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25th January 2006, 06:02 PM
I miss u each second of life ,
Without you I cant survive
Life is meaningless without you,I just cant let you go
I have been trying to keep myself busy
But forget u for 1 second is not easy
I tried to go out tried to meet ppl too
But tell you truth no one could give me happiness which you do
I've tried chatting with other guys,
But my memory for you never dies.
My love growes for you after each try
I am nothing without you
If you will leave me I will be forever blue
Like Night without dreams, day without sun rays
Sky without cloud ,sea without waves
I sometimes feel my heart will burst
from wanting you so much
I can't explain in words of how
I long to feel your touch
Whenever you talk with others ,you know I get jealous
I get afraid of that ,get nervous
In nervosness if I behave badly
Plz forgive me and take me in your arms
Coz it is just a matter of your love only
When you say, you love me, I forget all worries and fight
your these words make me feel light
But why did u change like this ,it has been long time
When u called me jaanu ,cuddled me
I want you to behave same way
come back soon ,plz dnt leave me
no one can replace you believe me
I love you very much I really do ,
missing you so much cant live without u
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25th January 2006, 06:07 PM
heyy shradha...its nice...
very good...keep writin
take care
Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...
Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun
I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
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25th January 2006, 06:33 PM
priy shrdh,
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26th January 2006, 06:48 AM
Plz forgive me and take me in your arms
Coz it is just a matter of your love only
maine chaha to yahee chaha mujhe toot ke pyar karo
main tumhree rah dekhoon tum mera intazar karo
wah wah shradhha tarap batatee hai ye poem pyar ke liye
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26th January 2006, 04:57 PM
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heyy shradha...its nice...
very good...keep writin
take care
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thnx kartik for appreciating it .but know not as gud as urs .u read me that a already big thing for me hope u will be coming .
shrdh
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Re: Without you I cant survive -
26th January 2006, 06:51 PM
[QUOTE
I sometimes feel my heart will burst
from wanting you so much
I can't explain in words of how
I long to feel your touch
Whenever you talk with others ,you know I get jealous
I get afraid of that ,get nervous
In nervosness if I behave badly
Plz forgive me and take me in your arms
Coz it is just a matter of your love only
dost bahut achhe!!!!!!!!!!!!
its really like the voice of my heart... or the voice of a heart of all the young ones.....
good going plz keep it up....
lekin kahin na kahin in baaton ka dard aap ko na chhuye hum yahi pray karte hain......
Safar main dhoop tu hogi jo chal sako to chalo.....
Sabhi hain bheed main tum bhi nikal sako to chalo..
Kisi ke waaste raahein kahaan badalti hain...
Tum apne aap ko khud hi badal sako to chalo ......
achha dost hamesha se hi kuchh naya sa padne ki aas mein aap ka dost ... jeet
byeeee till the next visit.......
LOUT JATI HAI DUNIYA GAM HAMARA DEKHKAR,,,,,,,,,
JAISE LOUT JATI HAIN LAHREN KINARA DEKHKAR....
TUM KANDHA NA DENA MERE JANAZE KO..........................
KAHIN FIR ZINDA NA HO JAU TERA SAHARA DEKHKAR.....
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26th January 2006, 09:53 PM
hmmm..
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»~:¤.·ş`·.»WARDA«.·´ş·.¤:~«
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I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life,
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30th January 2006, 05:23 PM
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priy shrdh,
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thnx for coming .lot of words which ur silent has whispered . i understood all .thnx
shrdh
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31st January 2006, 08:46 AM
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Originally posted by harjeet singh
[QUOTE
I sometimes feel my heart will burst
from wanting you so much
I can't explain in words of how
I long to feel your touch
Whenever you talk with others ,you know I get jealous
I get afraid of that ,get nervous
In nervosness if I behave badly
Plz forgive me and take me in your arms
Coz it is just a matter of your love only
dost bahut achhe!!!!!!!!!!!!
its really like the voice of my heart... or the voice of a heart of all the young ones.....
good going plz keep it up....
jeet ji
aapko meri poems mai apne dil ki aawaj lagi achha laga jaankar
aane k liye sukriya
shrdh
lekin kahin na kahin in baaton ka dard aap ko na chhuye hum yahi pray karte hain......
Safar main dhoop tu hogi jo chal sako to chalo.....
Sabhi hain bheed main tum bhi nikal sako to chalo..
Kisi ke waaste raahein kahaan badalti hain...
