhti rahiye ..


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21st May 2003, 06:47 PM

swapnil ji
tareef ke liye sukriya adaa karna chahunga ..
aapko mere alfajo me apne jujbaat najar aaye ...ab main kya kahu .... bhai ho sakta hai aapka dil mere dil se mel khata ho shukriya bhai tareef karne ke liye aapne apna keemti waqt nikala mere liye bahut bahut shukriya
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