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17th July 2012, 02:06 PM
Maa ki kadar toh jaani sabne
biwi ki kadar na pehchaani
jo aayi sabkuch tyaag kar
Apno se ho kar anjaani
Naam badal pehchaan ko khokar kar
jis ne apnaai gumnaami
tan man dhan nyochavar kar
Bani woh ghar ki naukrani
maat pita kee, seva kar
farz nibhate nahi ki aanakani
phir bhi apno ke beech, rahi woh
jaise ho koi anjaani
bacche bhi paale sab seh kar
Khud par li sab pareshaani
Aane na diya shikan ko, mukh par
naa apni vyatha bakhaani
Antarman dukhta raha uska
Sunkar sabki kadwi baani
nahi le sakti 'Maa' ki jagah woh
itna woh bhi maani
gar thoda so pyaar karo tum
has degi woh sayani
bol izzat ke chalke jo mukh se
hai khush itne mein woh deewani
AAj bayaan hai haal usi ka
jisko bana laaye the zindgani
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18th July 2012, 09:26 AM
wah ji wah bahot bahot dad deta hu..Awesom...i like it very much....kon se sabdo me bya karu aap ka bahot bahot sukriya nanhi pari ji....
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19th July 2012, 10:04 AM
Shukriya vajshi ji, acha laga aapne pada aur saraha.
Masti.
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20th July 2012, 03:27 PM
sarika jee ...
kaisi haiN aap ?
bahut achha laga itne dinoN baad aapko yahaaN dekh ke...
par lagta hai life meiN kuch khat pat chal rahi hai .
koi baat nahi ye to hota hai sabke saath .
hume life ka ye part bhi enjoy karna chaahiye...
khair
bahut hi achha likha hai
meri taraf se daad haazir hai
apna khyaal rakhiye
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4th September 2012, 09:42 PM
hi kshitiz
ghabraiye nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai ye mere baare mein nahi tha. aap bataaiye kaise hain?
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5th September 2012, 04:56 PM
bahut khooooooobbbbb jiiiiiiiiii
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19th September 2012, 02:59 PM
chaliye ye jaan ke to bahut khushi hui ki aap apne takkhallus ki hi tarah masti meiN haiN .. aur bataiye humaare annu bhai ke kya haal chaal haiN unhe bhi le ke aaiye iss buzm meiN waapis ..puraane dostoN ko apne beech paa ke khushi hoti haiN ..
abhi meri pulkit se baat ho rahi thi to hum log yehi baat kar rahe the ki abki paras jee ke india aane pe bhale ek choti hi sahi par mulakaat rakkhi jaaye ..
aapka kya mashwara hai iss baare meiN ???
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19th September 2012, 03:38 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by masti
Maa ki kadar toh jaani sabne
biwi ki kadar na pehchaani
jo aayi sabkuch tyaag kar
Apno se ho kar anjaani
Naam badal pehchaan ko khokar kar
jis ne apnaai gumnaami
tan man dhan nyochavar kar
Bani woh ghar ki naukrani
maat pita kee, seva kar
farz nibhate nahi ki aanakani
phir bhi apno ke beech, rahi woh
jaise ho koi anjaani
bacche bhi paale sab seh kar
Khud par li sab pareshaani
Aane na diya shikan ko, mukh par
naa apni vyatha bakhaani
Antarman dukhta raha uska
Sunkar sabki kadwi baani
nahi le sakti 'Maa' ki jagah woh
itna woh bhi maani
gar thoda so pyaar karo tum
has degi woh sayani
bol izzat ke chalke jo mukh se
hai khush itne mein woh deewani
AAj bayaan hai haal usi ka
jisko bana laaye the zindgani
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hmmm................ bada khatarnaak matlaa hai............ aur masalaa bhi
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9th October 2012, 11:31 AM
Very nice lines for women....
Loved it. It just describes the whole life of a woman.
Thanks for sharing this.
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4th June 2014, 11:13 AM
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Very nice lines for women....
Loved it. It just describes the whole life of a woman.
Thanks for sharing this.
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Sorry princy ji
Bohut late reply kar rahi hun, kyunki bohut hi kam aati hun yahan shayri ki mehfil mein.
Bohut shukriya apka ki apko yeh pasand aayi.
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4th June 2014, 11:59 AM
Bohat khoob Masti ji...........
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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4th June 2014, 02:46 PM
bahot hi khubsurat kavita hai, Mastiji......
bas yuN aate rahiye aur likhte rahiye
Adil
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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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4th June 2014, 08:09 PM
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Bohat khoob Masti ji...........
