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15th March 2006, 09:28 PM
tuu nahin mera yeh zeest tau hai meri...teri chahat mein jeena hai khushi meri...tere hothon pe nahi tau na sahi, tere khayaalon mein hai maujood awaaragi meri..
Dosto... Bus yoonhi se khayaal...phir yeh adna koshish...aapki raye ki muntazir rahoongi... Meri raah se tum jo guzar gaye teri chaah se hum sanwar gaye teri ik nigaah pe nisaar hum sau sau haddon se guzar gaye mere jism-o-jaan mehak gaye jo tum huye mere habeeb niyat bhi ho gayi be-imaan bahon mein tum jo bikhar gaye shamma sa hum jalte rahe jaanaa yoonhi raatbhar aariz-o-lab se rang chura, ho tum bhi bekhabar gaye shokh meri har adaa pe tum machal machal gaye tere haath mein kase thhe jo, chhoot wo sab sabar gaye bahon ke tere daayre mile bhi agar tau mukhtsar qayenaat daaman mein daal, wo bhi lootkar gaye teri khushi se mil gaye, teri khushi se bichhad gaye dariya-e-ulfat mein garq ho hum dhuundne gauhar gaye na ishq ki thee khata na bandagi hi thee gunaah mere zamin-O-aasmaan kyun 'paras' ruuthkar gaye aariz = cheeks sabar = sabr, self control garq = drown gauhar = pearls (gains in love) gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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15th March 2006, 10:06 PM
meri priy paras,
kya kahu ... aisa kyun hota hai ... kuch lamhe ... kabhi bhi daaman se alag nahi ho paate ... kyun jo kabhi bahao mai bikhar sa gaya tha ... wahi thham kyun nahi gaya ... kyun dard oobhar hi jaata hai .. kyun? ..............  |
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16th March 2006, 06:40 AM
khoob soorat hai
aur sab se khoobsoorat hai ye Meri raah se tum jo guzar gaye teri chaah se hum sanwar gaye teri ik nigaah pe nisaar hum sau sau haddon se guzar gaye Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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16th March 2006, 07:26 AM
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dard ko khoobsurti se pesh karna bhi ik ada hai aapkii yu to puri shayri pasand aaayi... Meri raah se tum jo guzar gaye teri chaah se hum sanwar gaye teri ik nigaah pe nisaar hum sau sau haddon se guzar gaye this one was jus aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!! teri chah se hum sanwar gaye..........chahat bhi ajeeb hoti hai na di.........kya kya karwa deti hai.... teri ik nigah pe nisaaar hum...sach kaha hai jis se pyar kartey hai uski ek pyar bhari nazar paane ke liye...tarasna....aur mil jaane par.......  hum sau hadoon se gujar gaye....sahi kaha aapne...insaan thore se pyar ka bhuka hota hai, thora pyar milne par, sab had paarr kar leta hai... teri khushi se mil gaye, teri khushi se bichhad gaye aahh! di people come when they want to and go when they want to...they dont think what happens to us before they came and after they went...... unki khushi thi to mil liye aur unki khushi thi....to juda bhi ho gaye.......sab unki khatir aur hamari?? pyaar cheez hi aisi hai... pyar aur dard ka........ehsaas urs Prriya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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16th March 2006, 10:59 AM
meri behna
bohat behtreen aur supurdgi aur chahat ke bharpoor izhaar ka khoobsurat majmuaa hai tumhari yeh ghazel. shiddat aur mohabbat mein jaanta hoon meri behan mein koot koot ker bhari hai, aur is ke izhaar bhi us ne bohat zabardast tarique se kiyaa hai. meri dua hai ke meri behan ko voh sab haasil ho jis ki voh talabgaar hai. God bless you. musharrafhusain |
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16th March 2006, 11:55 AM
Guddo Didi...