Tum apne aap ko khud hi badal sako to chalo ......
achha dost hamesha se hi kuchh naya sa padne ki aas mein aap ka dost ... jeet
byeeee till the next visit.......
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31st January 2006, 08:48 AM
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Originally posted by shrdh
I miss u each second of life ,
Without you I cant survive
Life is meaningless without you,I just cant let you go
I have been trying to keep myself busy
But forget u for 1 second is not easy
I tried to go out tried to meet ppl too
But tell you truth no one could give me happiness which you do
I've tried chatting with other guys,
But my memory for you never dies.
My love growes for you after each try
I am nothing without you
If you will leave me I will be forever blue
Like Night without dreams, day without sun rays
Sky without cloud ,sea without waves
I sometimes feel my heart will burst
from wanting you so much
I can't explain in words of how
I long to feel your touch
Whenever you talk with others ,you know I get jealous
I get afraid of that ,get nervous
In nervosness if I behave badly
Plz forgive me and take me in your arms
Coz it is just a matter of your love only
When you say, you love me, I forget all worries and fight
your these words make me feel light
But why did u change like this ,it has been long time
When u called me jaanu ,cuddled me
I want you to behave same way
come back soon ,plz dnt leave me
no one can replace you believe me
I love you very much I really do ,
missing you so much cant live without u
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really a good work in english and tell u the truth i also cannot survive without u
meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi
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31st January 2006, 01:52 PM
dear shraddha...
as alwaz u have done a marvellous job with words...
beautifully expressed dear....keep posting ur thoughts..take care
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
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2nd February 2006, 06:24 AM
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hmmm..
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thnx for coming mukhra
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2nd February 2006, 12:28 PM
I miss u each second of life ,
Without you I cant survive
Life is meaningless without you,I just cant let you go
I have been trying to keep myself busy
But forget u for 1 second is not easy
Hmmm...nice words...!
I tried to go out tried to meet ppl too
But tell you truth no one could give me happiness which you do
I've tried chatting with other guys,
But my memory for you never dies.
My love growes for you after each try
Well written...!
I am nothing without you
If you will leave me I will be forever blue
Like Night without dreams, day without sun rays
Sky without cloud ,sea without waves
I sometimes feel my heart will burst
from wanting you so much
Very beautifully said...!
I can't explain in words of how
I long to feel your touch
Whenever you talk with others ,you know I get jealous
I get afraid of that ,get nervous
In nervosness if I behave badly
Plz forgive me and take me in your arms
Coz it is just a matter of your love only
When you say, you love me, I forget all worries and fight
your these words make me feel light
But why did u change like this ,it has been long time
When u called me jaanu ,cuddled me
I want you to behave same way
come back soon ,plz dnt leave me
no one can replace you believe me
I love you very much I really do ,
missing you so much cant live without u
Hmmmmmmmmmm.......!
Hi Shraddha,
How r u? hope things have been going good at ur end...
As always... exparessed r heart beautifully...Accha laga padhkar... Likhti raho.. TC..
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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3rd February 2006, 06:29 AM
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really a good work in english and tell u the truth i also cannot survive without u
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priy mehul
thnx for ur love tumhe achhi lagi mujhe behad khushi hui
and me too cant live without u
love u my chote se bro
shrdh
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3rd February 2006, 02:15 PM
bahut hi accchi hain,positive hain,keep on writing
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4th February 2006, 04:50 PM
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dear shraddha...
as alwaz u have done a marvellous job with words...
beautifully expressed dear....keep posting ur thoughts..take care
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DEar ,
farhana
glad to see u here after long time .u liked it i am feeling top of the world .thnx for supporting me
take care of ur self
shrdh
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4th February 2006, 06:42 PM
wonderful !!!! just liked each n every line of it.its just showing all ur love n is having a very beautiful flow.lovw to read it.just keep coming the same way.
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5th February 2006, 06:38 PM
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Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
I miss u each second of life ,
Without you I cant survive
Life is meaningless without you,I just cant let you go
I have been trying to keep myself busy
But forget u for 1 second is not easy
Hmmm...nice words...!
I tried to go out tried to meet ppl too
But tell you truth no one could give me happiness which you do
I've tried chatting with other guys,
But my memory for you never dies.
My love growes for you after each try
Well written...!
DEar pulkit
achha laga aapko yaha dekhkar .ur word of appreciation is very important for me .that for supporting me
shrdh
I am nothing without you
If you will leave me I will be forever blue
Like Night without dreams, day without sun rays
Sky without cloud ,sea without waves
I sometimes feel my heart will burst
from wanting you so much
Very beautifully said...!