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bahot hi khubsurat kavita hai, Mastiji......
bas yuN aate rahiye aur likhte rahiye
Adil
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5th June 2014, 12:10 PM
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Originally Posted by masti
Maa ki kadar toh jaani sabne
biwi ki kadar na pehchaani
jo aayi sabkuch tyaag kar
Apno se ho kar anjaani
Naam badal pehchaan ko khokar kar
jis ne apnaai gumnaami
tan man dhan nyochavar kar
Bani woh ghar ki naukrani
maat pita kee, seva kar
farz nibhate nahi ki aanakani
phir bhi apno ke beech, rahi woh
jaise ho koi anjaani
bacche bhi paale sab seh kar
Khud par li sab pareshaani
Aane na diya shikan ko, mukh par
naa apni vyatha bakhaani
Antarman dukhta raha uska
Sunkar sabki kadwi baani
nahi le sakti 'Maa' ki jagah woh
itna woh bhi maani
gar thoda so pyaar karo tum
has degi woh sayani
bol izzat ke chalke jo mukh se
hai khush itne mein woh deewani
AAj bayaan hai haal usi ka
jisko bana laaye the zindgani
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mastii saahiba aadaab.... aapki creation waaqai kaabile tareef hai...
personally speaking mujhe aapki ye kavitaa bahot bahot pasand aaye... but as u know this is quite a complicated and controversial issue... not being sorted out till now from the beginning... so ektarfaa ho kar main koi bayaan nahi de saktaa....
aapka POV bhii sahi hai ek tarah se agar dekhaa jaae to...
conclusively chaahe Bivi ho yaa Maa ho hain to dono naarii... aur naarii ke binaa duniyaa hai bechhaarii... so meraa salaam sabhii naariyon ko...
naari naari... naari minge nelu...
keep writing
Shaad...
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5th June 2014, 01:37 PM
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mastii saahiba aadaab.... aapki creation waaqai kaabile tareef hai...
personally speaking mujhe aapki ye kavitaa bahot bahot pasand aaye... but as u know this is quite a complicated and controversial issue... not being sorted out till now from the beginning... so ektarfaa ho kar main koi bayaan nahi de saktaa....
aapka POV bhii sahi hai ek tarah se agar dekhaa jaae to...
conclusively chaahe Bivi ho yaa Maa ho hain to dono naarii... aur naarii ke binaa duniyaa hai bechhaarii... so meraa salaam sabhii naariyon ko...
naari naari... naari minge nelu...
keep writing
Shaad...
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Shukriya Shaad ji
"nahi le sakti 'Maa' ki jagah woh
itna woh bhi maani"
sach hai maa ki jagah koi nahi le sakta, main khud bhi do chote bachon ki maa hu aur ab jaanti hu ki bache bade karna koi khel nahi hai.
Actually yeh likhne ka karan tha woh saare jiokes jo aksar facebook aur what's app par ghoomate rehte hain jisme maa aur biwi ko compare karke yeh natija nikalte hain ki biwi ki koi zaruurat nahi hai.aur phir aise wahiyaat jumlon aur chutkalon par dheron likes !
Mera manna yeh hai ki har rishte ki apni ahmiyat hai, rishton ka comparison karna galat hai. jaise koi aurat yeh nahi bata sakti ki woh apne bachon se zaada pyaar karti hai ya apne pati se ya phir apne pita se waise he admi se bhi yeh umeed rakhna galat hai.
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5th June 2014, 01:42 PM
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chaliye ye jaan ke to bahut khushi hui ki aap apne takkhallus ki hi tarah masti meiN haiN .. aur bataiye humaare annu bhai ke kya haal chaal haiN unhe bhi le ke aaiye iss buzm meiN waapis ..puraane dostoN ko apne beech paa ke khushi hoti haiN ..
abhi meri pulkit se baat ho rahi thi to hum log yehi baat kar rahe the ki abki paras jee ke india aane pe bhale ek choti hi sahi par mulakaat rakkhi jaaye ..
aapka kya mashwara hai iss baare meiN ???
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Sorry kshitiz
bohut hi late hun reply karne mein, maine aaj hi padaa, par agar aisa hua toh mazaa aa jayega, sab naye puraane saathi ek dusre ko mil payenge aur dekh payenge.
Aur iss baar hotel ki bhi zaroorat nahi, humara ghar hai na, jahan aap sab ka swagat hai.
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wah ji wah bahot bahot dad deta hu..Awesom...i like it very much....kon se sabdo me bya karu aap ka bahot bahot sukriya nanhi pari ji....
