hi everybody this is my first one i'll continue plz tell how's that -
7th June 2005, 05:37 PM
dil ki choton ne kabhi chain se rahne n diya
jab chali sard hawa maine tujhe yaad kiya
iska rona nahin kyun tumne kiya dil barbaad
iska gam hai badi der me barbaad kiya
----- from ghulam ali's gazal
Re: hi everybody this is my first one i'll continue plz tell how's that -
7th June 2005, 05:40 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by sahiltanha dil ki choton ne kabhi chain se rahne n diya
jab chali sard hawa maine tujhe yaad kiya
iska rona nahin kyun tumne kiya dil barbaad
iska gam hai badi der me barbaad kiya
----- from ghulam ali's gazal
A very good start...Sahil!
Welcome in Shayri.com family and keep sharing...ok?
Take care
Amanush...
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
Re: hi everybody this is my first one i'll continue plz tell how's that -
7th June 2005, 07:01 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by sahiltanha dil ki choton ne kabhi chain se rahne n diya
jab chali sard hawa maine tujhe yaad kiya
iska rona nahin kyun tumne kiya dil barbaad
iska gam hai badi der me barbaad kiya
----- from ghulam ali's gazal
sahil ji,
welcome to this wonderful family of ours. thx for sharing ghulam ali's few lines with us. gr8 start n wud love to read ur thoughts too. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!
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