I can't explain in words of how
I long to feel your touch
Whenever you talk with others ,you know I get jealous
I get afraid of that ,get nervous
In nervosness if I behave badly
Plz forgive me and take me in your arms
Coz it is just a matter of your love only
When you say, you love me, I forget all worries and fight
your these words make me feel light
But why did u change like this ,it has been long time
When u called me jaanu ,cuddled me
I want you to behave same way
come back soon ,plz dnt leave me
no one can replace you believe me
I love you very much I really do ,
missing you so much cant live without u
Hmmmmmmmmmm.......!
Hi Shraddha,
How r u? hope things have been going good at ur end...
As always... exparessed r heart beautifully...Accha laga padhkar... Likhti raho.. TC..
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DEar pulkit
i am doing fine thanx .achha laga aapko yaha dekhkar .ur word of appreciation is very important for me .that for supporting me
shrdh
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6th February 2006, 04:20 AM
shrdj jee
kya kahu ! Wonderfully written , liked it very much !
keep writing ..
You can't buy love, but you can pay heavily for it.
***khozii***
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10th February 2006, 10:42 AM
Hi Shraddha,
Good One !! u r so good with english syari also yaar.
you as an IT professional, i am havng a very habit of getting training on all the new tecnologies, and after going through your shyri's , i do believe that its quite a new and interesting technology, on which i don't have any knowledge, so will u arrange a Training session o this new tech................
ha.............ha.............. Realy Nice Yaar.
Yours,
Rohit Sinha
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11th February 2006, 06:18 PM
really u know the way to express yourself and ur feeling ,really it shows how nice person u r from inside.keep wriitng and let us read it and if possilbe ,we will try to follow it up in our one life
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13th February 2006, 06:44 AM
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bahut hi accchi hain,positive hain,keep on writing
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DEar gaurav
aapko pasand aayi hume bhaut achh alaga
keep coming
shrdh
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13th February 2006, 06:46 AM
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wonderful !!!! just liked each n every line of it.its just showing all ur love n is having a very beautiful flow.lovw to read it.just keep coming the same way.
GHAYAL
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piry lucky
u liked it i am glad to hear that if will get ur support i will try my best to come this way sure
thnx for ur word of appreciation
shrdh
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bohat khoob -
13th February 2006, 02:42 PM
I miss u each second of life ,
Without you I cant survive
Life is meaningless without you,I just cant let you go
I have been trying to keep myself busy
But forget u for 1 second is not easy
wow very well said
i appreciate ur thought
please keep it up
naresh
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16th February 2006, 06:25 AM
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really u know the way to express yourself and ur feeling ,really it shows how nice person u r from inside.keep wriitng and let us read it and if possilbe ,we will try to follow it up in our one life
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DEar raghu
aap aaye bahar aayi ye kavita tak tak itni sunder nahi thi ab aapke aane se ho gayi meri har kavita ko aapka intjaar rahega
aate rahiyega ise sanwarne k liye
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16th February 2006, 06:28 AM
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shrdj jee
kya kahu ! Wonderfully written , liked it very much !
keep writing ..
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khozi ki koz hmmmmm u liked it so now me too like it
thax for coming
shrdh
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18th February 2006, 10:42 AM
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Originally posted by rohit_sinha_it
Hi Shraddha,
Good One !! u r so good with english syari also yaar.
you as an IT professional, i am havng a very habit of getting training on all the new tecnologies, and after going through your shyri's , i do believe that its quite a new and interesting technology, on which i don't have any knowledge, so will u arrange a Training session o this new tech................
ha.............ha.............. Realy Nice Yaar.
Yours,
Rohit Sinha
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hi rohit
thnx for appreciations , u r gud in ur field and am trying to be gud in this field
as u dnt know abt IT what if u dnt know abt this
u will sure learn and write soon
we all r waiting for ur first peom
shrdh
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Re: bohat khoob -
18th February 2006, 10:43 AM
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Originally posted by naresh
I miss u each second of life ,
Without you I cant survive
Life is meaningless without you,I just cant let you go
I have been trying to keep myself busy
But forget u for 1 second is not easy
wow very well said
i appreciate ur thought
please keep it up
naresh
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naresh ji
aapko apni post par aaj pahli baar dekhkar achha laga hope aap isil tarah kabhi kabhi housla afzaee k liye aate rahenge
shrdh
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