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Arrow I am sorry (Please read everyone) - 26th August 2003, 10:50 PM

Hi,

Main kuch confess karna chahti hoo, maine kuch din pehle yahan par ek gazhal likhi thee, shaayad aap log bhul chuke honge, lekin woh gazhal meri nahi thee maine oose credit bhi nahi diya, isiliye main aap sabse maufi maangti hoo. Galti ki hai maine isiliye apolozige karna chahti hoo.

Main nahi janati the eki woh gazhal kiski thee, lekin maine bina kuch kahe post kardi, ooske liye main bahaut sharminda hoo.

maufi mai isiliye maang rahi hoo kyonki maine hamesha se yeh sikha hai ki maufi mangne se koi chota ya bara nahi ho jaata hai, lekin jo maufi maangta hai woh jaroor bada ho jata hai...

Main aainda se dhyan rakhoongi ki aisi galti baar baar naa ho...

Maine kabhi bhi kisi ka credit leke kuch nahi likha hai bas oosi gazhal mai galti ho gayi. Ooske liye i am very sorry from bottom of my heart. Thankyou.

Main yeh sabke saamne isiliye likh rahi hoo taaki sabko pata chala ki "rimjhim" ne koi galti ki hai. Main iss bata ko chupar apni tarefe nahi karana chahti hoo balki aap sabke saamne isse batakar aap sabse maufi maangna chahti thee...

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Thumbs up ... - 26th August 2003, 11:28 PM

dil chura lete gazal kya hei...

U r a nice soul.

hats off


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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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Hi - 27th August 2003, 12:08 AM

Thanx aapne reply diya...

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... - 27th August 2003, 12:10 AM

ohh no rimjhim,

u r great. only the great souls accept mistakes.


God helps u


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
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Hi - 27th August 2003, 12:11 AM

Phir se thanx kahoongi, mera maan na hai acache log woh hote hain jo kisi se maufi maangne par oonhe mauf kar dete hain. Thanx again for replying...

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.. - 27th August 2003, 12:31 AM

Rimjhim jee,

u did nothin soooooo big wrong.

waise unche wo hote hein jo wo karte hein jo dil kahe. mei to bahut adna sa insaan hun. waise ek baat zaroor kahunga. maafi ya sorry sirf apne aap se kehna chahiye. apni soul se maafi mangna acha hei. bcoz if v do anythin wrong. v start receivin punishment. our soul becomes the jughe n starts the punishment. Regret, tension, depression. we fall in our own eyes. the storm comin from inside is bigger thn any storm.

introspeation n correction must be an ongoin process.

Keep it up


लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
   
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Hi - 27th August 2003, 12:36 AM

Dekhiye abhi aapne samjhaya hi itni acachi tarah se ki phir se thanx kahna par raha hai. Main jaanti hoo main itni bari galti nahi ki hai, meri jaisi galti hai almost yahan ke har member ne ek baar bhul se ki to hogi, but phir bhi...

Well anyways aapne meri nayi post padhi friendship ke baare mai??? Padhkar bataiyega kaisi lagi???

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27th August 2003, 04:16 AM

GaltiiyaaN to sabse hotii haiN, magar galtii ko qabuul karne waale bahot kam hote haiN.

Khair chhhoDiiye, aapne maafii maaNg lii aur aapko galtii kaa ehsaas bhii huaa, to bahot hai.
Magar itnaa zaroor kahuuN gaa kii upaaj (originality) ke saath hii log uuNchii uuNchii manziloN meiN paauNchte haiN.

Khush raho,
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Hello - 27th August 2003, 06:15 AM

Rimzim ji,

hum naye hain is site par. lekin aapki shayri hamesha padhi hai, sahi main aap bahaut acacha likhti hai. aapko maufi maangne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai. agar insana galti nahi karega to woh bhagvan nahi ban jayega. aapko sharminda hone ki koi jaroorat. humne aapke sabhi post padhe hain, oosmai logo ke reply bhi padhe sab aapse bahaut pyar karte hain yahan. aapko ek baat aur bataoo, jo aapne kiya hai is site par bahaut se logo ne kiya hai, lekin oonki kabhi yeh himmat nahi hui ki woh maufi maange, aapne maufi maangi isiliye jitni respect hum aapki karti hain aaj oos se jyada karne lage hain. isi tarah likhti rahna hamesha.

aapki ek bahaut bari fan
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ek baat aur humne bhi kuch likah hai please oose padhna, hume abhi aapse bahaut kuch sikha hai.


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Thumbs up Bahut achhe - 27th August 2003, 10:55 AM

Bahaduri ki badi shakleiN suni thi aaj ek dekh bhi li.

Hum aapki bahaduri se prabhavit huve rimjhim ji.


Ey Khuda itna nek kar mere imaan ko
Ke aaina bhi fakr se, apna le is insaan ko.

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Re: I am sorry (Please read everyone) - 27th August 2003, 11:40 AM

rimjhim ji...

aap ki is saafgoi ne hamari nazron mein aap ki izzat aur bhi badha di hai...galti kaun insaan nahin karta ,magar galti par muafi maangna har kisi ke bas ki baat nahin hoti...aap ne bahot acha kiya apna dil saaf kar liya....ham aap ke kalaam par aksar daad dete aaye hai,,,aaj aap ki bhawna ki daad dete hai..


haal-e-dil main ne jo duniyaa ko sunaanaa chaahaa
mujh ko har shaKhs ne dil apanaa dikhaanaa chaaha

likhte rahiye....
take care

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27th August 2003, 01:14 PM

Bravo Rimjhim!

Waqai.. aapne jo diya hai, woh ek misaal hai sab ke liye... ghalatiyan to sab se hoti hain, ehem baat hoti hai apni ghalati pehchaanne, use kubool karna.. aapne jo kiya, woh waqai, bohat bari baat hai..


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27th August 2003, 02:04 PM

Aadha hinduatan chori ke sher padhta hai. Tumne kiya to kya kiya.
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hi - 27th August 2003, 05:51 PM

my dear rimjhim,

ghaltiyaan har ek se hoti hain aur sab se badi baat hai ke aapne is ghalti ko khud kubool kar maufi bhi mangli toh khud ba khud sari batein saaf hogayi.aaj bhi aap jaise log hain yeh janke accha laga warna kaun is duniya mein apni ghalti kubul karta hai.
alwaz keep smiling.har koi apni ghaltiyon se seekhta hai.aapne bhi kuch seekha hai aaj.take care and khush rahiye.apki dost.


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27th August 2003, 06:37 PM

Rimjhim ji
Ghalti to hum se bhi yahi hui hai aur aaap ka yeh padne ke baaad iska khayaaaal aaya ab kya karein?
Lekin sach main ghazlein credit k liye nahin likhti kynki mujhe likhni hi nahin aaatin.Yeh main sirf is liye post kerti hooon k jo mujhe pasand aaaya shayad woh kisi doosre ko bhi pasand aaa aaaye.
Aur do teeen jagah jahan original writer ka naaam nahin pata tha wahan apna hi likh diya.
Hope k humein bhi maaafi mil jaegi usse jis ka credit shayad koi ghalti se humein de de.


~~~~~~~Khushiii~~~~~~~
smile n make others also smile

those sparkling eyes
A 100 watt smile
the majestic walk
the cheerful talk
truly charming personality
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