ehsaas tab jyada ravaaN ho jaate haiN.. jab unke risne ki jagah unhe mil jati hai .,.. aur gar woh rasta shayri ki kalam ka ho to uska azdaza laga mushkil hai ... aapki shaan main kuch bhi kehna diye ko roshani dikhane jaisa hai .. par ye zaroor kahuNga ... ki khud se ye shikayat .. khud se hi khilwad .. aur khud se hi bayani ... bezod aapki likhawat .. apna khayal rakhte hue yuN hi likhti rahiye ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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16th March 2006, 02:09 PM
MY everluvly Guru Ji, Pae Lagu,
bahon ke tere daayre mile bhi agar tau mukhtsar qayenaat daaman mein daal, wo bhi lootkar gaye teri khushi se mil gaye, teri khushi se bichhad gaye dariya-e-ulfat mein garq ho hum dhuundne gauhar gaye These words with emotions so rare just kept on ringin in d heart. This work so different from all u're others yet it has so much of u're trademark written on it. Really very exquisite n an absolute heart stealer. Do keep blessing us with more so. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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16th March 2006, 06:23 PM
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aapki ye rachna sach mai pyar ki intha si lagi bhaut hi khwhahisho ko aapne roop diya hai aur bahut sunder sabdon ko chuna hai aapne urdu aapse seekh rahi hoon bhaut achha laga padhkar shrdh 
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16th March 2006, 07:26 PM
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kaisi hain aap.... aapke kalaam ko padhne ki pyaas kabhi khatm nahi hoti hai kyunki unme jo ehsaas hote hain woh sach lajawaab hote hain.. Meri raah se tum jo guzar gaye teri chaah se hum sanwar gaye teri ik nigaah pe nisaar hum sau sau haddon se guzar gaye yeh sher sach me dil ko choo gaya... bahaut khoobsurti se aapne apni soch ko alfaaz diye hain. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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16th March 2006, 11:31 PM
hi
bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne ........................................... aapki iss nazm ko kya padha ki aapki bhawnaon mein beh gaye iss qadar aai huemin ye pasand ki issi ko padhte reh gaye choo liya issne hamare dil ko iss tarah ki ..... hum to kwaabo mein hi kho gaye ..... .............. bahut pasand aai yun hi likhte rahiye Aapka apna Cute sa Ashu Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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Re: Mere zamin-O-aasmaan kyun ruuthkar gaye.... -
17th March 2006, 06:01 PM
Bohat khoobsurat
Paras ji aaj phir aapko padhkar bohat acha laga...bohat hi umda likhti hai aap hamesha hi... shurkiya itni behtarin rachna likhne aur hum sabhi k saath share karne k liye take care apka Diggaj Quote:
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17th March 2006, 07:01 PM
Meri raah se tum jo guzar gaye teri chaah se hum sanwar gaye
teri ik nigaah pe nisaar hum sau sau haddon se guzar gaye mere jism-o-jaan mehak gaye jo tum huye mere habeeb niyat bhi ho gayi be-imaan bahon mein tum jo bikhar gaye waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh.... kya baat hai guruji... shamma sa hum jalte rahe jaanaa yoonhi raatbhar aariz-o-lab se rang chura, ho tum bhi bekhabar gaye shokh meri har adaa pe tum machal machal gaye tere haath mein kase thhe jo, chhoot wo sab sabar gaye uffff....kya adaa hai shaayraa ki  bahon ke tere daayre mile bhi agar tau mukhtsar qayenaat daaman mein daal, wo bhi lootkar gaye teri khushi se mil gaye, teri khushi se bichhad gaye dariya-e-ulfat mein garq ho hum dhuundne gauhar gaye beautifull...these shers to me are the best.... na ishq ki thee khata na bandagi hi thee gunaah mere zamin-O-aasmaan kyun 'paras' ruuthkar gaye Waaaaaaaaaaahhh...! Dearest Guruji, Bahut hi khoobsurat aashaar hain... Kya khoobsurati se har ek baat kahi hai... U know what i liked the best about it... shuruaat ke sheron me ek josh thha....pyaar ka....ek alag ki junoon sa thha.... aur baad ke sheron me tadap ke saath ek stthirta...which ended in a silence.... so the way u brought the emotions from that level to this was just amazing.... bass... isi tarah likhti raho... meri daad to tumhaare saath hi hai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2006, 08:23 PM
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Waqt tham nahin sakta...lekin hum na jaane kyun waqt se kuch seekh nahin paate...jab bhi mayoosi chaaye tau usi waqt ke guzre lamhon ke nishaan dhundne nikal padhte hain ....na jaane kyun gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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17th March 2006, 08:24 PM
Anil jee...
