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Kabhi Kabhi....late ho gaya.. -
17th June 2010, 01:36 PM
DostoN mere khiyaal se kuch 2 mahine pehle GTM ke lafz ka intekhaab hua tha... aur woh tha.. "kabhi kabhi" .... Afsos hai ke main waqt par haazir nahi ho payaa..lekin aap log iss Gazal ke Haqdaar hai tau bandaa haazir hai...aur Gazal bhi..
Kabhi Kabhi.... Hota huun isko dekh ke HairaaN kabhi kabhi, har Hadd ko paar karta hai insaaN kabhi kabhi. danaaN ki agar dekhi li galti hazaar tau, mudde ki baat karta hai nadaaN kabhi kabhi. *danaaN=wise, nadaan=foolish kyuN soch ki parwaaz nawaazi hai yaa Khuda, apna hi jism lagta hai zindaaN kabhi kabhi. *zindaaN=Cage/Prison satta mein saare chor luTeroN ki bhiD hai, dekho tau sarparasti-e-dehkaaN kabhi kabhi. *sarparast=Guardian, Sarparasti=Guardiance *DehkaaN=kisaan(Farmer) masrufiyat ne saath nibhaaya hai har kadam, dil chahta hai main rahUn tanhaa kabhi kabhi. Go gair mere rekhte ko laakh saraahe, "Talib" huun nukhtachiini-e-yaraaN kabhi kabhi. *rekhte=writings, *nukhtachiini=criticism *YaraaN=friends. Talib. |
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17th June 2010, 02:04 PM
talib sahab
kya baat hai kya baaat hai kuch kahte hi nahi ban raha hai apka maqta Go gair mere rekhte ko laakh saraahe, "Talib" huun nukhtachiini-e-yaraaN kabhi kabhi. ye to jaan hi nikaal gaya itni tight ghazal hai ke ek ek lafz baat kar raha hai hazaar daad ...sahab regards |
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17th June 2010, 02:19 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob saare hi ashar bahut sundar hai ek se badhkar ek...dil se daad hazir hai kubul karen....yun hi likhte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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19th June 2010, 04:19 PM
masrufiyat ne saath nibhaaya hai har kadam,
dil chahta hai main rahUn tanhaa kabhi kabhi. Go gair mere rekhte ko laakh saraahe, "Talib" huun nukhtachiini-e-yaraaN kabhi kabhi. MASHALLAH!!..... it's too good......aapki har tehreer ki tarah yeh bhi lajawaab hai Talib sahab.... Yuhi mehfil raushan kiya kijiye.......  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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19th June 2010, 06:19 PM
kyuN soch ki parwaaz nawaazi hai yaa Khuda,
apna hi jism lagta hai zindaaN kabhi kabhi. Nice One ......... Talib Sahab ! Bahut Khoob !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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19th June 2010, 08:10 PM
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bahut kam padhne ko milta hai aisa kuchh, ki har sher, har misre aur har lafz pe sirf aur sirf waah..! nikle..... maza aa gaya padh kar.... soch raha hooN ki kya keh kar daad dooN...lekin soch ne saath chhod diya... danaaN ki agar dekhi li galti hazaar tau, mudde ki baat karta hai nadaaN kabhi kabhi. yeh to kamaal hi hai ba's.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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22nd June 2010, 10:48 PM
Zidd saaheb adaab...
Bohot bohot shukriya aapka.. maqte ko iss kadar pasand farmaane ke liye..khush rahein aap aur aap ke apne..ek baar phir bohot shukriya.. Talib. |
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22nd June 2010, 10:53 PM
Janaab IshQ saheb..
aapko ghazal pasand aayee.. isee baat se dil raadhe raahe karne lagaa..aapka bohot shukriya..sarkaar..apna khayaal rakhiyega Talib. |
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22nd June 2010, 10:56 PM
Zainy Jee.. namashkaar..
Ghazal pasand karne ke liye shukriya aur GTM ke invitation ke liye bhi shukriya.. iss baar kuch likh payaa huun lekin mukammal nahi hai kal parsoN aapko PM ke zariye bhej doonga..filhaal chalta hoon..duaoN ke saath. Talib. |
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22nd June 2010, 10:58 PM
Naresh bhai..Salaam,
Yeh sher mera bhi pasandeeda hai iss ghazal mein..shukriya hum-khayaal hone ke liye.. Talib. |
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22nd June 2010, 11:03 PM
Vikram bhai namaste,
Aap ka signature bohot solid hai.. aapke signature se Sir Iqbal ka ek sher yaad ataa hai.. Jiss khet se dehkaaN ko mayassar na ho rozi, uss khet ke harr gosha-e-gandam ko jalaa do. aapko ghazal pasand aayee samjho likhne ki wajah bani rahegi..filhaal chaltaa hoon. Talib. |
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22nd June 2010, 11:56 PM
Talib sahab aadaaB!
