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Waqt Ke Aage Majboor Ho Gaye
Hum Kya The Or Kya Ho Gaye
Nibhaai Thi Jo Wafa Hamne Kabhi
Woh Khwaab Saare Kaha Kho Gaye
Na Jaane Kaha ley Jaaye Ye Raaste
NakaamiyoN Pe Hum Apni Ro Gaye
Kaanto Si Chubti Hai Dil Ki Kasak
Ashko Se Apni Unhe Dho Gaye
Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kya Jaage Or Kya So Gaye
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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24th September 2010, 06:43 PM
radhika jee
radhe radhe
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Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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24th September 2010, 06:47 PM
Kaanto Si Chubti Hai Dil Ki Kasak
Ashko Se Apni Unhe Dho Gaye
Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kya Jaage Or Kya So Gaye
ye lines bhaut acchi lageen .....aise likhtirahiye khush rahiye...daad kubool kijiyega
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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24th September 2010, 06:53 PM
bahut khoob likha hai is baar radhika ji aapne
yu to sab acche hai magar maqta bahut khaas laga...
daad haazir hai
regards
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25th September 2010, 04:19 AM
Yaha aap ka ek behtareeN kalaam hai Radhika ji...! The structure is awesome...! Very good progress...!
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Hum Kya The Or Kya Ho Gaye
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Kya Jaage Or Kya So Gaye
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Matlaa aur maqtaa khaas pasand heiN...!
Keep it up and take care, ok...?
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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26th September 2010, 10:29 AM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Waqt Ke Aage Majboor Ho Gaye
Hum Kya The Or Kya Ho Gaye
Nibhaai Thi Jo Wafa Hamne Kabhi
Woh Khwaab Saare Kaha Kho Gaye
Na Jaane Kaha ley Jaaye Ye Raaste
NakaamiyoN Pe Hum Apni Ro Gaye
Kaanto Si Chubti Hai Dil Ki Kasak
Ashko Se Apni Unhe Dho Gaye
Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kya Jaage Or Kya So Gaye
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Radhika ji adaab...kya baat hai...!!1.kitne saral tareeke se aap apne bhaav ko keh gaye...sarahneeiye kaarya hai....merii jaanib se dhairoN daad apke liye
Harash
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27th September 2010, 12:56 PM
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radhika jee
radhe radhe
achha likha hai ye sher pasand aaya dil se daad
Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
duaon ke saath
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya.......................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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28th September 2010, 07:17 AM
Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kya Jaage Or Kya So Gaye
Very Impressive Indeed ..... Radhika Ji !
bahut khoob likha iss baar aapne ... sabhi ashaar ka fikR o khayal umdaa raha ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ....
duaaon ke saath .....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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28th September 2010, 08:19 AM
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29th September 2010, 02:20 PM
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Kaanto Si Chubti Hai Dil Ki Kasak
Ashko Se Apni Unhe Dho Gaye
Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kya Jaage Or Kya So Gaye
ye lines bhaut acchi lageen .....aise likhtirahiye khush rahiye...daad kubool kijiyega
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ji thanks for appreciate.......................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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30th September 2010, 10:26 AM
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bahut khoob likha hai is baar radhika ji aapne
yu to sab acche hai magar maqta bahut khaas laga...
daad haazir hai
regards
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ji thanks for appreciate.............................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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1st October 2010, 01:08 PM
ji thanks a lot....................
Radhika
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5th October 2010, 09:59 AM
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Radhika ji adaab...kya baat hai...!!1.kitne saral tareeke se aap apne bhaav ko keh gaye...sarahneeiye kaarya hai....merii jaanib se dhairoN daad apke liye
Harash
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ji thanks for appreciate.............................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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5th October 2010, 06:42 PM
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Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kya Jaage Or Kya So Gaye
Very Impressive Indeed ..... Radhika Ji !
bahut khoob likha iss baar aapne ... sabhi ashaar ka fikR o khayal umdaa raha ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ....
duaaon ke saath .....
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Ji .. thanks for appreciate...................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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6th October 2010, 12:45 AM
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Waqt Ke Aage Majboor Ho Gaye
Hum Kya The Or Kya Ho Gaye
Nibhaai Thi Jo Wafa Hamne Kabhi
Woh Khwaab Saare Kaha Kho Gaye
Na Jaane Kaha ley Jaaye Ye Raaste
NakaamiyoN Pe Hum Apni Ro Gaye
Kaanto Si Chubti Hai Dil Ki Kasak
Ashko Se Apni Unhe Dho Gaye
Saari Duniya'N Se Bewafaai Ki Humne
Or Teri Wafaa Ke Talabgaar Ho Gaye
Dekh Nasiib Me Ab Apne "Radhika"
Kya Jaage Or Kya So Gaye
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aadaab
arabi zabaan ki kahaawathai ki baat to wahi hai jo mukhracar ho dil ko lagtee ho itnee taweel na ho ki ki uktaahat sawaar ho jaye
mujhe aisaa lagaa ki aap ne is micaal ko amali jaamah pahnaa ke ghazal ka roopde diyaa hai har sher se kaatib e tahreer ke kamaale fan ki jaanib ishaarah kartaa hai jis dhang se aap ne jazbon ko rang ataa kiya hai wo laaiqe sad salaam hai
mukhlis
masood hassaas
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8th October 2010, 11:34 AM
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aadaab
arabi zabaan ki kahaawathai ki baat to wahi hai jo mukhracar ho dil ko lagtee ho itnee taweel na ho ki ki uktaahat sawaar ho jaye
mujhe aisaa lagaa ki aap ne is micaal ko amali jaamah pahnaa ke ghazal ka roopde diyaa hai har sher se kaatib e tahreer ke kamaale fan ki jaanib ishaarah kartaa hai jis dhang se aap ne jazbon ko rang ataa kiya hai wo laaiqe sad salaam hai
mukhlis
masood hassaas
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ji aapka reply pada, padkar itna to samaj aaya ki aapko hamara kalam aacha laga hai, aapke likhe shabdo ko main puri there samaj nahi paai, itni urdu nahi aati hame.. anyways thanks for appreciate.
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
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8th October 2010, 11:40 AM
bahut khoob radhika ji..
last sher bahut pasand aaya...
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9th October 2010, 10:58 AM
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Ji .......................... Shukriya
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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9th October 2010, 01:46 PM
khubsurat ehsaas hai Radhika ji
keep sharing
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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9th October 2010, 03:32 PM
Radhika jii bhut hi khoob ehsaasoN se sajaaiii hai aapne ye takhleeq bhut si daad aapki khidmat mai hazir hai qubool keejiye
aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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12th October 2010, 03:10 PM
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bahut khoob radhika ji..
last sher bahut pasand aaya...
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya........................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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13th October 2010, 06:34 PM
You write very well Radhika jee. Keep writing.
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16th October 2010, 01:47 PM
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khubsurat ehsaas hai Radhika ji
keep sharing
Regards
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Ji .. shukriya hausla afzai ka ..........
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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20th October 2010, 02:56 PM
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Radhika jii bhut hi khoob ehsaasoN se sajaaiii hai aapne ye takhleeq bhut si daad aapki khidmat mai hazir hai qubool keejiye
aslam
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya......................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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26th October 2010, 09:30 AM
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You write very well Radhika jee. Keep writing.
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Ji .. Shukriya ...........................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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1st April 2011, 10:51 AM
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bahut khoob radhika ji..
last sher bahut pasand aaya...
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ji shukriya..................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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4th April 2011, 08:29 PM
Very WellExpressed!
Please keep writing...
God Bless
Sushil
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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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