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hi everybody this is my first one i'll continue plz tell how's that - 7th June 2005, 05:37 PM

dil ki choton ne kabhi chain se rahne n diya
jab chali sard hawa maine tujhe yaad kiya
iska rona nahin kyun tumne kiya dil barbaad
iska gam hai badi der me barbaad kiya
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Re: hi everybody this is my first one i'll continue plz tell how's that - 7th June 2005, 05:40 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by sahiltanha
dil ki choton ne kabhi chain se rahne n diya
jab chali sard hawa maine tujhe yaad kiya
iska rona nahin kyun tumne kiya dil barbaad
iska gam hai badi der me barbaad kiya
----- from ghulam ali's gazal
A very good start...Sahil!

Welcome in Shayri.com family and keep sharing...ok?

Take care

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Re: hi everybody this is my first one i'll continue plz tell how's that - 7th June 2005, 07:01 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by sahiltanha
dil ki choton ne kabhi chain se rahne n diya
jab chali sard hawa maine tujhe yaad kiya
iska rona nahin kyun tumne kiya dil barbaad
iska gam hai badi der me barbaad kiya
----- from ghulam ali's gazal
sahil ji,
welcome to this wonderful family of ours. thx for sharing ghulam ali's few lines with us. gr8 start n wud love to read ur thoughts too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



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hi - 7th June 2005, 08:28 PM

welcome my dear....shayri.com ki family me tumahra swagat hai

bahut acha sher pesh kiya hai aapne

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8th June 2005, 09:04 AM

Hi Sahil Ji,

A very warm n hearty welcome 2 u 2 this family of ours.

A very beautiful start indeed. Hope 2 c more from u. Take care n keep posting.


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