Bahut umdaa bahut achchi gazal kahi hai aapne......... matle se maqte tak aapne jo bandhe rakha bahut achcha laga aapki is kalaam ko padhker...... har sher per dil se daad sahab....... Kisi ek sher ko khususan pasand hi naih kar saka sabhi sher umdaa hai.... Behad shayarana rahi aapki yeh gazal..... dil se daad hazir hai sahab aise hi kalaamoN ke saath bazm mein aate rahiye...... Khush rahiye........ Khuda Hafez....... 
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23rd June 2010, 01:04 AM
Talib saaheb, hamaara salaam qubuul keejiye aur saath me ek achchhee gazal ke liye mubaarak baad bhee.
ye sher to behad pasand aaye! Hota huun isko dekh ke HairaaN kabhi kabhi, har Hadd ko paar karta hai insaaN kabhi kabhi. masrufiyat ne saath nibhaaya hai har kadam, dil chahta hai main rahUn tanhaa kabhi kabhi. Go gair mere rekhte ko laakh saraahe, "Talib" huun nukhtachiini-e-yaraaN kabhi kabhi. aap bahut achchaa likhte haiN! aur bhi padhne kee tamanna rahegee. Arun BeKhabar |
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23rd June 2010, 12:06 PM
talib sahab ko mera salaam,
ek bahut hi umda aur gathi hui ghazal kahi hai aapne aur saath hi aaj ke mahaul se v ru-ba-ru karaaya hai,umeed karta huN ki aap aage v hume aisi nayaab peshkashoN se nawaajte raheNge....!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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23rd June 2010, 05:06 PM
Talib jee:
namaste! aik naGhz Ghazal ! mazaa aa gayaa paRh ke.. behterin KhayaaloN ko peSh kartee hu'ii aapki ees Ghazal ke liye tah-e-dil se daad-o-mubaaraqbaad! yeh Sher mujhe bahot hi pasand aayaa Quote:
yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n...KhuSh rahe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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24th June 2010, 10:13 AM
kyuN soch ki parwaaz nawaazi hai yaa Khuda,
apna hi jism lagta hai zindaaN kabhi kabhi. jabadast talib bhayee jaan behad ......... khoobsurat adyagi, aur behad bareek khayal |
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30th June 2010, 12:16 AM
Khwahish Ji Adaab,
Aapko meri koshish pasand aayee jaankar chingaari ko hawaa mill gayee..aapka shukriya iss kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye. Phir milenge..Dua go. Talib. |
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30th June 2010, 12:18 AM
Arun Bhai Namaste,
Behad khushi huee aapko yahaN dekh kar...ummeed hai aap ba-khair honge..? Ghazal pasand karne ke liye shukriya saheb...filhaal ijaazat.. Talib. |
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30th June 2010, 12:23 AM
Ghayal ji Adaab,
Dil se aapne daad di aur maine dil se qubool ki.Aap ki nazr-e-karam se mamnon hoon. ummeed hai aage bhi inaayat rahegi..Apna khayaal rakhiyega. Talib. |
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30th June 2010, 12:27 AM
Dhaval Saaheb.Jai Sri Krisna..
Aap ko koi sher pasand aa gaya samjho ghazal kaamyaab huyee.. bohot bohot shukriya sarkaar zarra nawaazi ka....ek aur sher hai masrufiyat parr hi.. aiss kuch hai ke.. Masrufiyat ne mujhko sikhaaya hai aaj tak, Gar kaam na ho kaam dhundh kar diya karo....LoL.. gtg now.. u tk cr.. Talib. |
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30th June 2010, 12:30 AM
janaab janumanu Ji,
Bariik khayaal ko pehchaan liya aapne.. isske liye bareek nazar aur naazuk dil ki zaroorat hoti hai..aur aap uss ke malik hai.. daad aur izzat afzaayee ka boht bohot shukriya...ummeed hai raabta qayam rahega..Chaltaa hoon. Talib. |
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30th June 2010, 02:29 PM
Wah wah talib bhai!
Bahut bahut umda... Hamesha ki tarha... Regards Sushil इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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9th July 2010, 03:48 PM
Sushil bhai..Salaam,
bhaijaan hain kahaan aap aaj kal..? nazar nahi aate... ummeed hai sab khairiyat se hoga..Aapki daad ka shukriya sarkaar..apna khayaal rakhiyega..filhaal ijaazat..Adaab. Talib. |
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