Aapko mera likha pasand aaya...tau mera likhna bhi maaniye safal ho gaya...shukriya, yoonhi aate rahiye... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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17th March 2006, 08:28 PM
Priya....
Kya baat hai! tum tau laga dil ke kisi kone mein baithi mere kalaam ke ehsaason ko kured kured kar baahar la rahi ho...itni shiddat se padhti ho tum mujhe ki dil ko bahut sukoon milta hai tumhare replies par...tum zaroor apni raaye pesh kiya karo...achha lagta hai...aur khush raho gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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17th March 2006, 08:35 PM
Mere Pyaare Bhayyia...
Ehsaason ko lafzon mein daalna bhi kya cheez hai na? aur phir gar wo sabki samajh mein aa jaaye tau kya baat hai? mere paas waqt bhi hai, tanhaayi bhi aur mere ehsaas bhi...tau likhne par sukoon bhi milta hai ...waqt bhi guzar jaata hai... shayri tau meri zindagi ka sarmaya hai....aap sabse hum kalaam hone ka zariya bhi... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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17th March 2006, 10:57 PM
teri khushi se mil gaye, teri khushi se bichhad gaye
dariya-e-ulfat mein garq ho hum dhuundne gauhar gaye Dear Paras Ji Ek aur aapka khoobsurat qalam.....iss time mughey urdu samghney mein dikat nahin huye ...perfect and beautiful words....mere daad kabul kijeyega.Take care |
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18th March 2006, 11:06 AM
Paras Jiii ....
Khoobsuart Lazfo Se AapNe QalaaM SawaRa Hai.... PaD Kar BaDa SakooN Mila ... ..... Sir Jhuka Ke TaheDil Se TaReeF ... KarTa Hu QabooL KaRe .... AaP Ka DosT.. AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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19th March 2006, 12:16 AM
paras,
just another feather in ur cap!!! i likd this sher very muchh bahon ke tere daayre mile bhi agar tau mukhtsar qayenaat daaman mein daal, wo bhi lootkar gaye ..nice keep those lovely words n thotts flowing.... marane kii duaaye.n kyuu.N maa.Nguu.N jiine kii tamaannaa kaun kare ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare jo aag lagaaii thii tum ne us ko to bujhaayaa ashko.n ne jo ashko.n ke bha.Dakaaii hai us aag ko Tha.nDaa kaun kare jab kashtii saabit-o-saalib thii, saahil kii tamannaa kisako thii ab aisii shikastaa kashtii me.n saahil kii tamannaa kaun kare duniyaa ne hame.n chho.Daa ai dil, ham chho.D na de kyo.n duniyaa ko duniyaa ko samajh kar baiThe hai.n ab duniyaa duniyaa kaun kare -Moen Ahsan Jazbi |
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20th March 2006, 08:22 AM
Priye Kunal....
tumhari tau daad bhi pana bade bhagye ki baat hai...aur uspe aisee shayraana daad! Hmmmn my eversosweet Salim... Tum aate nahin ab...kya bahut masruuf ho gaye ho...mere liye waqt nikalne ke liye shukriya Shukriya ek baar phir...pyaari Shradhaa...aati rehna gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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20th March 2006, 08:28 AM
Farhana dear...
Yeh tau aap sabki inayat hai...ki mere kalaamon ko aap sabke dil mein jagah milti hai... khuubsurat nazar ka kamal hai tumhari... Cute se Ashu... I like your cute sa Avataar...jaa rahe ho kahin? Hot date haan.... Diggaj... Zeh naseeb! Aap sab ka ehsaan hai ki waqt nikaal kar mujhe padhte ho... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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20th March 2006, 08:36 AM
Priye Pulkit...
Ab is se badhkar tareef kya hogi jo koyi iss tarah se mere kalaam ke saath saath emotionally attach ho har utar chadaav ko feel kare...only you Pulkit, my own Buddy! Priye Sukanya ji... lol...dekha aapka hukum thaa so taamiir kiya... Arre Sharad... Kaise ho Bhai...Arsa hua tumse humkalaam huye...meri post pe aane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya That is so sweet Deep... Feather in my cap!!! Thanks! gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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