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tum mere baare me sochti to hogi.......dard bhari kahani ladki ki zubaani....... -
28th April 2005, 04:01 PM
friends do tell me u r opinion on this please
Tum mere baare me sochti to hogi......... Tum Mere Baare Me Sochti To Hogi Raat Bhar Karwatein Badalti To Hogi Le Kar Anchal Hath Me Aksar Haya Se Dolti Toh Hogi Baloon Ke Gajre Le Kar Kabhi Khushboo Mohabat Ki Sunghti To Hongi Teri Nazre Bhi Mujhe Aksar Idhar Udhar Dhondhti To Hongi Chehre Par Tere Sun Kar Mera Naam Hamesha Muskan Failti To Hogi Kabhi Kabhi Lekar Mera Naam Khwaboon Main Bolti To Hogi Mujhr Dekh Kar Kabhi Kabhi Nazrain Jhuka Kar Utahti To Hogi Meri Tasveer Seene Se Laga Kar Mohabaat Se Itrati To Hogi Payal Pehan Kar Kabhi Dheeme Dheeme Kadam Uthati To Hogi Sawan Ke Mausam Me Bhi To Ghata Si Zulf Lehrati To Hogi Mere Khwaboon Me Bhi Kabhi Deep Wafa Ke Le Kar Aati Tu Hogi Tum Merey Bare Main Sochti To Hogi Raat Bhar Karwatein Badalti To Hogi I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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28th April 2005, 04:31 PM
wah bhai bahut khoob.ab to hume bhi lag raha hai ki hum bhi aapke bare me soochte hain.
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28th April 2005, 06:58 PM
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thanks for the compliments I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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Re: tum mere baare me sochti to hogi.......dard bhari kahani ladki ki zubaani....... -
28th April 2005, 07:37 PM
aaye haye jubin ji!!!
Baloon Ke Gajre Le Kar Kabhi Khushboo Mohabat Ki Sunghti To Hongi mazaa aa gaya  Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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28th April 2005, 08:22 PM
hmmm kya baat hai jubin fantastic post i just liked ur wordz dear tumne tu kam lafzu mein sab baayaan kar diya buhut mushkil hai dost ye karna aur ab mujhe tu usse milna hoga kaun hai janab ju apke bare mein sochti hogi mile tu zaror mil wana apni mohabbat se.
unforgetable simran ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho...... love is seeing yourself in someone's eyes and finding yourself in somebody's heart!!!!!(*-*) (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ ITS STATE OF MIND..... |
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28th April 2005, 08:33 PM
Wah!.......... Aur kya kahe hum... Likhte rehna Jubin ji.
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28th April 2005, 09:19 PM
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hamne pukara aur tum chale aaye thanks for the compliments and thanks for comming I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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28th April 2005, 09:22 PM
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thanks for replying thnaks a lot maine pyar karna chod diya hai thanks again I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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28th April 2005, 09:24 PM
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duaon ke liye shukriya I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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28th April 2005, 11:29 PM
This looks similar, kya tum dono ne saath milkar likkha tha?
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...threadid=34499 |
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29th April 2005, 12:24 AM
jubin
this is just gr88888888888 kuch aise ehsaas hain jo sach bhi hain aur sapna bhi lekin bas yehi kahoongi ki mil jaaye saath aisa koi apne ka humein bhi sonal |
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29th April 2005, 10:06 AM
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saath me to nahi likha...sirf khayalaat milte hai..... thanks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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29th April 2005, 10:08 AM
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sonal ji koi na koi kahi na kahi aapke liye bana zaroor hai to fikr na kare tab tak single life enjoy kare  I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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29th April 2005, 11:20 AM
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bahut khoob .. so nice words |
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29th April 2005, 07:13 PM
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thanks for the compliments........... I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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29th April 2005, 11:09 PM
hi jubin
thanx sochti to main bhi yehi hoon isiliye shayad itni taqleef nahi hoti sonal |
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30th April 2005, 07:51 AM
hi .....h r u ?................
behad pyaara sa likha hai aapne par itne saare sawalo ka jawaab toh keval wo hin de sakti hia jiske baare maine aapne likha hai ,,,,,,,,lekin agar wo sach maine aapse lagaaw rakhti hai toh jaroor wo kutch aisa hin hotahoga jaisa aapne likha hai ....warna kisi ke paasitna samay kaha ki wo itna sab kutch karreeeee....hahaha .........majaak kar rahi thi .................. behad pyaara sa likhahai aapne bye tc  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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30th April 2005, 09:23 AM
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thanks kis liye ? I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 09:28 AM
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i'm fine how are u thanks for the compliments ha ye baat to sach kahi aapne kisi ke paas itna waqt kaha hai ye sab sochne ka kuch arz hai honge tere chahne wale bahut mujhme ek alag baat hai tera milna mere zindagi ke ek nayi shuruwaat hai baatein to bahut karti ho izhaar nahi karti darr sa lagta hai kya tum mujhse pyar nahi karti I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 12:26 PM
Hi Jubin,