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Shukriya Vajshi ji, Itna sarahne aur housla afjaayi ke liye.
Deri ke liye maafi chahungi
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27th June 2014, 10:29 AM
sarika jee...bahut hee sundar ehsaas hain.,...bs sbka apna apna view hota hai.......so quite controversial topic..
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चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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27th June 2014, 11:26 AM
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Maa ki kadar toh jaani sabne
biwi ki kadar na pehchaani
jo aayi sabkuch tyaag kar
Apno se ho kar anjaani
Naam badal pehchaan ko khokar kar
jis ne apnaai gumnaami
tan man dhan nyochavar kar
Bani woh ghar ki naukrani
maat pita kee, seva kar
farz nibhate nahi ki aanakani
phir bhi apno ke beech, rahi woh
jaise ho koi anjaani
bacche bhi paale sab seh kar
Khud par li sab pareshaani
Aane na diya shikan ko, mukh par
naa apni vyatha bakhaani
Antarman dukhta raha uska
Sunkar sabki kadwi baani
nahi le sakti 'Maa' ki jagah woh
itna woh bhi maani
gar thoda so pyaar karo tum
has degi woh sayani
bol izzat ke chalke jo mukh se
hai khush itne mein woh deewani
AAj bayaan hai haal usi ka
jisko bana laaye the zindgani
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nice sharing................thanks
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Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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27th June 2014, 12:50 PM
Khooob HAi Masti Ji..................
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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28th June 2014, 10:34 PM
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Maa ki kadar toh jaani sabne
biwi ki kadar na pehchaani
jo aayi sabkuch tyaag kar
Apno se ho kar anjaani
Naam badal pehchaan ko khokar kar
jis ne apnaai gumnaami
tan man dhan nyochavar kar
Bani woh ghar ki naukrani
maat pita kee, seva kar
farz nibhate nahi ki aanakani
phir bhi apno ke beech, rahi woh
jaise ho koi anjaani
bacche bhi paale sab seh kar
Khud par li sab pareshaani
Aane na diya shikan ko, mukh par
naa apni vyatha bakhaani
Antarman dukhta raha uska
Sunkar sabki kadwi baani
nahi le sakti 'Maa' ki jagah woh
itna woh bhi maani
gar thoda so pyaar karo tum
has degi woh sayani
bol izzat ke chalke jo mukh se
hai khush itne mein woh deewani
AAj bayaan hai haal usi ka
jisko bana laaye the zindgani
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Sarika ji waah kya baat hai.....
meri zatti raye k mutabiq aapki peskash natural hai, jo ki buniyadi ahsaas shaadi ke baad ek ladkii meiN aate haiN ....aap apnay hi rhythm per kehtay haiN aur apnay misroN ki rawani ko tarannum se kaha hai aapne.....achhi kalam ki mallika haiN aap....daad
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sarika jee...bahut hee sundar ehsaas hain.,...bs sbka apna apna view hota hai.......so quite controversial topic..
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I understand Aru ji .......................Shukriya isey padne ke liye.
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nice sharing................thanks
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Shukriya Pari ji.............................
Apki Dost
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Khooob HAi Masti Ji..................
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Sarika ji waah kya baat hai.....
meri zatti raye k mutabiq aapki peskash natural hai, jo ki buniyadi ahsaas shaadi ke baad ek ladkii meiN aate haiN ....aap apnay hi rhythm per kehtay haiN aur apnay misroN ki rawani ko tarannum se kaha hai aapne.....achhi kalam ki mallika haiN aap....daad
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Shukriya Harsh ji,
Apko pasand aayi, mera din ban gaya.............
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2nd August 2014, 04:01 PM
wah wah wah....
kya khoob kaha aapne
bohut bohutb accha laga ise padh kar
kavita ho to aisi ho warna na ho.
Mubarak ho
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wah wah wah....
kya khoob kaha aapne
bohut bohutb accha laga ise padh kar
kavita ho to aisi ho warna na ho.
Mubarak ho
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Maafi....itne der se reply ke liye..darasal iss par nazar aaj hi padi.
Bohut bohut shukriya itni tareef ka.
Yu hi aate rahiyege.
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26th February 2016, 07:58 PM
bahut achchi kavita...aur main bhi yahii manti hun..har rishte ki apni ahmiyat hai.....mazaak udana aur jokes banana alag baat hai..par jeevan sathi k bagair zindgi bemani hoti hai.......
Likhti raho......
Luv
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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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