Shukriya hume yaha bulane ka. Nahi toh shayad hum itne behtereen kalaam se bilkul anjaan rehte. Hmmm kaafi eitbaar hai apne pyaar pe aapko. Bohot hi kam aisey kalaam parhne ko milte hai jinhe apne pyaar pe itna yaqeen ho. Bohot khoob mere bhai. Bas uhi likhte raho.Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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30th April 2005, 12:31 PM
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thanks for reading and replying hamne to bas unke dil ka haal apne kalam se bayaan kiya thanks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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Re: tum mere baare me sochti to hogi.......dard bhari kahani ladki ki zubaani....... -
30th April 2005, 01:51 PM
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very well written... thanx for inviting me to view this...... keep it up.... bye |
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thanks a lot for comming the pleasure is all mine thanks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 02:41 PM
pyar pyar ..........sabhi ko hai pyaar
sabhi karte hian kisi ka intejaar tum mere koun ho kyou maine karoo tum se pyaar ?????? . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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arre chandsi ji aap to bura maan gaye ham to yu hi sher pesh kar rahe the maaf kijiyega hamara aisa koi iraada nahi tha gustakhi maaf karna I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 02:50 PM
HI JUBIN :
ACHA LIKHA HAI keep it up.... leave, But not our hearts. |
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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 02:53 PM
Un Ke Aik SaWaal Se Yeh Dil PhiR DhaDakNe LaGa
Raakh Ke DheYaR Main Shola Koi BhaDakNe LaGa Na Hai GunjaaYish Koi Ke HonGe woh Kabhi ApNe Dil HumaRa Un ke LiYe PhiR KYuN TaDapNe LaGa? OmeeD Na Thi Ke SehRa Main Yun Chaayenge Baadal Joom Ke Saawan Ab ke wanhaan Bhi Barasne Laga GehRaaYi koi To Hai Us ki Un PYaaRi Si Baaton MaiN Ke KhamoShi Main Us Ki Ab Yeh Dil BehekNe LaGa FaaSloN MaiN Bati Si JaiSe Reh GaYi Hai Yeh ZinDaGi DooRiYoN Se LiPat KaR Dil Aaj PhiR SuLaGne LaGa................................  leave, But not our hearts. |
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30th April 2005, 02:55 PM
hi zubin.. aaj padhi aapkipost. sorry itne se aa nahi paayi... but aapki imagnations bahut pyaari si hain.. agar vo koi bhi hai aur bilkul aise hi karti hai to.. agar yahi uske saamne rakh doge to bahut sharmaayegi vo... ki uski har baat ki khabar hai kisi ko..hehhehe bahut achha likha aapne....
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bahut khob hame pasand aaya aapka andaaz likhte rehna I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 03:01 PM
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mere jazbaat samajhne ke liye shukriya thanks I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 03:03 PM
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Na HoTi ChaaHat DiLoN MaiN To BaDa AaRaM Hota Na KaBhi QaTaL HaSRaToN Ka YuN SaR-E-AaM Hota WaFaaYeN AGaR Hoti ZaRa Si DoStoN Ki DoSti MaiN PYaaR KiSi Ka KaBhi Bhi YuN Na NaaKaaM Hota KaRz UtaRte Rahe UmaR BhaR Un Ki ChaaHat Ka Na Hota EhSaaS-E-Wafa To Yeh Na AnJaaM Hota Na Hoti RuSWaaYi Un Ki AGaR NaaM Un Ka LeNe Se Un Ka Hi NaaM LaBoN Pe BaS SuBah-O-ShaaM Hota........................  leave, But not our hearts. |
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30th April 2005, 03:05 PM
nice words ashger sahab
now this is my try ZARA POOCH MERE GHAR KE DARO-DEEWAR SE KYA THA MERI DEEWANAGI KA AALAM TERI JUDAAI KE BAAD. SACH KEHTE HAIN BOHOT ROYE LIPAT KE DARO-DEEWAR SE TERI BEWAFAAYI KE BAAD. FIKRMAND HOON TERE HAATHON KE PATTHAR MERE ZAKHMON SE RISHTA NIBHAYENGE YA NAHI MERE JISM SE ROOH KI WIDAYI KE BAAD. AGAR TUJHE ROSHNI CHAHIYE THI TO MUJHE SE MAANGLETI MAIN KHUD KO BHI JALAALETA MERE GHAR KO JALAANE KE BAAD. LAGTA HAI JAHANNUMI BANAKAR CHODEGI MUJHE,MERE KABR PAR FAATEHAA PADHNE AAYI HAI MERI ZINDAGI KO JAHANNUM BANANE KE BAAD --------JUBIN JOSHI I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 03:16 PM
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Shabnam, Kabhi Shola, Kabhi Tufaan Hain Aankhein Aankhon Se BaDi Koi Tarazu Nahi Hoti Tulta Hai Bashar Jis Main, Woh Mezaan Hain Aankhein Aankhien Hi Milati Hain Zamane Main Dillon Ko Anjaan Hain Hum Tum Agar Anjaan Hain Aankhein Lab Kuch Bhi Kahien ais Se Haqeeqat Nahi Khulti Insaan Ke Sach Jhoot Ki Pehchaan Hain Aankhein Aankhein Na Jhukein Teri Kisi Ghair Ke Aage Duniya Main BaDi Cheez Meri Jaan! Hain Aankhein.................... Poet: Sahir Ludhiyanvi leave, But not our hearts. |
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wah wah |
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wah wah -
30th April 2005, 03:35 PM
JUBIN
ITNA SIMPEL AUR SWEET LIKHNA MUJHE BHI SEEKHA DP PLZ. |
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30th April 2005, 04:21 PM
na ji na ......aapka sawaal or mera jawaab tha bas ..............na kooi gila na kooi shikwa .............
wo toh kooi or hai jo aake aankho main hia hum wo khush naseeeb toh ho nahi sakte ye khudd pe nahi khuda pe hai bharosa jaanti hoon ki pyaar ho jaata hai kiya nahi jaat humko ho jaaye kisi se pyaar wo lakeer hootho maine dhundha nahi jaata ............ . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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30th April 2005, 06:31 PM
thanks ise share karne k liye
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30th April 2005, 07:17 PM
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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 07:18 PM
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thanks for the compliments I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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30th April 2005, 07:20 PM
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thanks nice words ther I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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